最新詩篇新譯(V)-4
卷五 第131-132篇
131. 心如嬰孩
大衛上行之詩(大衛朝聖之歌)
1 耶和華啊! 我的心不驕傲, My heart is not proud, O Lord,
我的眼也不自高. my eyes are not haughty;
重大和太神奇的事, I do not concern myself with great matters
我一點也不敢碰觸. or things too wonderful for me.
2 我的內心平靜安穩, But I have stilled and quieted my soul;
像躺在母親懷中斷奶的嬰兒, like a weaned child with its mother,
我心在我裏面就像斷奶嬰兒. like a weaned child is my soul within me.
3 以色列啊! 你要仰望耶和華, O Isreal, put your hope in the Lord
從今時直到永遠! both now and forevermore.
註解:
1 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
"驕傲" 較 "平實" / "自高" 較 "高大" 雅達.
things too wonderful 應譯 "太神奇的事".
2 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
3 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
132. 賜福聖所
上行之詩(朝聖之歌)
1 耶和華啊! 求你記念大衛, O Lord, remember David
和他所受的一切苦難. and all the hardship he endured.
2 他曾經向耶和華起過誓, He swore an oath to the Lord
向雅各的大能者許過願, and make a vow to the Mighty One of Jacob:
3 說: "我決不進我的家, "I will not enter my house
也不上我的床. or go to my bed -
4 我不讓我的眼睛睡覺, I will allow no sleep to my eyes,
也不讓我的眼瞼打盹. no slumber to my eyelids,
5 直到我為耶和華找到地方, till I find a place for the Lord,
為雅各的大能者尋得居所." a dwelling for the Mighty One of Jacob."
6 我們聽說約櫃在以法他, We heard it in Ephrathah,
在基列耶琳田野找到了: we came upon it in the fields of Jaar:
7 "讓我們進入衪的居所, "Let us go to his dwelling place;
在衪的腳凳之前下拜. let us worship at his footstool -
8 耶和華啊! 求你起來; arise, O Lord,
讓你和滿有你大能的約櫃, and come to your resting place,
一同榮耀進入你安息之所. you and the ark of your might.
9 願你的祭司披上公義之袍, May your priests be clothed with righteousness;
你的聖民都同聲歡欣歌唱." may your saints sing for joy."
10 求你為你僕人大衛的緣故, For the sake of David your servant,
千祈不要厭棄你的受膏者. do not reject your anointed one.
11 耶和華真誠向大衛 The Lord swore an oath to David,
起過絕不反悔的誓, a sure oath that he will not revoke;
說: "我要從你的後裔之中, "One of your own descendants
立一位坐在你王位上. I will place on your throne -
12 你的子孫若遵守我的約, If your sons keep
以及我教導他們的法度, my covenant and the statutes I teach them,
他們的子孫必永遠 then their sons will sit
安坐在你的王位上." on your throne for ever and ever."
13 因為耶和華揀選錫安, For the Lord has chosen Zion,
作為自己所要的居所, he has desired it for his dwelling:
14 說: "這是我永遠安息之所, "This is my resting place for ever and ever;
我在此坐上我所要的寶座. here I will sit enthroned, for I have desired it -
15 我要賜給錫安豐盛的糧食, I will bless her with abundant provisions;
使城中的窮人都得到飽足. her poor will I satisfy with food.
16 我要為祭司披上救恩之袍, I will clothe her priests with salvation ,
讓她的聖民齊聲歡欣歌唱. and her saints will ever sing for joy.
17 我要在這裏為大衛長角, Here I will make a horn grow for David
為我的受膏者點起明燈. and set up a lamp for my anointed one.
18 我要使他的仇敵披上羞辱, I will clothe his enemies with shame,
使他頭上的冠冕發出光芒." but the crown on his head will be resplendent."
註解:
1 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 10 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
2 原譯語氣有誤, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯. 11 原譯甚佳.
英文本無 "怎樣" 一詞. 12 原譯西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯.
3 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. will not revoke 譯 "絕不反悔" 較 "必不反覆" 達意.
"我的家"較"我的帳幕"/"我的床"較"我的床榻" 恰切. descendants 譯 "後裔" 較 "所生的" 雅達.
4 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 13 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
5 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正, 使更工整. your sons 譯 "你的子孫" 較 "你的眾子" 雅達.
a place 譯 "地方" 較 "所在" 達意. 14 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
6 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 未將 "desired(所要的)" 譯出, 應補上.
"找到了" 較原譯 "就尋見了" 簡潔有力. 15 原譯有誤, 且西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯.
7 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 第2句誤譯, 應修正改譯如左.
"Let us…(讓我們)"語氣未譯出, 16 原譯欠通順, 應修正改譯.
8 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 17 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
arise 譯 "起來" 較 "興起" 通俗達意. 本節 her 指錫安城, 原譯 "其中" 語意不清.
the ark of your might 應譯 "滿有你大能的約櫃" 本節呼應第9節, 應作同樣修正.
9 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 18 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
sing for joy 譯 "歡欣歌唱" 較 "歡呼" 切合原意. will be resplendent 譯 "發出光芒" 較 "發光" 達意.
133. 和睦同心
大衛上行之詩(大衛朝聖之歌)
1 看哪! 弟兄和睦同心, How good and pleasant it is
是何等的善! 何等的美! when brothers live together in unity!
2 這好比珍貴的膏油 It is like precious oil poured on the head,
澆在亞倫頭上, running down on the beard,
流到他的鬍鬚, running down on Aaron's beard,
再流到他的袍領上. down upon the collar of his robes.
3 又好比黑門的甘露, It is as if the dew of Hermon
普降在錫安山. were falling on Mount Zion.
因為那裏有耶和華賜下的福, For there the Lord bestows his blessing,
甚至永遠的生命. even life forevermore.
註解:
1 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 3 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
in unity 譯 "同心" 較 "同居" 切合原意. bestows his blessing 譯 "賜下的福"
2 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 較 "所命定的福" 通俗易解.
precious oil 譯 "珍貴的膏油" 較 "貴重的油" 雅達.
the collar 譯 "袍領" 較 "衣襟" 切合原意.
134. 夜侍聖殿 P134
上行之詩(朝聖之歌)
1 所有在耶和華殿中 Praise the Lord,
夜間服侍的主僕, all you servants of the Lord
你們都要讚美耶和華! who minister by night in the house of the Lord.
2 你們要在聖所高舉雙手, Lift up your hands in the sanctuary
讚美耶和華! and praise the Lord.
3 願創造天地的耶和華, May the Lord, the Maker of heaven and earth,
從錫安賜福給你們! bless you from Zion.
註解:
1 原譯西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯.
2 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
3 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
135. 神的權能
1 你們要讚美耶和華! Praise the Lord.
你們要讚美耶和華的名! Praise the name of the Lord;
2 耶和華的僕人啊! praise him,
你們在耶和華殿中和 you servants of the Lord,
在神殿的院裏服侍時, you who minister in the house of the Lord,
都要讚美耶和華! in the courts of the house of our God.
3 你們要讚美耶和華! 因耶和華美善; Praise the Lord, for the Lord is good;
你們要歌頌耶和華! 因衪的名美好. sing praise to his name, for that is pleasant.
4 因耶和華揀選雅各歸給自己, For the Lord has chosen Jacob to be his own,
揀選以色列作自己珍貴子民. Isreal to be his treasured possession.
5 我知道耶和華至偉至大, I know that Lord is great,
也知道我們神超越萬神. that our God is greater than all gods.
6 耶和華在天上地下, The Lord does whatever pleases him,
以及在海中的深洋; in the heavens and on the earth,
都隨自己旨意行事. in the seas and their depths.
7 衪使雲從地極上騰, He makes clouds rise from the ends of the earth;
發出閃電大雨滂沱, he sends lightning with the rain
從府庫中吹出大風. and brings out the wind from his storehouses.
8 衪把埃及地頭生的, He struck down the firstborn of Egypt,
無論人畜一律擊殺. the first born of men and animals.
9 埃及啊! He sent his signs and wonders into your midst,
衪在你們中行神蹟奇事, O Egypt,
去對付法老和他的臣僕. against Pharaoh and all his servants.
10 衪推翻很多邦國, He struck down many nations
也擊殺許多君王: and killed mighty kings -
11 如亞摩利王西宏, Sihon king of the Amorites,
和巴珊王噩, Og king of Bashan
以及所有迦南的王. and all the kings of Canaan -
12 然後衪將他們的地 and he gave their land as an inheritance,
賞賜給衪的子民以色列為業. an inheritance to his people Isreal.
13 耶和華啊, 你的聖名存到永遠! Your name, O Lord, endures forever,
耶和華啊, 你的美譽存到萬代! your renown, O Lord, through all generations.
14 因耶和華要為衪的子民申冤, For the Lord will vindicate his people
也要向衪的僕人施恩. and have compassion on his servants.
15 外邦偶像都是金打銀造, The idols of the nations are silver and gold,
全是人手造的; made by the hands of men.
16 有口卻不能言, They have mouths, but cannot speak,
有眼卻不能看, eyes, but they cannot see;
17 有耳卻不能聽, They have ears, but cannot hear,
口中沒有氣息. nor is there breath in their mouths.
18 造偶像的和偶像一樣, Those who make them will be like them,
依靠偶像的也都如此. and so will all who trust in them.
19 以色列家啊, 你們要讚美耶和華! O house of Isreal, praise the Lord;
亞倫家啊, 你們要讚美耶和華! O house of Aaron, praise the Lord;
20 利未家啊, 你們要讚美耶和華! O house of Levi, praise the Lord;
凡敬畏衪的, 都要讚美耶和華! you who fear him, praise the Lord;
21 你們要讚美從錫安而來 Praise be to the Lord from Zion,
住在耶路撒冷的耶和華! to him who dwells in Jerusalem.
註解:
1 原譯甚佳. 10 原譯有誤, 且欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
2 原譯有誤, 且欠通順, 應修正如新譯. nations 應譯 "邦國" 非 "民"
第2句漏譯,應補正. 11 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
3 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 12 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
4 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 13 原譯欠通順, 應修正改譯.
5 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. renown 譯 "美譽" 較 "可紀念的名" 雅達.
6 原譯欠通順, 應修正改譯. 14 原譯有誤, 應修正如新譯.
depths 譯 "深洋" 較 "深處" 切合原意. compassion 應譯 "施恩" 非 "後悔"
7 原譯欠通順, 應修正改譯. 15-18 第15-18節譯文, 應與 115:4-8 譯文一致.
8 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 19 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
9 原譯西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯. 20 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
21 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
136. 慈愛永存
1 你們要感謝耶和華, 因衪美善; Give thanks to the Lord, for he is good.
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
2 你們要感謝萬神之神, Give thanks to the God of gods.
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
3 你們要感謝萬主之主, Give thanks to the Lord of Lords:
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
4 感謝那獨行大奇事的, to him who alone does great wonders,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
5 感謝那用智慧造天的, who by his understanding made his heavens,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
6 感謝那把地鋪水上的, who spread out the earth upon the waters,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
7 感謝那大能造大光的, who made the great lights -
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
8 感謝那造日管白晝的, the sun to govern the day,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
9 感謝那造月星管夜的, the moon and stars to govern the night.
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
10 你們要感謝那擊殺埃及人長子的, to him who struck the firstborn of Egypt
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
11 感謝那領以色列人從他們中間出來的, and brought Isreal out from among them
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
12 感謝那伸大能的手和強力膀臂的, with a mighty hand and understanding arm;
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
13 你們要感謝那分開紅海的, to him who divided the Red Sea asunder
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
14 感謝那領以色列人從其中走過的, and brought Isreal through the midst of it,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
15 感謝那把法老和他的大軍淹滅紅海的, but swept Pharaoh and his army
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
16 你們要感謝那帶領自己子民走過曠野的, to him who led his people through the desert,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
17 感謝那擊殺大君王的, who struck down great kings,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
18 感謝那擊殺強悍王的, and killed mighty kings -
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
19 如亞摩利王西宏, Sihon king of Amorites
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
20 巴珊王噩, and Og king of Bashan -
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
21 感謝那將他們的地賜給衪子民為業的, and gave their land as an inheritance,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
22 就是那賜給衪僕人以色列為業的, an inheritane to his servant Isreal;
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
23 你們要感謝那在我們卑微時不忘我們的, to the One who remembered us in our low estate
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
24 感謝那解救我們脫離敵人的, and freed us from our enemies,
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
25 感謝那賜糧食給世人的, and who gives food to every creature.
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
26 你們要感謝天上的神, Give thanks to the God of heaven.
因衪的慈愛永遠長存! His love endures forever.
註解:
1 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 15 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
2 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 16 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
3 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 17 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
4 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 18 原譯有誤, 應修正改譯.
5 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. mighty 應譯 "強悍" 非 "有名"
6 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 19 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
7 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 20 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
8 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 21 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
sun 譯 "日" 較 "日頭" 雅達. 22 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
9 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 23 原譯欠通順, 應修正改譯.
10 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 24 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
11 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 25 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
12 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. creature 譯 "世人" 較 "凡有血氣的" 雅達.
13 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 26 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
14 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
137. 向神哀求
1 我們坐在巴比倫河畔, By the rivers of Babylon we sat and wept
一想起錫安就痛哭. when we remembered Zion.
2 我們把心愛的弦琴 There on the poplars
掛在那裏的柳樹上. we hung our harp,
3 因在那裏, 俘虜我們的要我們歌唱, for there our captors asked us for songs,
逼害我們的要我們唱歡樂之歌, our tormentors demanded song of joy;
說: "給我們唱一首錫安之歌吧!" they said, "Sing us one of the songs of Zion!"
4 我們身在外邦怎能 How can we sing the songs of the Lord
唱耶和華之歌呢? while in a foreign land?
5 耶路撒冷啊! 我若忘記你, If I forget you, O Jerusalem,
就讓我的右手忘了彈琴技巧; may my right hand forget its skill.
6 我若不記得你, May my tongue cling to the roof of my mouth
不認為耶路撒冷是我最大喜樂; if I do not remember you,
就讓我的舌頭緊貼我的上膛吧! if I do not consider Jerusalem my highest joy.
7 耶和華啊! Remember, O Lord, what the Edomites did
求你毋忘耶路撒冷淪陷之日, on the day Jerusalem fell.
以東人所作所為, 他們高喊: "Tear it down," they cried,
"拆毀它! 拆毀它! 徹底拆毀它!" "tear it down to its foundations!"
8-9 註定要毀滅的巴比倫啊! O Daughter of Babylon, doomed to destruction,
依照你們惡行報應你們, happy is he who repay you for what you have done to us -
把你們的嬰孩往石上摔, he who seizes your infants
該多麼痛快啊! and dashes them against the rocks.
註解:
1 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 4 原譯甚佳.
2 原譯甚佳. 5 原譯甚佳.
3 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯. 6 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
captors 譯 "俘虜我們的" 較 "擄掠我們的" 達意. 7 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
tormentors 應譯 "逼害我們的" 非 "搶奪我們的" 8,9 原譯有誤, 且西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯.
138. 神的信實
大衛的詩
1 耶和華啊! 我要一心讚美你; I will praise you, O Lord, with all my heart;
在"諸神"面前歌頌你. before the "gods" I will sing your praise.
2 我要向你的聖殿下拜, I will bow down toward your holy temple
為你的慈愛信實讚美你的名; and will praise your name for your love and your fithfulness,
因你的名和你的話超越一切. for you have exalted above all things your name and your word.
3 我一呼求你就回應; When I called, you answered me;
使我剛強心中有力. you made me bold and stouthearted.
4 耶和華啊! May all the kings of the earth praise you,
願地上君王聽見你口中話, O Lord,
都讚美你. when they hear the words of your mouth.
5 願他們都歌頌耶和華的道, May they sing of the ways of the Lord,
因耶和華大有榮耀. for the glory of the Lord is great.
6 耶和華雖高高在上, Though the Lord is on high,
仍然看顧卑微的人; he looks upon the lowly,
老遠認出驕傲的人. but the proud he knows from afar.
7 我雖身處患難之中, Though I walk in the midst of trouble,
你仍憐憫使我存活; you preserve my life;
你伸手打擊向我發怒的仇敵, you stretch out your hand against the anger of my foes,
用你的右手拯救我. with your right hand you save me.
8 耶和華必為我成全衪的旨意, The Lord will fulfill his purpose for me;
耶和華啊, 你的慈愛永遠長存! your love, O Lord, endures forever -
求你不要離棄你手所作的工. do not abandon the works of your hands.
註解:
1 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 6 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
2 原譯有誤, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯. on high 譯 "雖高高在上" 較 "雖高" 雅達.
第3句誤譯, 應修正改譯如左. 7 原譯有誤, 且西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯.
3 原譯欠工整, 西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯. 第3,4句誤譯, 應修正改譯如新譯.
4 原譯西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯. 8 原譯西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯.
5 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
the ways 譯 "道" 較 "作為" 切合原意.
139. 神的全知
大衛的詩, 交詩班長
1 耶和華啊! O Lord, you have searched me
你鑒察過我也了解我. and you know me.
2 我坐下, 我起來, 你都知道; You know when I sit and when I rise;
你從遠處就看透我的意念. you perceive my thoughts from afar.
3 我行走, 我躺臥, 你都細察; You discern my going and my lying down;
你深知我的一切所作所為. you are familiar with all my ways.
4 耶和華啊! 我舌頭上的話還沒說出, Before a word is on my tongue
你就完全清楚知道了. you know it completely, O Lord.
5 你前後擁抱我, You hem me in - behind and before;
按手在我身上. you have laid your hand upon me.
6 這種體驗, 對我而言, Such knowledge is too wonderful for me,
神妙莫測, 崇高莫及. too lofty for me to attain.
7 我到那裏去躲你的靈? Where can I go from your spirit?
往那裏去逃避你的面? Where can I flee from your presence?
8 我若上到高天, 你就在那裏; If I go up to the heavens, you are there;
我若下榻陰間, 你也在那裏. if I make my bed in the depths, you are there.
9 我若展開清晨翅膀, If I rise on the wings of the dawn,
飛到海的極處居住; if I settle on the far side of the sea,
10 就在那裏, 你的手會引導我; even there your hand will guide me,
你的右手也會緊扶我. your right hand will hold me fast.
11 我若說: "黑暗確能遮掩我, If I say, "Surely the darkness will hide me
讓四周的亮光變成黑暗." and the light become night around me,"
12 即使黑暗對你並不黑暗; even in the darkness will not be dark to you;
黑夜必如白晝發出亮光. the night will shine like the day,
在你看來黑暗如同光明. for darkness is as light to you.
13 我的五臟六腑都是你造的, For you created my inmost being;
我在母腹中你就塑造了我. you knit me together in my mother's womb.
14 我要讚美你! I praise you because I am fearfully and
因我受造非常奇妙可畏; wonderfully made;
你所作的工真是太奇妙, your works are wonderful,
這一點我是深深知道的. I know that full well.
15 即使我在隱秘之處被造, My frame was not hidden from you
並在地的深處漸漸塑成; when I was made in the secret place.
我的形體也難向你隱藏. When I was woven together in the depths of the earth,
16 我那未成形的身體, your eyes saw my unformed body.
你早就親眼看見了; All the days ordained for me
為我所定的日子, 一日還未度過, were written in your book
就全記在你冊上了. before one of them came to be.
17 神啊, 你的旨意對我何等珍貴! How precious to me are your thoughts, O God!
數目總和何其眾多! How vast is the sum of them!
18 我若點數, 比海邊沙更多. Were I to count them, they would outnumber the grains of sand.
夢醒時份, 你仍與我同在. When I awake, I am still with you.
19 神啊! 若只有你才能殺戮惡人, If only you would slay the wicked , O God!
嗜血的人啊, 離開我吧! Away from me, you bloodthirsty men!
20 他們惡言詆譭褻瀆你, They speak of you with evil intent;
你的仇敵也妄稱你名. your adversaries misuse your name.
21 耶和華啊! Do I not hate those who hate you,
恨惡你的, 我怎能不恨惡他們呢? O Lord,
攻擊你的, 我怎能不憎惡他們呢? and abhor those who rise up against you?
22 我恨透他們, I have nothing but hatred for them;
以他們為敵. I count them my enemies.
23 神啊! 你鑒察我, 知道我的心思; Search me, O Lord, and know my heart;
試煉我, 知道我的意念. test me and know my anxious thoughts.
24 看看我裏面有無惡行, See if there is any offensive way in me,
好引導我走永恆的路. and lead me in the way everlasting.
註解:
1 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯. 13 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
know 譯 "了解" 較 "認識" 切合原意. knit together 譯 "塑造" 較 "覆庇" 切合原意.
2 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 14 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
perceive 譯 "看透" 較 "知道" 切合原意. 15 原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯.
3 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 16 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
4 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 17 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
5 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 18 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
6 原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順工整, 應加修正如新譯. 19 原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯.
7 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 20 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
8 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 21 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
9 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 22 原譯欠通順工整, 應修正如新譯.
10 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. nothing but hatred 譯 "恨透" 較 "切切地恨惡" 達意.
11 原譯有誤, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯. 23 原譯甚佳.
12 原譯西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯. 24 原譯甚佳.
140. 脫離惡人
大衛的詩, 交詩班長
1 耶和華啊! 求你拯救我脫離惡人, Rescue me, O Lord, from evil men;
並保護我遠離暴徒. protect me from men of violence,
2 他們心中圖謀不軌, who devise evil plans in their hearts
整天都在挑啟爭戰. and stir up war every day.
3 他們舌鋒利如蟒舌, They make their tongues as sharp as a serpent's;
唇滿是毒蛇的毒液. 細拉 the poison of vipers is on their lips. Selah
4 耶和華啊! 求你使我脫離惡人手, Keep me, O Lord, from the hands of the wicked;
並保護我遠離暴徒; protect me from men of violence
因他們圖謀推倒我. who plan to trip my feet.
5 驕傲者為我設暗網, proud men have hidden a snare for me;
他們撒開了大網索, they have spread out the cords of their net
在我路上佈下陷阱. 細拉 and have set traps for me along my path. Selah
6 我對耶和華說: "你是我的神." O Lord, I say to you, "you are my God."
耶和華啊! 求你傾聽我呼求憐憫. Hear, O Lord, my cry for mercy.
7 主耶和華, 我大能的拯救者啊! O Sovereign Lord, my strong deliverer,
在征戰之日, 你用盾牌保護我的頭. who shields my head in the day of battle -
8 耶和華啊! 求你不要讓惡人得逞, do not grant the wicked their desires, O Lord;
不要讓他們的計謀成功, do not let their plans succeed,
免得他們狂妄驕傲自大. 細拉 or they will become pround. Selah
9 願那些在四處圍困我的人, Let the heads of those who surround me
頭被自己口舌作的孽遮蓋. be covered with the trouble their lips have caused.
10 願熾熱炭火落在他們身上; Let burning coals fall upon them;
他們都被丟入熊熊烈火中, may they be thrown into the fire,
並且拋入泥潭中永不翻身. into miry pits, never to rise.
11 願中傷我的人都無地自容, Let slanderers not be established in the land;
災難禍患獵殺凶殘的暴徒. may disaster hunt down men of violence.
12 我知道耶和華為困苦的人申冤, I know that the Lord secures justice for the poor
也為貧窮的人辯屈. and upholds the cause of the needy.
13 義人必讚美你的名, Surely the righteous will praise your name
正人在你面前安居. and the upright will live before you.
註解:
1 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 7 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
2 原譯有誤, 應加修正如新譯. 8 原譯欠通順, 應修正如新譯.
stir up 應譯 "挑啟" 非 "常常聚集" proud 譯 "驕傲自大" 較 "自高" 達意.
3 原譯有誤, 且西式語氣太重, 應加修正如新譯. 9 原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯.
4 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 10 原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯.
5 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 11 原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應加修正如新譯.
6 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可. 12 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.
cry for mercy 譯 "呼求憐憫" 較 "懇求" 達意. 13 原譯尚佳 ,稍加修正即可.