荒漠甘泉經文新譯(6)
                            (Streams in the Desert)

Jun 1   經文: 賽28:12直譯
            新譯: 他對他們說: "這是安息之地, 讓疲乏的人安息, 這也是安眠之地."
                      但他們都不聽.
            原譯: 他曾對他們說: "你們要使疲乏人得安息, 這樣才得安息, 才得舒暢."
                      他們不肯聽.
            直譯: 你們要使疲乏人得安息: 這纔是安息, 纔是舒暢.
            英文: to whom he said, "This is the resting place, let weary rest,"
                      and, "This is the place of repose." - but they would not listen.
            附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 2   經文: 羅4:18-19
      新譯: 原譯甚佳
      原譯: 他在無可指望的時候, 因信仍有指望, 就得作多國之父, 正如先前所說: "你的後裔
                將要如此." 他將近百歲的時候, 雖然想到自己的身體如同已死, 撒拉的生育實已經
                斷絕, 他的信心還是不軟弱.
      英文: Against all hope, Abraham in hope believed and so became the father of many nations,
                just as it had been said to him, "So shall your offsprings be." Without weakening
                in his faith, he faced the fact that his body was as good as dead - since he was about
                a hundred years old - and that Sarah's womb was also dead.
      附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 3   經文: 可4:35
      新譯: 原譯甚佳
      原譯: 當那天晚上, 耶穌對門徒說: "我們渡到那邊去吧."
      英文: That day when evening came, he said to his disciples,
             "Let us go over to the other side."
      附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

                                      詩篇譯文瑕疵剖析(V)
                                                 81-100

81.   60:4 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 你為敬畏你的人高舉旌旗;
                  並且展開大旗去抵擋弓箭.
        原譯: 你把旌旗賜給敬畏你的人,
                  可以為真理揚起來.
        英文: But for those who fear you, you have raised a banner
                  to be unfurled against the bow.
        說明: 1. have raised 應譯 "高舉" 非 "賜給"
                  2. to be unfurled against the bow
                        應譯 "展開大旗去抵擋弓箭" 非 "為真理揚起來"

82.   60:6 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 神在自己的聖所宣示:
                "在得勝中, 我要分割示劍,
                 丈量疏割谷.
        原譯: 神已經指著他的聖潔說:
                "我要歡樂, 我要分開示劍,
                  丈量疏割谷.
        英文: God has spoken from his sanctuary:
                 "In triumph I will parcel out Shechem
                  and measure off the Valley of Succoth.
        說明: 1. God has spoken from his sanctuary
                     應譯 "神在自己的聖所宣示" 非 "神已經指著他的聖潔說"
                  2. In triumph 應譯 "在得勝中" 非 "我要歡樂"

83.   62:1-2 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 在神裏面我心才得安息;
                  因我的救恩是從祂而來.
                  只有祂是我的磬石我的拯救;
                  祂是我的堡壘我必永不動搖.
        原譯: 我的心默默無聲, 專等候神;
                  我的救恩是從他而來.
                  惟獨他是我的磬石, 我的拯救;
                  他是我的高臺, 我必不很動搖.
         英文: My soul finds rest in God alone;
                   my salvation comes from him.
                   He alone is my rock and my salvation;
                   he is my fortress, I will never be shaken.
         說明: 1. My soul finds rest in God alone
                       應譯 "在神裏面我心才得安息" 非 "我的心默默無聲, 專等候神"
                   2. he is my fortress, I will never be shaken
                         應譯 "祂是我的堡壘我必永不動搖" 非 "他是我的高臺, 我必不很動搖"

84.   62:3-4 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 3 你們攻擊人要到幾時?
                     你們要一起把他摔倒,
                     像去推倒斜牆破壁嗎?
                  4 他們一心一意企圖,
                       把他從高位拉下來;
                       他們全都愛說謊言,
                       口雖祝福心卻咒詛.
        原譯: 3 你們大家攻擊一人, 把他毀壞,
                     如同毀壞歪斜的牆, 將倒的壁,
                     要到幾時呢?
                  4 他們彼此商議,
                       專要從他的尊位上把他推下;
                       他們喜愛謊話,
                       口雖祝福, 心卻咒詛.
         英文: 3 How long will you assault a man?
                    Would all of you throw him down -
                    this leaning wall, this tottering fence?
                   4 They fully intend to topple him from his lofty place;
                        they take delight in lies.
                        With their mouth they bless,
                        but in their hearts they curse.
          說明: 1. 第3節應改譯如新譯, 較簡潔通順工整, 切合原意.
                        this leaning wall, this totteriing fence
                        譯 "斜牆破壁" 較 "毀壞歪斜的牆, 將倒的壁" 簡明雅達.
                   2. 第4節應改譯如新譯, 較簡潔通順工整, 切合原意.
                         fully intend 譯 "一心一悥企圖" 較 "彼此商議" 切合原意.

85.   62:9-10 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 下流人只是口氣,
                  上流人也是虛空;
                  放在天平如無物,
                  加起來比氣還輕.
                  不要依靠搶來財寶,
                  不要炫耀偷來贓物;
                  財富雖增勿迷心竅.
        原譯: 下流人真是虛空,
                  上流人也是虛徦;
                  放在天平裏就必浮起,
                  他們一共比空氣還輕.
                  不要仗勢欺人,
                  也不要因搶奪而驕傲;
                  若財寶加增, 不要放在心上.
        英文: Lowborn men are but a breath;
                  the highborn are but a lie;
                  if weighed on a balance, they are nothing;
                  together they are only a breath.
                  Do not trust in extortion
                  or take pride in stolen goods;
                  though your riches increase, do not set your heart on them.
          說明: 1. but a breath 應譯 "只是口氣" 非 "真是虛空"
                    2. if weighed on a balance, they are nothing;
                          應譯 "放在天平如無物" 非 "放在天平裏就必浮起"
                    3. together they are only a breath
                          譯 "加起來比氣還輕" 較 "他們一共比空氣還輕" 恰切.
                    4. Do not trust in extortion
                          譯 "不要炫耀偷來贓物" 較 "也不要因搶奪而驕傲" 恰切.
                    5. do not set your heart on them
                          譯 "勿迷心竅" 較 "不要放在心上" 雅達.

86.   62:11-12 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 神說了一件事,
                  我聽到二件事;
                  神啊, 你大有能力!
                  主啊, 你大有慈愛!
                  你必照各人所行報應人.
         原譯: 神說了一次、兩次,
                   我都聽見,
                   就是能力都屬乎神.
                   主啊, 慈愛也是屬乎你,
                   因為你照著各人所行的報應他.
          英文: One thing God has spoken,
                    two things have I heard:
                    that you, O God, are strong,
                    and that you, O Lord, are loving.
                    Surely you will reward each person according to what he has done.
           說明: 1. One thing God has spoken, two things have I heard
                         應譯 "神說了一件事, 我聽到二件事" 非 "神說了一次、兩次, 我都聽見"
                     2. that you, O God, are strong, and that you, O Lord, are loving
                           應譯 "神啊, 你大有能力! 主啊, 你大有慈愛!"
                              非 "就是能力都屬乎神. 主啊, 慈愛也是屬乎你"
                     3. Surely you will reward each person according to what he has done
                            譯 "你必照各人所行報應人" 較 "因為你照著各人所行的報應他" 簡潔有力.

87.   64:3-4 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 他們磨舌如利劍,
                  開口出言如毒箭.
                  他們埋伏暗射無辜的人,
                  趁人不備發箭毫不愧怯.
        原譯: 他們磨舌如刀, 發出苦毒的言語,
                  好像比準了的箭.
                  要在暗地射完全人.
                  他們忽然射他, 並不懼怕.
        英文: They sharpen their tongues like swords
                  and aim their words like deadly arrows.
                  They shoot from ambush at the innocent man;
                  they shoot at him suddenly, without fear.
         說明: 1. and aim their words like deadly arrows.
                       應譯 "開口出言如毒箭" 非 "好像比準了的箭"
                  2. They shoot from ambush at the innocent man
                        應譯 "他們埋伏暗射無辜的人" 非 "要在暗地射完全人"
                  3. they shoot at him suddenly, without fear
                        應譯 "趁人不備發箭毫不愧怯" 非 "他們忽然射他, 並不懼怕"

88.   64:5-6 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 他們彼此鼓勵, 各出惡計;
                  共謀合商, 暗設羅網,
                  並說: "誰能看見呢?"
                  他們謀劃不公不義, 說:
                 "我們的計謀天衣無縫!"
                  人的心思意念實在狡詐.
        原譯: 他們彼此勉勵設下惡計;
                  他們商量暗設羅網說:
                 "誰能看見?"
                  他們圖謀奸惡說:
                "我們是極力圖謀的."
                 他們各人的意念心思是深的.
        英文: They encourge each other in evil plans,
                  they talk about hiding their snares;
                  they say, "Who will see them?"
                  They plot injustice and say,
                "We have devised a perfect plan!"
                  Surely the mind and heart of man are cunning.
        說明: 1. They plot injustice and say
                      應譯 "他們謀劃不公不義, 說:" 非 "他們圖謀奸惡說:"
                  2. We have devised a perfect plan
                        應譯 "我們的計謀天衣無縫" 非 "我們是極力圖謀的"
                  3. Surely the mind and heart of man are cunning
                        應譯 "人的心思意念實在狡詐" 非 "他們各人的意念心思是深的"

89.   64:7-8 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 但是神要放箭射他們,
                  讓他們突然中箭倒地.
                  衪使他們的舌傷自己,
                  並且使他們全都毀滅;
                  看見他們的搖頭冷笑.
        原譯: 但是神要射他們,
                  他們忽然被箭射傷.
                  他們必然絆跌,
                  被自己的的舌頭所害;
                  凡看見他們的必都搖頭.
         英文: But God will shoot them with arrows;
                   suddenly they will be struck down.
                   He will turn their own tongues against them
                   and bring them to ruin;
                   all who see them will shake their heads in scorn.
         說明: 1. suddenly they will be struck down
                       應譯 "讓他們突然中箭倒地" 非 "他們忽然被箭射傷"
                   2. and bring them to ruin
                         應譯 "並且使他們全都毀滅" 非 "他們必然絆跌"
                   3. all who see them will shake their heads in scorn
                         應譯 "看見他們的搖頭冷笑" 非 "凡看見他們的必都搖頭"

90.    65:11-13    原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.                                     
        新譯: 你以恩典作年歲冠冕,                            
                  並使你糧車滿載豐收.                            
                  曠野草場一片碧綠,                            
                  山丘岡陵洋溢快樂.                            
                  草場上遍地是牛羊,                            
                  山谷中長滿了五穀,                            
                  到處洋溢歡樂歌唱.                            
        原譯: 你以恩典為年歲的冠冕,                            
                  你的路徑都滴下油脂.                            
                  滴在曠野的草場上.                            
                  小山以歡樂束腰,                            
                  草場以羊群為衣,                            
                  谷中也長滿了五穀,                            
                  這一切都歡呼歌唱!                            
        英文: You crown the year with your bounty,                            
                  and your carts overflow with abundance.                            
                  The grasslands of the desert overflow;                            
                  the hills are clothed with gladness.                            
                  The meadow are covered with flocks                            
                  and the valleys are mantled with grain;                            
                  they shout for joy and sing.                            
        說明: 1.  your carts overflow with abundance                            
                       應譯 "並使你糧車滿載豐收" 非 "你的路徑都滴下油脂"                              
                  2.  The grasslands of the desert overflow                            
                        應譯 "曠野草場一片碧綠" 非 "滴在曠野的草場上"                              
                  3.  the hills are clothed with gladness                            
                        應譯 "山丘岡陵洋溢快樂" 非 "小山以歡樂束腰"                              
                  4.  The meadow are covered with flocks                            
                        應譯 "草場上遍地是牛羊" 非 "草場以羊群為衣"                              
                  5.  they shout for joy and sing                            
                         譯 "到處洋溢歡樂歌唱" 較 "這一切都歡呼歌唱" 雅達.  

91.   66:2-4 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 歌頌衪名的榮耀,
                  並榮耀衪的讚美!
                  要對神說: "你的作為何其可畏!
                  你的仇敵在你面前戰抖.
                  全地都要向你俯伏敬拜,
                  他們都歌頌讚美你的名."
        原譯: 歌頌衪名的榮耀,
                  用讚美的言語將他的榮耀發明.
                  當對神說: "你的作為何等可畏!
                  因你的大能, 仇敵要投降你.
                  全地要敬拜你,
                  歌頌你, 要歌頌你的名."
        英文: Sing the glory of his name;
                  make his praise glorious!
                  Say to God, "How awesome are your deeds!
                  that your enemies cringe before you.
                  All the earth bows down to you;
                  they sing praise to your name."
        說明: 1. make his praise glorious
                      應譯 "榮耀衪的讚美" 非 "用讚美的言語將他的榮耀發明"
                     "榮耀發明" 不知何意?
                  2. your enemies cringe before you
                        應譯 "你的仇敵在你面前戰抖" 非 "因你的大能, 仇敵要投降你"
                  3. they sing praise to your name
                         譯 "他們都歌頌讚美你的名" 較 "歌頌你, 要歌頌你的名" 工整雅達.

92.  68:4-6   原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.                                     
       新譯:  你們要向神歌唱, 歌頌衪的名!                            
                  頌揚馳騁雲上的至尊,                            
                  衪的名字就叫耶和華;                            
                  你們要在衪面前歡樂.                            
                  神在衪居往的聖所中,                            
                  作孤兒的父親, 寡婦的護衛.                             
                  神叫孤獨的有家的溫暖,                            
                  衪用歌唱引領被囚的人;                            
                  悖逆者必陷烈日焦土中.                            
       原譯:  你們當向神唱詩, 歌頌他的名!                            
                  為那坐車行過曠野的修平去路.                            
                  衪的名是耶和華,                            
                  要在他面前歡樂.                            
                  神在他的聖所作孤兒的父,                             
                  作寡婦的伸冤者.                             
                  神叫孤獨的有家,                            
                  使被囚的出來享福,                            
                  惟有悖逆的住在乾燥之地.                            
        英文: Sing to God, sing praise to his name,                            
                  extol him who rides on the clouds -                            
                  his name is the Lord -                            
                  and rejoice before him.                            
                  a father to fatherless, a defender of widows,                            
                  is God in his holy dwelling.                            
                  God sets the lonely in families,                            
                  he leads forth the prisoners with singing;                             
                  but the rebellious live in a sun scorched land.                            
        說明:  1.  英文本採 extol him who rides on the clouds                            
                        應譯 "頌揚馳騁雲上的至尊" 非 "為那坐車行過曠野的修平去路"                              
                   2.  defender 譯 "護衛" 較 "伸冤者" 切合原意.                             
                   3.  God sets the lonely in families                            
                          應譯 "神叫孤獨的有家的溫暖" 非 "神叫孤獨的有家"                             
                   4,  he leads forth the prisoners with singing;                             
                          應譯 "衪用歌唱引領被囚的人" 非 "使被囚的出來享福"                              
                   5.  but the rebellious live in a sun scorched land.                            
                          應譯 "悖逆者必陷烈日焦土" 非 "惟有悖逆的住在乾燥之地"

93.   68:8-10 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 在西奈山的神, 以色列的神面前,
                  地在猛烈震動, 天下傾盆大雨;
                  神啊! 你賜充沛甘霖,
                  滋潤你貧脊的田地.
                  讓你子民居住其上,
                  神啊! 你為貧苦的人,
                  預備好豐盛的一切.
        原譯: 那時, 地見神的面而震動, 天也落雨;
                  西奈山見以色列神的面也震動.
                  神啊! 你降下大雨.
                  你產業以色列疲乏的時候,
                  你使他堅固.
                  你的會眾住在其中,
                  神啊! 你的恩惠是為困苦人預備的.
          英文: the earth shook, the heavens poured down rain,
                    before God, the One of Sanai; before God, the God of Isreal.
                    You gave abundant showers, O God;
                    you refreshed your weary inheritance.
                    Your people settled in it,
                    and from your bounty, O God,
                    you provided for the poor.
           說明: 1. 第8節新譯較原譯通順達意.
                         the heavens poured down rain 譯 "天下傾盆大雨" 較 "天也落雨" 雅達.
                     2. you refreshed your weary inheritance
                           應譯 "滋潤你貧脊的田地" 非 "你產業以色列疲乏的時候, 你使他堅固"
                     3. from your bounty, O God, you provided for the poor
                           應譯 "神啊! 你為貧苦的人, 預備好豐盛的一切"
                              非 "神啊! 你的恩惠是為困苦人預備的"  

94.   68:15-17 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 巴珊山高聳奇偉,
                  是多峰多嶺的山.
                  多峰多嶺的山哪!
                  為何嫉視神選中統管
                  而且要永遠居住的山?
                  神的車騎成千上萬,
                  累萬盈千;
                  主已從西奈山來到衪的聖所.
         原譯: 巴珊山是神的山,
                   巴珊山是多峰多嶺的山.
                   你們多峰多嶺的山哪,
                   為何斜看神所願居住的山?
                   耶和華必住這山, 直到永遠.
                   神的車輦累萬盈千,
                   主在其中,
                   好像在西奈聖山一樣.
          英文: The mountains of Bashan are majestic mountains;
                    rugged are the mountains of Bashan.
                    Why gaze in envy, O rugged mountains,
                     at the mountain where God choose to reign,
                     where the Lord himself will dwell forever?
                     The chariots of God are tens of thousands;
                     and thousand of thousands;
           說明: 1. The mountains of Bashan are majestic mountains
                         應譯 "巴珊山高聳奇偉" 非 "巴珊山是神的山"
                   2. gaze in envy 應譯 "嫉視" 非 "斜看"
                         choose to reign 應譯 "選中統管" 非 "所願居住"
                   3. The chariots of God 譯 "神的車騎" 較 "神的車輦" 通俗.
                   4. the Lord has come from Sinai into his sanctuary
                         應譯 "主已從西奈山來到衪的聖所" 非 "主在其中, 好像在西奈聖山一樣"

95.   68:18 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 你帶著擄民隨行的隊伍,
                  高升上騰;
                  你接受世人甚至叛徒的獻禮,
                  耶和華神啊,
                  就讓他們在那裏與你同住吧!
        原譯: 你已經升上高天
                  擄掠仇敵;
                  你在人間
                  就是在悖逆的人間受了供獻,
                  叫耶和華神可以與他們同住.
         英文: When you ascended on high,
                   you led captives in your train;
                   you received gifts from men, even from the rebellious -
                   that they, O Lord God,
                   might dwell there.
         說明: 1. When you ascended on high, you led captives in your train
                       應譯 "你帶著擄民隨行的隊伍, 高升上騰" 非 "你已經升上高天擄掠仇敵"
                   2. you received gifts from men, even from the rebellious
                         應譯 "你接受世人甚至叛徒的獻禮" 非 "你在人間就是在悖逆的人間受了供獻"
                   3. that they, O Lord God, might dwell there
                         應譯 "就讓他們在那裏與你同住吧" 較 "叫耶和華神可以與他們同住" 切合原意.

96..   68:21-23 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
         新譯: 神必打碎仇敵的頭顱,
                   即犯罪呻吟者的髮頂.
                   主說: "我必把他們從巴珊,
                   從深海抓回來.
                   好叫你們的腳踹仇敵的鮮血,
                   你們的狗也有份舔他們的血."
         原譯: 但神要打破他仇敵的頭,
                   就是那常犯罪之人的髮頂.
                   主說: "我要使眾民從巴珊而歸,
                   使他們從深海而回.
                   使你打碎仇敵, 你的腳踹在血中,
                   使你狗的舌頭從其中得分."
         英文: Surely God will crush the heads of his enemies,
                   the hairy crowns of those who groan in their sins.
                   The Lord says, "I will bring them from Bashan;
                   I will bring them from the depths of the seas,
                   that you may plunge your feet in the blood of your foes,
                   while the tongues of your dogs have their share."
         說明: 1. those who groan in their sins
                       應譯 "犯罪呻吟者" 非 "那常犯罪之人"
                   2. I will bring them from Bashan; I will bring them from the depths of the seas
                          應譯 "我必把他們從巴珊, 從深海抓回來"
                             非 "我要使眾民從巴珊而歸, 使他們從深海而回"
                          本節 "them(他們)" 指上節 "enemies(仇敵)"
                             非 "眾民" 故 bring 應譯 "抓回來" 非 "而歸(回)"
                   3. 第23節新譯較原譯通順工整達意.

97.   68:24-25 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 神啊! 我們看見你的遊行隊伍,
                  那是我們的神, 我們的王,
                  進入聖所的遊行隊伍.
                  歌唱的在前, 吹奏的在後;
                  還有擊鼓少女伴隨.
        原譯: 神啊! 你是我的神, 我的王;
                  人已經看見你行走, 進入聖所.
                  歌唱的行在前,
                  作樂的隨在後,
                  都在擊鼓的童女中間.
        英文: Your procession has come into view, O God,
                   the procession of
                   my God and King into the sanctuary.
                   In front are the singers, after them the musicians;
                   with them are the maidens playing tambourines.
        說明: 1. procession 應譯 "遊行隊伍" 非 只"行走"
                  2. 未將 the procession of my God and King into the sanctuary
                     (那是我們的神, 我們的王, 進入聖所的遊行隊伍) 譯出, 應補上.
                 3. with them are the maidens playing tambourines
                       應譯 "還有擊鼓少女伴隨" 非 "都在擊鼓的童女中間"

98.   68:26-27 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 你們都要在大會中讚美神,
                  在以色列會中讚美耶和華.
                  便雅憫小支派帶領他們,
                  其中還有大群猶大領袖,
                  西布倫和拿弗他利領袖.
         原譯: 從以色列源頭來的,
                   當在各會中稱頌主神.
                   在那裏有統管他們的小便雅憫,
                   有猶大的首領和他們的群眾,
                   有西布倫的首領, 有拿弗他利的首領.
         英文: Praise God in the great congregation;
                   praise the Lord in the assembly of Isreal.
                   There is the little tribe of Benjamin, leading them,
                   there the great throng of Judah's princes,
                   and there the princes of Zebulun and of Naphtali.
         說明: 1. in the great congregation 應譯 "在大會中" 非 "在各會中"
                       in the assembly of Isreal 應譯 "在以色列會中" 非 "從以色列源頭來的"
                   2. There is the little tribe of Benjamin, leading them,
                         應譯 "便雅憫小支派帶領他們" 非 "在那裏有統管他們的小便雅憫"
                   3. great throng of Judah's princes,
                         應譯 "大群猶大領袖" 非 "猶大的首領和他們的群眾"

99.   68:28-29 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
        新譯: 神啊, 求你彰顯你的大能!
                  神啊, 求你展現你為我們施展過的力量!
                  因你在耶路撒冷的聖殿,
                  眾王都要前來向你朝貢.
        原譯: 以色列的能力是神所賜的.
                  神啊, 求你堅固你為我們所成全的事
                  因你耶路撒冷的殿,
                  列王必帶貢物獻給你.
        英文: Summon your power, O God;
                  show us your strength, O God, as you have done before.
                  Because of your temple at Jerusalem
                  kings will bring you gifts.
        說明: 1. 第28節誤譯, 應改譯如新譯.
                  2. kings will bring you gifts
                        譯 "眾王都要前來向你朝貢" 較 "列王必帶貢物獻給你" 工整雅達.

100.   68:30-31 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
          新譯: 求你責罰蘆葦中的野獸,
                    以及列國牛群中的公牛;
                    使貪愛銀塊的人謙卑,
                    好戰的列國潰敗四散.
                    埃及必遣使節來朝,
                    古實也要向神稱臣.
          原譯: 求你叱喝蘆葦中的野獸和群公牛,
                    並列邦中的牛犢,
                    把銀塊踹在腳下;
                    神已經趕散好爭戰的列邦.
                    埃及的公侯要出來朝見神;
                    古實要急忙舉手禱告.
           英文: Rebuke the beast among the reeds,
                     the herd of bulls among the calves of the nations.
                     Humbled, may it bring bars of silver.
                     Scatter the nations who delight in war.
                     Envoy will come from Egypt;
                     Cush will submit herself to God.
           說明: 1. Rebuke 譯 "責罰" 較 "叱喝" 恰切.
                     2. the herd of bulls among the calves of the nations
                           應譯 "以及列國牛群中的公牛" 非 "並列邦中的牛犢"
                     3. Humbled, may it bring bars of silver
                           應譯 "使貪愛銀塊的人謙卑" 非 "把銀塊踹在腳下"
                     4. 第31節新譯較原譯正確通順工整達意.
                            submit herself 應譯 "稱臣" 非 "急忙舉手禱告"

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                                     荒漠甘泉經文新譯(5)
                                   (Streams in the Desert)

May 1   經文: 多1:2
             新譯: 那不會說謊的神在萬古之先就應許, 基於永生盼望的信心和認知,
             原譯: 盼望那無謊言的神在萬古之先所應許的永生,
             英文: a faith and knowledge resting on the hope of eternal life, which God, who does not lie,
                       promised before the beginning of time,
             附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 2     經文: 詩103:19
        新譯: 耶和華在天上設立寶座, 衪的國度統管萬有.
        原譯: 耶和華在天上立定寶座, 他的權柄統管萬有.
        英文: The Lord has established his throne in heaven,
                  and his kingdom rules over all.
        附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 3   經文: 珥2:32
                               新譯                                                              原譯
                     凡求告耶和華名的,                                             到那時候,
                           就必得救;                                       凡求告耶和華名的就必得救;
                       正如耶和華所說,                                         因為耶和華所說的,
                     在錫安山和耶路撒冷                                      在錫安山, 耶路撒冷
                       神都會施行拯救;                                             必有逃脫的人,
                          在餘民之中,                                                在剩下的人中
                       必有耶和華呼召者.                                        必有耶和華所召的.
                                                                 英文
                                                 And everyone who calls
                                     on the name of the Lord will be saved;
                                       for on Mount Zion and in Jerusalem
                                                 there will be deliverance,
                                                     as the Lord has said,
                                                      among the surviors
                                                      whom the Lord calls.
                           附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 4   經文: 約16:1
      新譯: 我已將這事告訴你們, 使你們不至步入歧途.
      原譯: 我已將這事告訴你們, 使你們不至於跌倒.
      英文: All this I have told you so that you will not go astray.
      附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 5   經文: 路18:1
      新譯: 耶穌對門徒說比喻, 要他們常常禱告, 不可放棄.
      原譯: 耶穌說一個比喻, 是要人常常禱告, 不可灰心.
      英文: Then Jesus told his disciples a parable to show them
                that they should always pray and not give up.
      附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 6   經文: 詩25:14
      新譯: 耶和華信任敬畏祂的人,
                讓他們都認識祂立的約.
      原譯: 耶和華與敬畏他的人親密,
                他必將自己的約指示他們.
      英文: The Lord confides in those who fear him;
                he makes his convenant known to them.
      附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 7   經文: 詩106:47             新譯                                                   原譯
                               耶和華我們的神啊!                  耶和華我們的神啊, 求你拯救我們,
                               求你施恩拯救我們;                            從外邦中招聚我們,
                               從列邦中招聚我們,                            我們好稱讚你的聖名,                                     
                               好來感謝你的聖名,                               以讚美你為誇勝.
                               並且讚美你的榮耀.
                                                                     英文
                                                   Save us, O Lord our God,
                                              and gather us from the nations,
                                    that we may give thanks to your holy name
                                                     and glory in your praise.
                        附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 8  經文: 但3:25
     新譯: 原譯甚佳
     原譯: 王說: "看哪, 我看見有四個人, 並沒有捆綁, 在火中遊行,
               也沒有受傷, 那第四個的相貌像神子.
     英文: He said, "Look! I see four men walking around in the fire,
               unbound and unharmed, and the fourth looks like a son of the gods."
     附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 9   經文: 創18:22
      新譯: 原譯甚佳
      原譯: 二人轉身離開那裏, 向所多瑪去, 但亞伯拉罕仍舊站在耶和華面前.
      英文: The men turned away and and went toward
                Sodom, but Abraham remained standing before the Lord.
      附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

10   經文: 詩27:13
       新譯: 我對此仍充滿信心:
                 在這活人之地,
                 我可看見耶和華的美善.
       原譯: 我若不信在活人之地
                 得見耶和華的恩惠,
                 就早已喪膽了.
       英文: I am still confident of this:
                 I will see the goodness of the Lord
                 in the land of the living.

        經文: 弗3:13
        新譯: 原譯甚佳
        原譯: 所以, 我求你們不要因我為你們所受的患難喪膽, 這原是你們的榮耀.
        英文: I ask you, therefore, not to be discourged
                  because of my sufferings for you, which are your glory.

         經文: 詩46:10
         新譯: 肅靜! 你們要知道我是神,
                   我必得萬國尊敬,
                   我必受全地尊崇.
         原譯: 你們要休息, 要知道我是神!
                   我必在外邦中被尊崇,
                   在遍地上也被尊崇.
         英文: Be still, and know that I am God;
                   I will be exalted among the nations,
                   I will be exalted in the earth.
         附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

11   經文: 詩66:12
       新譯: 讓騎士跨過我們的頭,
                 並且使我們經過水火,
                 但領我們到豐盛之地.
       原譯: 你使人坐車軋我們的頭.
                 我們經過水火,
                 你卻使我們到豐富之地.
       英文: You let men ride over our heads;
                 we went through fire and water,
                 but you brought us to a place of abundance.
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12   經文: 可9:23 與2.22相同
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 耶穌對他說: "你若能信, 在信的人, 凡事皆能."
       英文: "'If you can?'" said Jesus, "Everything is possible for him who believes."
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13   經文: 羅8:26
       新譯: 同樣, 我們軟弱時, 得聖靈幫助; 在不曉得怎樣禱告時, 聖靈親自用說不出來的嘆息
                 替我們祈求.
       原譯: 況且, 我們的軟弱有聖靈幫助, 我們本不曉得當怎樣禱告, 只是聖靈親自用
                 說不出來的嘆息替我們禱告.
       英文: In the same way, the Spirit helps us in our weakness. We do not know what we ought to
                 pray for, but the Spirit himself intercedes for us with groans that words cannot express.
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14   經文: 創17:23
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 正當那日, 亞伯拉罕遵著神的命, 給他的兒子以實瑪利和家裏的一切男子,
                 無論是在家裏生的, 是用銀子買的, 都行了割禮.
       英文: On that day Abraham took his son Ishmael and all those born in his household
                 or brought with his money, every male in his household, and circumcised them,
                 as God tols him.
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15   經文: 伯37:21
       新譯: 現在, 烏雲蔽日無人見, 風吹雲散見光芒.
       原譯: 現在有雲遮蔽, 人不得見穹蒼的光亮; 但風吹過, 天又發睛.
       英文: Now no one can look at the sun,
                 bright as it is in the skies after the wind has swept them clean
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16   經文: 但10:12-13
       新譯: 他繼續說: "但以理啊, 不要懼怕! 因為從你第一日專心求明白將來的事, 又在你神的
                 面前謙恭刻己, 你的言語已蒙應允, 我是因你的言語而來. 但波斯國的魔君攔阻我
                 二十一日, 那時, 天使長中有位米迦勒特來幫助我, 我被困在那裏, 與波斯王周旋.
       原譯: 他就說: "但以理啊, 不要懼怕! 因為從你第一日專心求明白將來的事, 又在你神的
                 面前刻苦己心, 你的言語已蒙應允, 我是因你的言語而來. 但波斯國的魔君攔阻我
                 二十一日, 忽然有大君中的一位米迦勒來幫助我, 我就停留在波斯諸王那裏.
       英文: Then he continued, "Do not be afraid, Daniel. Since the first day that you set your mind
                 to gain understanding and to humble yourself before your God, your words were heard,
                 and I have come in response to them. But the prince of the Persian kingdom resisted me
                 twenty-one days. Then Michael, one of the chief princes, come to help me, because I was
                 detained there with the king of Persia.
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17   經文: 徒7:30-34
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 過了四十年, 在西奈山的曠野, 有一位天使從荊棘火焰中向摩西顯現. 摩西見了
                 那異象, 便覺希奇, 正進前觀看的時候, 有主的聲音說: '我是你列祖的神, 我是
                 亞伯拉罕的神, 以撒的神, 雅各的神.' 摩西戰戰兢兢, 不敢觀看.
                 主對他說: '把你腳上的鞋脫下來, 因為你所站之地是聖地. 我的百姓在埃及所受
                 的困苦, 我實在看見了; 他們悲嘆的聲音, 我也聽見了. 我下來要救他們. 你來!
                 我要差你往埃及去.'
       英文: After forty years had passed, an angel appeared to Moses in the flames of a burning bush
                in the desert near Mount Sinai. When he saw this, he was amazed at the sight, As he went
                over to look more closely, he heard the Lord's voice: 'I am the God of your fathers,
                the God of Abraham, Isaac and Jacob.' Moses trembled with fearand did not dare to look.
                Then the Lord said to him, 'Take off your sandals; the place where you are standing
                is holy ground. I have indeed seen the oppression of my people in Egypt. I have heard
                their groaning and have come down to set them free. Now come, I will send you back
                to Egypt.
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18   經文: 林後1:8-9
       新譯: 弟兄們, 我們不要你們不曉得, 我們從前在亞西亞遭遇苦難, 壓力太重, 難以忍受,
                 甚至能否活命都絕望了. 的確, 我們心感身受死刑, 但我們體會到, 不要靠自己,
                 只要靠叫死人復活的神.
       原譯: 弟兄們, 我們不要你們不曉得, 我們從前在亞西亞遭遇苦難, 被壓太重, 力不能勝,
                 甚至連活命的指望都絕了. 自己心裏也斷定是必死的, 叫我們不靠自己, 只靠
                 叫死人復活的神.
       英文: We do not want you to be uninformed, brothers, about the hardship we suffered in the
                 province of Asia. We were under great presure; far beyond our ability to undure,
                 so that we despaired even of life. Indeed, in our hearts we felt the sentence of death.
                 But this happened that we might not rely on ourselves but on God, who raises the dead.
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19   經文: 創24:15-27
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 話還沒說完...那人就低頭向耶和華下拜, 說, 耶和華...是應當稱頌的,
                 因為他不斷的以慈愛誠實待我主人…
       英文: Before he had finished praying…Then the man bowed down and worshiped the Lord,
                 saying, "Praise be to the Lord, who has not abandoned his kindness and faithfulness
                 to my master…
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20   經文: 詩27:8達秘譯本
       新譯: 我的心說: "要尋求祂的面."
                 耶和華啊! 我要尋求你的面.
       原譯: 你說: "你們當尋求我的面."
                 那時我心向你說: "耶和華啊, 你的面我正要尋求."
達秘譯本: 我心替你說: 你們當尋求我的面.
                耶和華啊, 你的面我正要尋求.
       英文: My heart says of you, "Seek his face!" Your face, Lord, I will seek.
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21   經文: 詩119:71
       新譯: 受苦對我實在有益,
                 使我學到你的律例.
       原譯: 我受苦是與我有益,
                 為要使我學習你的律例.
       英文: It was good for me to be afflicted
                 so that I might learn your decrees.
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22   經文: 詩37:5直譯(與4.18相同)
       新譯: 把你的道路交託耶和華,
                 並且信靠他他定必成全.
       原譯: 當將你的事交託耶和華,
                 並倚靠他, 他就必成全.
       直譯: 當將你的事輥在耶和華身上, 倚靠祂, 祂就工作.(楊氏譯本)
       英文: Commit your way to the Lord;
                 trust in him and he will do thiis.
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23   經文:  詩107:27-28        新譯                                                          原譯        
                                搖搖幌幌東倒西歪,                                 他們搖搖幌幌, 東倒西歪,        
                                好像酩酊爛醉的人;                                        好像醉酒的人;        
                                用盡智慧一籌莫展.                                    他們的智慧無法可施.        
                       於是, 他們在困苦中哀求耶和華,                      於是, 他們在苦難中哀求耶和華,        
                             衪就拯救他們脫離苦難.                            他從他們的禍患中領出他們來.        
                                                                      英文                
                                        They reeled and staggered like deunken men;                
                                                      they were at their wits' end.                
                                       Then they cried out to the Lord in their trouble,                
                                           and he brought them out of their distress.                 
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24   經文: 創21:2
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 當亞伯拉罕年老的時候, 撒拉懷了孕, 到神所說的日期,
                 就給亞伯拉罕生了一個兒子.
       英文: Sarah became pregnant and bore a son to Abraham in his old age,
                 at the very time God had promised him.
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25   經文: 太5:4
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 哀慟的人有福了,
                 因為他們必得安慰.
       英文: Blessed are those who mourn,
                 for they will be comforted.
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26   經文: 民21:17
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 當時, 以色列人唱歌說:
                "井啊, 湧上水來!
                    你們要向這井歌唱."
       英文: Then Israel sang this song:
                "Spring up, O well!
                    Sing about it,"
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27   經文: 太14:18
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 耶穌說: "拿過來給我."
       英文: "Bring them here to me," he said.
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28   經文: 創32:26-29
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 你不給我祝福, 我就不容你去… 於是在那裏給雅各祝福.
       英文: I will not let you go unless you bless me... Then he blessedhim there.
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29   經文: 約15:15
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 以後我不再稱你們為僕人, 因僕人不知道主人所做的事, 我乃稱你們為朋友,
                 因我從我父所聽見的, 已經都告訴你們了.
       英文: I no longer call you servants, because a servant does not know his master's business.
                 Instead, I have called you friends, for everything that I learned from my father
                 I have made known to you.
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30   經文: 啓14:3
       新譯: 他們在寶座前, 並在四活物和眾長老前唱新歌 ,
                 除從地上買贖的十四万四千人以外, 沒有人能學唱這歌.
       原譯: 他們在寶座前, 並在四活物和眾長老前唱歌, 彷彿是新歌 ,
                  除了從地上買來的那十四万四千人以外, 沒有人能學這歌.
       英文: And they sang a new song before the throne and before the four living creatures and
                 the elders. No one could learn the song except the 144,000 who had been redeemed
                 from the earth.
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31   經文: 腓4:4
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 你們要靠主常常喜樂! 我再說, 你們要喜樂!
       英文: Rejoice in the Lord always. I will say it again: Rejoice!
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                                                                      (本月完)

                                                                 感謝主, 讚美主,
                                                                一切榮耀歸我主,
                                                                 哈利路亞, 阿們!

                                                                                     2020年5月31日

                                         詩篇譯文瑕疵剖析(IV)
                                                       61-80

61.   49:7-9 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
        新譯: 無人能贖回他人性命,
                  或替人把贖價交給神;
                  因生命贖價非常昂貴,
                  任何人都永遠付不清.
                  而且他必須永活不朽,
                  才可以實際上做得到.
         原譯: 一個也無法贖自己的弟兄,
                   也不能替他將贖價給神,
                   叫他且長遠活著,
                   不見朽壞,
                   因為贖他生命的價值極貴,
                   只可永遠罷休.
          英文: No man can redeem the life of another
                    or give to God a ransome for him -
                    the ransome for a life is costly,
                    no payment is ever enough -
                    that he should live on forever
                    and not see decay.
           說明: 1. the life of another 應譯 "他人性命" 非 "自己的弟兄"
                     2. no payment is ever enough 應譯 "永遠都付不清" 非 "只可永遠罷休"

 62.   49:10-12 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
         新譯: 大家都看見智慧人會死,
                   愚頑人和無知人也會亡;
                   且他們把財富留給別人.
                   他們雖以自己名命己地,
                   以己墓作自己永遠房舍,
                   作他們萬代無窮的居所.
                   惜人即使富有也難長久,
                   跟牲畜一樣全都會死亡.
          原譯: 他必見智慧人死,
                   又見愚頑人和畜類人一同滅亡,
                   將他們的財貨留給別人.
                   他們心裏思想, 他們的家室必永存,
                   住宅必留到萬代;
                   他們以自己的名稱自己的地.
                   但人居尊貴中不能長久,
                   如同死亡的畜類一樣.
           英文: For all can see that wise men die;
                     the foolish and the senseless alike perish
                     and leave their wealth to others.
                     Their tombs will remain their houses forever,
                     their dwellings for endless generations,
                     though they had named lands after themselves.
                     But man, despite his riches, does not endure;
                     he is like the beasts that perish.
             說明: 1. the senseless 應譯 "無知人" 非 "畜類人" 雅達.
                      2. Their tombs will remain their houses forever,
                             應譯 "以己墓作自己永遠房舍" 非 "他們心裏思想, 他們的家室必永存"
                      3. man, despite his riches 應譯 "人即使富有" 非 "人居尊貴中"
                      4. he is like the beasts that perish.
                             應譯 "跟牲畜一樣全都會死亡" 非 "如同死亡的畜類一樣"

 63.   49:13-15 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
          新譯: 這就是那信靠自己的命運,
                     也是認同追隨他們的下場.
                     他們像羊群注定要下陰間,
                     而且死亡在不斷餵養他們.
                     正直的人早晨來管理他們;
                     他們的形體遠離他們豪宅,
                     並且在墓中漸漸腐朽消滅.
                     但神必救我脫離陰間,
                     祂必接我到祂那裏去.
           原譯: 他們行的這道, 本為自己的愚昧,
                     他們以後的人還佩服他們的話語.
                     他們如同羊群派定下陰間,
                     死亡必作他們的牧者.
                     到了早晨, 正直的人必管轄他們.
                     他們的美容必被陰間所滅,
                     以致無處可存.
                     只是神必救贖我的靈魂脫離陰間的權柄,
                     因他必收納我.
            英文: This is the fate of those who trust in themselves,
                      and of their followers, who approve their sayings.
                      Like sheep they are destined for the grave,
                      and death will feed on them.
                      The upright will rule over them in the morning;
                      their forms will decay in the grave,
                      far from their princely mansions.
                      But God will redeem my life from the grave;
                      he will surely take me to himself.
               說明: 1. 第13節完全誤譯, 應改如新譯.
                        2. their forms will decay in the grave, far from their princely mansions 完全誤譯,
                               應改譯: "他們的形體遠離他們豪宅, 並且在墓中漸漸腐朽消滅"
                               非 "他們的美容必被陰間所滅, 以致無處可存"
                        3. But God will redeem my life from the grave
                               應譯 "但神必救我脫離陰間" 非 "只是神必救贖我的靈魂脫離陰間的權柄"
                        4. he will surely take me to himself
                               應譯 "祂必接我到祂那裏去" 非 "因他必收納我"

 64.   49:16-19 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
         新譯: 見人發財, 炫耀豪宅,
                   不必驚訝.
                   因他死時甚麼都帶不走,
                   他的榮華也不能隨他去.
                   他活著之日, 自認有福;
                   興旺昌盛時, 人人誇讚.
                   他要回到歷代列祖那裏,
                   永遠都看不見生命的光.
          原譯: 見人發財, 家室增榮的時候,
                    你不要懼怕.
                    因為他死的時候, 甚麼也不能帶去,
                    他的榮耀不能隨他下去.
                    他活著的時候, 雖然自誇為有福
                    (你若利己, 人必誇獎你),
                    他仍必歸到他歷代列祖的祖宗那裏,
                    永不見光.
             英文: Do not be overawed when a man grows rich,
                       when the splendor of his house increases;
                        for he will take nothing with him when he dies,
                        his splendor will not descend with him.
                       Though while he lived he counted himself blessed -
                        and men praise you when you prosper -
                        he will join the generation of his fathers,
                        who will never see the light of life.
               說明: 1. the splendor of his house increases 應譯 "炫耀豪宅" 非 "家室增榮"
                             Do not be overawed 應譯 "不必驚訝" 非 "不要懼怕"
                         2. and men praise you when you peosper -
                                應譯 "興旺昌盛時, 人人誇讚" 非 "(你若利己, 人必誇獎你)"
                         3. who will never see the light of life.
                                應譯 "永遠都看不見生命的光" 非 "永不見光"

 65.     49:20 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
           新譯: 富有看不透世事的人,
                   跟牲畜一樣都會死亡.
           原譯: 人在尊貴中而不醒悟,
                   就如死亡的畜類一樣.
           英文: A man who has riches without understanding
                     is like the beasts that perish.
           說明: 1. A man who has riches without understanding
                         誤譯 "富有看不透世事的人" 非 "人在尊貴中而不醒悟"
                     2. like the beasts that perish
                            應譯 "跟牲畜一樣都會死亡" 非 "就如死亡的畜類一樣"

 66.   52:1-4 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
         新譯: 強人啊! 為何吹噓罪惡?
                   為何終日自誇?
                   在神眼中你真可恥.
                   你的舌頭詭詐毀人,
                   像一把鋒利的剃刀.
                   你愛邪惡不愛美善;
                   你愛撒謊不愛吐實.
                   你詭詐的舌頭啊!
                   你愛說傷人的話.
          原譯: 勇士啊! 你為何以作惡自誇?
                    神的慈愛是常存的.
                    你的舌頭邪惡詭詐,
                    好像剃頭刀快利傷人.
                    你愛惡勝似愛善,
                    又愛撒謊, 不愛說公義.
                    詭詐的舌頭啊,
                    你愛說一切毀滅的話.
           英文: Why do you boast evil, you mighty man?
                      Why do you boast all day long?
                      you who are a disgrace in the eyes of God.
                      Your tongue plots destruction;
                      it is like a sharpened razor, you who practice deceit.
                      You love evil rather than good,
                      falsehood rether than speaking the truth
                      You love every harmful word;
                      O you deceitful tongue!
            說明: 1. mighty man 譯 "強人" 較 "勇士" 切合原意.
                      2. boast of evil 譯 "吹噓罪惡" 較 "作惡自誇" 恰切.
                      3. 未將 "Why do you boast all day long(為何終日自誇) 譯出, 應補上.
                      4. you who are a disgrace in the eyes of God
                             應譯 "在神眼中你真可恥" 非 "神的慈愛是常存的"
                      5. it is like a sharpened razor
                             譯 "像一把鋒利的剃刀" 較 "好像剃頭刀快利傷人" 雅達.
                      6. You love evil rather than good
                      7. speaking the truth 應譯 "不愛吐實" 非 "不愛說公義"
                      8. You love every harmful word
                             應譯 "你愛說傷人的話" 非 "你愛說一切毀滅的話"

 67.     52:5-7 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
           新譯: 然而神必定會把你永遠毀滅;
                     衪會把你從帳棚中抓出撕碎,
                     更把你從活人之地連根拔起.
                     義人看見會懼怕,
                     他們會嘲笑他說:
                    "看哪! 這就是那不靠神庇護的人,
                     只倚靠自己豐盛財富,
                     去毀滅別人壯大自己."
            原譯: 神也要毀滅你, 直到永遠;
                      也要把你拿去, 從你的帳棚中抽出,
                      從活人之地將你拔出.
                      義人看見而懼怕,
                      並要笑他.
.                     說: "看哪! 這就是那不以神為他力量的人,
                      只倚仗他豐富的財物,
                      在邪惡上堅立自己."
              英文: Surely God will bring you down to everlasting ruin;
                        He will snatch you up and tear you from your tent;
                        he will uproot you from the land of the living.
                        The righteous will see and fear;
                        they will laugh at him, saying,
                       "Here now is the man who did not make God his stronghold
                        but trusted in his great wealth
                        and grew strong by destroying others!"
                說明: 1. He will snatch you up and tear you from your tent
                             應譯 "衪會把你從帳棚中抓出撕碎" 非 "也要把你拿去, 從你的帳棚中抽出"
                          2. he will uproot you from the land of the living
                                譯 "更把你從活人之地連根拔起" 較 "從活人之地將你拔出" 切合原意.
                          3. did not make God his stronghold
                                應譯 "這就是那不靠神庇護的人" 非 "這就是那不以神為他力量的人"
                          4. grew strong by destroying others
                                應譯 "去毀滅別人壯大自己" 非 "在邪惡上堅立自己"

 68.     55:9-11 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
           新譯: 主啊! 求你困擾惡人,
                     攪亂他們的言語;
                     我見城中暴亂爭鬥.
                     他們晝夜出沒城牆,
                     惡行凌虐瀰漫全城.
                     毀滅力量肆虐城中,
                     威嚇謊言不離街頭.
            原譯: 主啊! 求你吞滅他們,
                      變亂他們的舌頭.
                      因為我在城中見了強爭競的事.
                      他們在城牆上晝夜繞行,
                      在城內也有罪孽和奸惡.
                      邪惡在其中,
                      欺壓和詭詐不離街市.
             英文: Confuse the wicked, O Lord,
                       confound their speech,
                       for I see violence and strife in the city.
                       Day and night they prowl about on its walls;
                       malice and abuse are within it.
                       Destructive forces are at work in the city;
                       threats and lies never leave its streets.
              說明: 1. Confuse the wicked, O Lord
                         應譯 "主啊! 求你困擾惡人" 非 "主啊! 求你吞滅他們"
                        2. I see violence and strife in the city
                              應譯 "我見城中暴亂爭鬥" 非 "因為我在城中見了強爭競的事"
                        3. prowl about 應譯 "出沒" 非 "繞行"
                        4. malice and abuse are within it.
                              應譯 "惡行凌虐瀰漫全城" 非 "在城內也有罪孽和奸惡"
                        5. Destructive forces are at work in the city
                              應譯 "毀滅力量肆虐城中" 非 "邪惡在其中"
                        6. threats and lies 應譯 "威嚇謊言" 非 "欺壓和詭詐"

 69.    55:12-14 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
          新譯: 若是仇敵羞辱我, 尚可忍耐,
                    若是仇家反抗我, 尚可躲避;
                    不料是你! 與我推心置腹,
                    你是我的良伴, 我的密友.
                    以往你曾經與我親密交往,
                    也常在神殿中與群眾同行.
           原譯: 原來不是仇敵辱罵我,
                     若是仇敵, 還可忍耐;
                     也不是恨我的人向我狂大,
                     若是恨我的人, 就必躲避他.
                     不料是你! 你原與我平等,
                     是我的同伴, 是我知己的朋友.
                     我們素常彼此談論, 以為甘甜,
                     我們與群眾在神的殿中同行.
             英文: If an enemy were insulting me, I could endure it;
                       if a foe were raising himself aginst me, I could hide from him.
                       But it is you a man like myself,
                       my companion, my close friend,
                       with whom I once enjoyed sweet fellowship
                       as we walked with the throng at the house of God.
             說明: 1. If an enemy were insulting me, I could endure it
                           應譯 "若是仇敵羞辱我, 尚可忍耐"
                              非 "原來不是仇敵辱罵我, 若是仇敵, 還可忍耐"
                      2. if a foe were raising himself aginst me, I could hide from him.
                           應譯 "若是仇家反抗我, 尚可躲避"
                              非 "也不是恨我的人向我狂大, 若是恨我的人, 就必躲避他"
                      3. But it is you a man like myself
                            應譯 "不料是你! 與我推心置腹" 非 "不料是你! 你原與我平等"
                      4. with whom I once enjoyed sweet fellowship
                            應譯 "以往你曾經與我親密交往" 非 "我們素常彼此談論, 以為甘甜"

 70.   55:18-19 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
          新譯: 衪從反抗我的戰場中,
                    即使反抗我的人眾多,
                    衪毫髮無傷救贖了我.
                    那永遠坐著為王的神,
                    對永不悔改不畏神者,
                    願你聽到他們的聲音,
                    就立即嚴厲懲治他們.
           原譯: 他救贖我命脫離攻擊我的人,
                     使我得享平安,
                     因為與我相爭的人甚多.
                     那沒有更變,
                     不敬畏神的人,
                     從太古常存的的神,
                     必聽見而苦待他.
            英文: He ransoms me unharmed
                      from the battle waged against me,
                      even though many oppose me.
                      God, who is enthroned forever,
                      will hear them and afflict them -
                      men who never change their ways
                      and have no fear of God.
              說明: 1. He ransoms me unharmed from the battle waged against me
                            應譯 "衪從反抗我的戰場中, 衪毫髮無傷救贖了我"
                               非 "他救贖我命脫離攻擊我的人, 使我得享平安"
                        2. even though many oppose me
                              譯 "即使反抗我的人眾多" 較 "因為與我相爭的人甚多" 恰切.
                        3. God, who is enthroned forever
                              譯 "那永遠坐著為王的神" 較 "從太古常存的的神" 恰切.
                        4. men who never change their ways and have no fear of God
                              譯 "對永不悔改不畏神者" 較 "那沒有更變, 不敬畏神的人" 恰切.
                        5. will hear them and afflict them
                              應譯 "願你聽到他們的聲音, 就立即嚴厲懲治他們" 非 "必聽見而苦待他"

 71.   56:1-2 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
         新譯: 神啊! 求你憐憫我,
                   因為人緊迫追逐我,
                   並終日緊迫攻擊我.
                   我仇敵終日追趕我,
                   並趾高氣揚攻擊我.
          原譯: 神啊! 求你憐憫我!
                   因為人要把我吞了,
                   終日攻擊欺壓我.
                   我的仇敵終日要把我吞了,
                   因逞驕傲攻擊我的人甚多.
           英文: Be merciful to me, O God,
                     for men hotly pursue me;
                     all day long they press their attack.
                     My slanderers pursue me all day long;
                     many are attacking me in their pride.
            說明: 1. for men hotly pursue me
                         應譯 "因為人緊迫追逐我" 非 "因為人要把我吞了"
                      2. My slanderers pursue me all day long
                            應譯 "我仇敵終日追趕我" 非 "我的仇敵終日要把我吞了"
                      3. many are attacking me in their pride
                            應譯 "並趾高氣揚攻擊我" 非 "因逞驕傲攻擊我的人甚多"

72.   56:7-8 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 沒理由讓他們逃脫,
        神啊! 求你在忿怒中打倒列國.
                  求你記錄我的哀傷;
                  把我眼淚裝入你的酒囊,
                  這不都記在你的冊上嗎?
        原譯: 他們豈能因罪孽逃脫嗎?
                  神啊! 求你在怒中使眾民墮落.
                  記錄我幾次流離, 你都記數.
                  求你把我眼淚裝在你的皮袋裏,
                  這不都記在你冊子上嗎?
         英文: On no account let them escape;
                   in your anger, O God, bring down the nations.
                   Record my lament;
                   put my tears in your wineskin -
                   are they not in your record?
         說明: 1. On no account let them escape
                       應譯 "沒理由讓他們逃脫" 非 "他們豈能因罪孽逃脫嗎"
                   2. in your anger, O God, bring down the nations
                         應譯 "神啊! 求你在忿怒中打倒列國" 非 "神啊! 求你在怒中使眾民墮落"
                   3. Record my lament 應譯 "求你記錄我的哀傷" 非 "記錄我幾次流離, 你都記數"

73.    56:12-13 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
         新譯: 神啊! 我向你許過願,
                   我要向你獻上感謝祭.
                   因你從死亡中救出我,
                   使我的腳穩步前行;
                   能夠在生命的光中,
                   在真神的面前行走.
         原譯: 神啊! 我向你所許的願在我身上,
                   我要將感謝祭獻給你.
                   因為你救我的命脫離死亡.
                   你豈不是救護我的腳不跌倒,
                   使我在生命光中,
                   行在神前面嗎?
          英文: I am under vows to you, O God;
                    I will present my thank offering to you.
                    For you have delivered me from death
                    and my feet from stumbling,
                    that I may walk before God
                    in the light of life.
           說明: 1. I am under vows to you
                         應譯 "我向你許過願" 非 "我向你所許的願在我身上"
                     2. my feet from stumbling
                           應譯 "使我的腳穩步前行" 非 "你豈不是救護我的腳不跌倒"
                     3. I may walk before God in the light of life
                           應譯 "能夠在生命的光中, 在真神的面前行走"
                           非 "使我在生命光中, 行在神前面嗎"

 74.   57:2-3 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
         新譯: 我要向至高神呼求,
                   向為我成就衪旨意的神呼求.
                   祂從天上施恩拯救我,
                   責罰緊迫追逐我的人;
                   衪向我大施慈愛信實.
         原譯: 我要求告至高的神,
                   就是為我成全諸事的神.
                   那要吞我的人辱罵我的時候,
                   神從天上必施恩救我,
                   也必向我發出慈愛和誠實.
         英文: I cry out to God Most High,
                   to God, who fufills his purpose for me.
                   He sends from heaven and saves me,
                   rebuking those who hotly pursue me;
                   God sends his love and his faithfulness.
          說明: 1. to God, who fufills his purpose for me.
                       譯 "向為我成就衪旨意的神呼求" 較 "就是為我成全諸事的神" 切合原意.
                    2. rebuking those who hotly pursue me
                           應譯 "責罰緊迫追逐我的人" 非 "那要吞我的人辱罵我的時候"
                    3. fulfill his purpose 應譯 "成就衪旨意" 非 "成全諸事"

 75.   57:4 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
         新譯: 我身陷獅子群裏,
                   躺在餓極野獸中;
                   他們的齒如槍箭,
                   他們的舌似利劍.
         原譯: 我的性命在獅子中間,
                   我躺臥在性如烈火的世人當中.
                   他們的牙齒是槍、箭;
                   他們的舌頭是快刀.
         英文: I am in the midst of lions;
                   I lie among ravenous beasts -
                   men whose teeth are spears and arrows,
                   whose tongues are sharp swords.
         說明: 1. I am in the midst of lions
                       譯 "我身陷獅子群裏" 較 "我的性命在獅子中間" 切合原意.
                   2. I lie among ravenous beasts
                         應譯 "躺在餓極野獸中" 非 "我躺臥在性如烈火的世人當中"

 76.   57:6 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
         新譯: 他們在我腳下撒羅網,
                   為要逼使我屈服低頭;
                   他們在我路上挖深坑,
                   反而自己掉入坑穴中.
         原譯: 他們為我的腳設下網羅,
                    壓制我的心.
                    他們在我面前挖了坑,
                    自己反掉在其中.
         英文: They spread a net for my feet -
                   I was bowed down in distress.
                   They dug a pit in my path -
                   but they have fallen into it themselves.
          說明: 1. spread a net 譯 "撒羅網" 較 "設下羅網" 切合原意.
                    2. I was bowed down in distress
                          應譯 "為要逼使我屈服低頭" 非 "壓制我的心"

77.   58:1-2 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 你們掌權的人真的講公義嗎?
                  你們審判的人真公正審判嗎?
                  不是的, 你們心謀不公不義,
                  你們手在地上行暴肆虐.
         原譯: 世人哪, 你們默然不語, 真合公義嗎?
                   施行審判, 豈按正直嗎?
                   不然, 你們是心中作惡,
                   你們在地上秤出你們手所行的強暴.
         英文: Do you rulers indeed speak justly?
                   Do you judge uprightly among men?
                   No, in your heart you devise injustice;
                   and your hands mete out violence on the earth.
         說明: 1. Do you rulers indeed speak justly?
                       rulers 應譯 "掌權的人" 非 一般 "世人," 並無 "你們默然不語" 之意, 應改正.
                   2. Do you judge uprightly among men?
                         應譯 "你們審判的人真公正審判嗎" 非 "施行審判, 豈按正直嗎" 應與上句對稱.
                   3. No, in your heart you devise injustice
                         應譯 "不是的, 你們心謀不公不義" 非 "不然, 你們是心中作惡"
                   4. your hands mete out violence on the earth
                         應譯 "你們手在地上行暴肆虐" 非 "你們在地上秤出你們手所行的強暴"

78.   58:3-5 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 惡人生下來就走上歧途,
                  一出母胎裏就任性說謊.
                  他們惡毒像蛇毒,
                  且是耳聾的毒蛇.
                  聽不見弄蛇人吹奏的聲調,
                  不管他功力多高都聽不見.
        原譯: 惡人一出母胎, 就與神疏遠;
                  一離母胎, 便走錯路, 說謊話.
                  他們的毒氣好像蛇的毒氣,
                  他們好像塞耳的聾虺,
                  不聽行法術的聲音,
                  雖用極靈的符咒, 也是不聽.
         英文: Even from birth the wicked go astray;
                   from the womb they are wayward and speak lies.
                   Their venom like the venom of a snake,
                   like that of a cobra that has stopped its ears,
                   that will not heed the tune of the charmer,
                   however skillful the enchanter may be.
          說明: 1. go astray 應譯 "走上歧途" 非 "與神疏遠"
                    2. wayward 應譯 "任性" 非 "走錯路"
                    3. Their venom like the venom of a snake
                          譯 "他們惡毒像蛇毒" 較 "他們的毒氣好像蛇的毒氣" 簡明通順.
                    4. like that of a cobra that has stopped its ears
                          應譯 "且是耳聾的毒蛇" 非 "他們好像塞耳的聾虺"
                    5. charmer 應譯 "弄蛇人" 非 "行法術的" / tune 應譯 "吹奏的聲調" 非 一般"聲音"
                    6. however skillful the enchanter may be
                          應譯 "不管他功力多高都聽不見" 非 "雖用極靈的符咒, 也是不聽"

79.   59:6-8 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 這些歹徒傍晚回來,
                  像狗狂吠出沒城中.
                  看看他們口吐何物?
                  吐出的竟然是刀劍,
                  並說: "誰能聽見我們?"
                  然而, 主啊! 你譏笑他們,
                  你嘲笑萬國.
        原譯: 他們晚上轉回,
                   叫號如狗. 圍城繞行.
                   他們口中吐出惡言,
                   嘴裏有刀.
                   他們說: "有誰聽見?"
                   但你耶和華必笑話他們,
                   你要嗤嘲笑萬邦.
         英文: They return at evening,
                   snarling like dog, and prowl about the city.
                   See what they spew from their mouths -
                   they spew out swords from their lips,
                   and they say, "Who can hear us?"
                   But you, O Lord, laugh at them,
                   you scoff at all those nations.
         說明: 1. prowl about the city 應譯 "出沒城中" 非 "圍城繞行"
                   2. See what they spew from their mouths
                         應譯 "看看他們口吐何物" 非 "他們口中吐出惡言"
                   3. they spew out swords from their lips
                         應譯 "吐出的竟然是刀劍" 非 "嘴裏有刀"
                   4. laugh at 譯 "譏笑" 較 "笑話" 切合原意.

80.   59:10-11 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 神要在我面前帶領我,
                  讓我暗笑中傷我的人.
                  主啊, 你是我們的盾牌!
                  求你不要殺他們, 免我的子民忘懷;
                  求你用你的大能, 使他們四散倒下.
         原譯: 我的神要以慈愛迎接我.
                   神要我看見我仇敵遭報.
                   不要殺他們, 恐怕我的民忘記.
                   主啊, 你是我的盾牌,
                   求你用你的能力使他們四散, 且降為卑.
         英文: God will go before me
                   and will let me gloat over those who slander me.
                   But do not kill them, O Lord our shield,
                   or my people will forget.
                   In your might make them wander about, and bring them down.
         說明: 1. God will go before me
                       應譯 "神要在我面前帶領我" 非 "我的神要以慈愛迎接我"
                   2. and will let me gloat over those who slander me
                         應譯 "讓我暗笑中傷我的人" 非 "神要我看見我仇敵遭報"
                   3. In your might make them wander about, and bring them down
                         應譯 "求你用你的大能, 使他們四散倒下"
                            非 "求你用你的能力使他們四散, 且降為卑"

                                      詩篇新譯新探討(3)
                                             第21-41篇

                                                                       21. 賜王尊榮
21:1-2     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                               新譯                                                                              原譯
       耶和華啊, 王因你的大能, 滿心歡欣;                                耶和華啊, 王必因你的能力歡喜;
              因你賜的勝利, 大大喜樂!                                        因你的救恩, 他的快樂何其大!
               他心中所欲, 你全賜他;                                          他心裏所願的, 你已經賜給他;
               他嘴唇所求, 你沒拒絕.                    英文                 他嘴唇所求的, 你未嘗不應允.
                                    O Lord, the king rejoices in your strength.
                                 How great is his joy in the victorious you give!
                                  You have granted him the desire of his heart
                                   and have not withheld the request of his lips.
                   說明: 1. strength 譯 "大能" 較 "能力" 切合原意.
                             2. the victorious 應譯 "勝利" 非 "救恩"
                                   How great is his joy 譯 "大大喜樂" 較 "他的快樂何其大" 雅達.
                             3. have not withheld 應譯 "沒有拒絕" 非 "未嘗不應允"

21:3-4      原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                 新譯 你賜豐盛福份迎接他,                                  原譯 你以美福迎接他,
                        把精金冠冕戴他頭上.                                   把精金的冠冕戴在他頭上.
                      他向你求壽你就賜給他,                                   他向你求壽, 你便賜給他,
                      讓他日子長久直到永遠.                                   就是日子長久, 直到永遠.
                說明: rich blessings 譯 "豐盛福份" 較 "美福" 恰切.
                          呼應 "精金冠冕"

21:5-7     原譯尚佳, 但欠簡潔通順工整,稍加修正即可.
                新譯 他因你得勝大有榮耀;                                    原譯 他因你的救恩大有榮耀;
                       你又恩賜他尊榮威嚴.                                        你又將尊榮威嚴加在他身上.
                       你把永遠福份賜給他,                                          你使他有洪福, 直到永遠,
                       他在你面前歡喜快樂.                                          又使他在你面前歡喜快樂.
                       因為吾王信靠耶和華,                                                  王倚靠耶和華,
                       至高者慈愛使不動搖.                                           因至高者的慈愛必不動搖.
                 說明: 1. victories 譯 "得勝" 較 "救恩" 切合原意.
                           2. you have bestowed on him 譯 "你又恩賜他" 較 "你又加在他身上" 切合原意.
                           3. eternal blessings 譯 "永遠的福份" 較 "洪福" 切合原意.

21:8-10    原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                 新譯 你的手要捉拿你的敵人,                                  原譯 你的手要搜出你的一切仇敵,
                        右手也要抓住你的仇人.                                      你的右手也要搜出那些恨你的人.
                     你出現時使他們像熾熱火爐;                                               你發怒的時候,
                     在震怒中耶和華必吞滅他們,                                        要使他們如在炎熱的火爐中.
                     讓他們在熊熊烈火中全燒滅.                                    耶和華要在他的震怒中必吞滅他們,
                     你必從地上滅絕他們的子孫,                                             那火要把他們燒盡了.
                     從人間徹底消滅他們的後裔.                                        你必從世上滅絕他們的子孫,
                                                                                                   從人間滅絕他們的後裔.
                  說明: 1. "laid hold" / "sieze" 分別譯 "捉拿" "抓往" 較 "搜出" 切合原意.
                             2. a fiery furnace 譯 "熾熱火爐" 較 "炎熱的火爐" 達意.
                             3. consume 譯 "燒滅" 較 "燒盡了" 切合原意.

21:11-13   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                   新譯 雖然他們暗謀惡計害你,                                  原譯 因為他們有意加害於你,
                         但他們陰謀卻不會得逞.                                        他們想出計謀卻不能做成.
                         因你箭上弦瞄準他們時,                                            你必使他們轉背逃跑,
                         他們無不惶恐轉身逃跑.                                            向他們的臉搭箭在弦.
                     耶和華啊! 願你的力量受尊祟,                             耶和華啊! 願你因自己的能力顯為至高!
                         好讓我們歌頌你的大能!                                      這樣, 我們就唱詩歌頌你的大能!
                    說明: 1. Though they plot evil against you
                                  譯 "雖然他們暗謀惡計害你" 較 "因為他們有意加害於你" 切合原意.
                              2. and devise wicked schemes, they cannot succeed
                                     譯 "但他們陰謀卻不會得逞" 較 "他們想出計謀卻不能做成" 雅達恰切.
                              3. when you aim at them with drawn bow
                                     譯 "因你箭上弦瞄準他們時" 較 "向他們的臉搭箭在弦" 切合原意.
                              4. for you will make them turn their backs
                                     譯 "他們無不惶恐轉身逃跑" 較 "你必使他們轉背逃跑" 雅達恰切.
                               5. Be exalted 譯 "尊崇" 較 "顯為至高" 雅達簡潔.

                                                              22. 受苦呼求
22:1-2     原譯甚佳, 譯文生動感人.
                            新譯                                                                  原譯
       我的神! 我的神! 為甚麼離棄我?                     我的神! 我的神! 為甚麼離棄我?
                為甚麼遠離不救我,                                     為甚麼遠離不救我,
                不聽我痛苦的呻吟?                                    不聽我唉哼的言語?
                      我的神啊!                                                     我的神啊!
               我白日呼求, 你不回應;                                我白日呼求, 你不應允;
               當黑夜降臨, 我不緘默.                                   夜間呼求, 並不住聲.
       說明: 1. the words of my groaning 譯 "我痛苦呻吟" 較 "唉哼的言語" 雅達.
                 2. answer 譯 "回應" 較 "應允" 切合原意.
                 3. by night and am not silent 譯 "當黑夜降臨, 我不緘默" 較 "夜間呼求, 並不住聲" 通順達意.

22:3-5     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                              新譯                                                                    原譯
                    你是寶座上的聖者,                                              但你是聖潔的,
                    你是以色列的讚美.                                      是用以色列的讚美為寶座的.
                    我們的列祖信靠你,                                            我們的祖宗依靠你;
                    信靠你就拯救他們.                                       他們依靠你, 你便解救他們.
                         他們哀求你,                                       便蒙解救; 他們哀求你, 便蒙解救;
                   他們信靠你, 就不失望.             英文                     他們依靠你, 就不羞愧.
                                    Yet you are enthroned as the Holy One;
                                             you are the praise of Isreal,
                                         In you our fathers put their trust;
                                       they trusted and you delivered them.
                                         They cried to you and were saved;
                               in you they trusted and were not disappointed.
                        說明: 1. Yet you are enthroned as the Holy One;
                                      應譯 "你是寶座上的聖者" 非 "你是聖潔的"
                                 2. you are the praise of Isreal,
                                      應譯 "你是以色列的讚美" 非 "是用以色列的讚美為寶座的"
                                 3. trust 譯 "信靠" 較 "依靠" 切合原意.
                                 4. disappointed 應譯 "失望" 非 "羞愧"

22:6-8     原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可,
                          新譯 然而我是蟲不是人;                           原譯 但我是蟲, 不是人.
                            被世人羞辱, 被百姓藐視.                         被眾人羞辱, 被百姓藐視.
                                見我的人都嘲笑我;                               凡看見我的都嗤笑我,
                                他們搖頭羞辱我說:                                 他們撇嘴搖頭, 說:
                               "他既然信靠耶和華,                               "他把自己交託耶和華,
                                就讓耶和華救他吧!                                  耶和華可以救他吧!
                                 耶和華既然喜歡他,                                   耶和華既喜悅他,
                                 就讓耶和華救他吧!"                                   可以搭救他吧!"
                  說明: 英文無"撇嘴"之意, 應刪除

22:9-11     原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可,
                                新譯 然而是你使我從母腹中出來的,                原譯 但是你叫我出母腹的,
                                      我在母親懷裏你就使我信靠你.              我在母懷裏, 你就使我有依靠的心.
                                           我一生下, 就交託給你;                        我自出母胎就交在你手裏.
                                           一出母胎, 你就是我神.                      從我母親生我, 你就是我的神.
                                             故祈求你不要遠離我,                                求你不要遠離我,
                                             因危難將臨無人助我.                     因為危難臨近了, 沒有人幫助我.

22:12-13     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                           新譯 很多公牛團團圍繞我,                              原譯 有許多公牛圍繞我,
                                 巴珊壯牛四面圍困我.                              巴珊大力的公牛四面困住我;
                                   抓撕獵物吼叫獅子,                                        牠們向我張口,
                                   向我張開血盆大口.                                    好像抓撕吼叫的獅子.
                           說明: 1. strong bull of Bashan 譯 "巴珊壯牛" 較 "巴珊大力的公牛" 簡潔.
                                    2. 本節指 "吼叫獅子" 非 "牠們(上節公牛)" 張開血盆大口, 應改正.

22:14-15     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                           新譯 我像被潑出去的水,                                  原譯 我如水被倒出來,
                                 全身骨頭都脫了節;                                       我的骨頭都脫了節;
                                  我的心如白臘熔化.                                    我心在我裏面如臘熔化.
                                  我的精力枯竭如瓦,                                   我的精力枯乾, 如同瓦片;
                                  我的舌頭緊貼上顎;                                     我的舌頭貼在我牙床上.
                                  你丟我入死亡塵土.                                  你將我安置在死地;的塵土中.
                            說明: my tongue sticks to my mouth
                                     譯 "我的舌頭緊貼上顎" 較 "我的舌頭貼在我牙床上" 雅達.

22:16-18     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                         新譯 惡犬環繞我, 惡棍圍困我;                            原譯 犬類圍著我, 惡黨環繞我;
                               他們扎了我的手和我的腳.                                   他們扎了我的手, 我的腳.
                               我能夠數算我全身的骨頭,                                      我的骨頭我都能數過;
                               人們都幸災樂禍瞪眼看我.                                          他們瞪著眼看我.
                                    他們分了我的外衣,                                              他們分我的外衣,
                                    又為我的內衣抽籤.                                              為我的裹衣拈鬮.
                         說明: 1. dogs 譯 "惡犬'' 呼應 "惡棍" 較 "犬類" 雅達.
                                  2. people stare and gloat over me
                                        譯 "人們都幸災樂禍瞪眼看我" 較 "他們瞪著眼看我" 切合原意.
                                        原譯未將 "gloat over me(幸災樂禍)" 譯出.
                                  3. "抽籤" 較 "拈鬮" / "內衣" 較 "裏衣" 通俗恰切.

22:19-21      原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                      新譯 主耶和華啊, 求你不要遠離我!                  原譯 主耶和華啊, 求你不要遠離我!
                            我的救主啊, 求你快來幫助我!                         我的救主啊, 求你快來幫助我!
                             求你快救我的性命脫離刀劍,                             求你救我的靈魂脫離刀劍,
                             救我寶貴生命脫離惡犬爪牙.                                救我的生命脫離犬類.
                                求你救我脫離獅子的口,                          救我脫離獅子的口, 你已經應允我,
                                 同時救我脫離野牛的角.                                    使我脫離野牛的角.
                       說明: 1. life 譯 "性命" 較 "靈魂" 切合原意.
                                2. the power of dogs 譯 "惡犬爪牙" 較 "犬類" 雅達.
                                3. 英文本無 "你己經應允我" 應刪除.

22:22-24 原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                   新譯 我要向我弟兄宣揚你的名,                          原譯 我要將你的名傳與我的弟兄,
                         更要在聚會中衷心讚美你.                                       在會中我要讚美你!
                   敬畏耶和華的人啊, 你們要讚美衪!                            你們敬畏耶和華的人要讚美他!
                   所有雅各的後裔啊, 你們要榮耀祂!                                 雅各的後裔都要榮耀他!
                   所有以色列後裔啊, 你們要敬畏祂!                              以色列的後裔都要懼怕祂他!
                            因衪不藐視受苦的人,                                     因為他沒有藐視憎惡受苦的人,
                            也沒有掩面不顧他們;                                              也沒有向他掩面;
                            衪垂聽受苦人的呼求.                                   那受苦之人呼籲的時候, 他就垂聽.
                   說明: revere 譯 "敬畏" 較 "懼怕" 切合原意..

22:25-28  原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
              新譯 我在大會中讚美你的話是從你而來,            原譯 我在大會中讚美你的話是從你而來人的,
                    我要在敬畏你的人面前還我許的願.                     我要在敬畏耶和華的人面前還我的願.
                          貧苦的人必定會吃得飽足,                                     謙卑的人必吃得飽足,
                           尋求耶和華的人必讚美祂.                                 尋求耶和華的人必讚美他.
                           願你們真誠的心永遠活著!                                    願你們的心永遠活著!
                        地的四極都要記念歸順耶和華,                       地的四極都要想念耶和華, 並且歸順他;
                        列國的萬族都要向祂俯伏敬拜.                             列國的萬族都要在你面前敬拜.
                               因國權是耶和華的,                                           因為國權是耶和華的,
                               祂在高天統管萬國.                                               他是管理萬國的.
               說明: 1. The poor 譯 "貧苦的人" 較" 謙卑的人" 切合原意.
                         2. rules over 譯 "統管" 較 "管理" 切合原意.

22:29-31  原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                      新譯 地上富人都歡宴敬拜,                           原譯 地上一切豐肥的人必吃喝而敬拜;
                            所有落在塵土的人和                                               凡下到塵土中
                            不能存活自己生命者,                                        不能存活自己性命的人,
                            都在祂面前屈膝下拜.                                            都要在他面前下拜.
                             主必有後裔侍奉祂,                                              他必有後裔侍奉他,
                             祂的行事必傳後代.                                           主所行的事必傳與後代!
                             他們會向後世子孫,                                             他們必來把他的公義
                             全面宣揚祂的公義;                                                傳給將要生的民,
                             說明是祂所作所為.                                              言明這事是他所行的.
                      說明: 1. All the rich of the earth 譯 "地上富人" 較 "地上一切豐肥的人" 簡潔雅達.
                               2. feast and worship 譯 "歡宴敬拜" 較 "吃喝而敬拜" 簡潔雅達.
                               3. a people yet unborne 譯 "後世子孫" 較 "將要生的民" 簡潔雅達.
                               4. for he has done it 譯 "說明是祂所作所為" 較 "言明這事是他所行的" 恰切.

                                                               23. 我的牧者
23:1-6 本篇原譯通順流暢, 生動有力, 扣人心弦, 堪稱傑作.          註 釋
     1 耶和華是我的牧者,                                                               譯文甚佳.
           我必一無所缺.                                   I shall not be in want 譯 "一無所缺" 似較 "不至缺乏" 雅達.
     2 祂使我躺臥青草地,                                                               譯文甚佳.
        領我到安靜的水邊.                                             quiet 譯 "安靜" 較 "可安歇" 雅達.
     3 祂使我的靈魂甦醒,                                                               譯文極佳.
     為自己名引導我走義路.
     4 我雖然行過死蔭的幽谷,                                                          譯文極佳.
             也不會怕遭害;
              因你與我同在,
     你的杖、你的竿、都安慰我.

  5        在我敵人的面前,                                                                     譯文極佳.
            你為我擺設筵席;
            你用油膏我的頭,
             使我的福杯滿溢.
  6 我一生一世必有恩惠慈愛隨著我,                                                   譯文極佳.
          我且要住在耶和華的殿中,
                    直到永遠!

                                                                  24. 榮耀的王
24:1-2 原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
            新譯: 地和地上一切屬耶和華,                                       原譯: 地和其中所充滿的,
                    世界和住民也屬耶和華;                                     世界和住在其間的, 都屬耶和華.
                      因衪把地建立在海上,                                                他把地建立在海上,
                      並且安定在眾水之上.                                                  安定在大水之上.
            說明: 1. everything in it 譯 "地上一切" 較 "所充滿的" 切合原意.
                     2. the waters 譯 "眾水" 較 "大水" 達意.

24:3-6 原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                 新譯: 誰能登上耶和華的山?                                      原譯: 誰能登耶和華的山?
                         誰又能站在祂的聖所?                                              誰能站在他的聖所?
                              唯有手潔心清,                                                     就是手潔心清,
                                 不拜偶像,                                                           不向虛妄,
                          也不發假誓的人才配.                                               起誓不懷詐昨的人.
                          他定必蒙耶和華賜福,                                               他必蒙耶和華賜福,
                          也必蒙他救主神護佑.                                             又蒙救他的神使他成義.
                       這就是尋求耶和華的世代,                                           這是尋求耶和華的族類,
                     雅各的神啊! 他們尋求你的面.                                          是尋求你的面的雅各.
                   說明: 1. ascend "登" 改 "登上" 與下句 "站在" 對稱.
                            2. who does not lift up his soul to an idol
                                  譯 "唯有手潔心清, 不拜偶像" 較 "就是手潔心清, 不向虛妄" 切合原意.
                            3. swear by what is false
                                  譯 "也不發假誓的人" 較 "起誓不懷詐的人" 達意.
                            4. vindication 譯 "護佑" 較 "成義" 通俗易懂.
                            5. who seek your face, O God of Jacob
                                  應譯 "雅各的神啊! 他們尋求你的面" 非 "是尋求你的面的雅各"

24:7-8     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                    新譯: 眾城門啊, 你們要抬頭!                            原譯: 眾城門哪, 你們要抬起頭來!
                        古老的城門啊, 你們要打開!                                  永久的門戶, 你們要被舉起!
                              因榮耀的王要進來.                                           那榮耀的王將要進來.
                              那榮耀的王是誰呢?                                              榮耀的王是誰呢?
                          就是那強而有力的耶和華,                                      就是有力有能的耶和華,
                          戰場上大有能力的耶和華.                                        在戰場有能的耶和華.
                     說明: 1. be lifted up, you ancient gates
                                   譯 "古老的城門啊, 你們要打開" 較 "永久的門戶, 你們要被舉起" 恰切
                              2. that the king of glory may come in
                                     譯 "因榮耀的王要進來" 較 "那榮耀的王將要進來" 較合原意.
                              3. strong and mighty 譯 "強而有力" 較 "有力有能" 雅達.
                              4. mighty in battle 譯 "戰場上大有能力的" 較 "在戰場有能的" 雅達.

24:9-10      原譯尚佳, 應加修正, 使與第7節一致.
                   新譯: 眾城門啊, 你們要抬頭!                                原譯: 眾城門哪, 你們要抬起頭來!
                        古老的城門啊, 你們要打開!                                   永久的門戶, 你們要把頭抬起!
                              因榮耀的王要進來.                                              那榮耀的王將要進來!
                              那榮耀的王是誰呢?                                                 榮耀的王是誰呢?
                              就是萬軍之耶和華,                                                    萬軍之耶和華,
                              衪就是那榮耀的王.                                                    他是榮耀的王!

                                                                         25. 祈求寬赦
25:1-3   原譯欠簡潔通順, 應加潤飾修正.
              新譯: 耶和華啊! 我的心仰望你.                                   原譯: 耶和華啊, 我的心仰望你.
                        我的神啊! 我信靠你.                                              我的神啊, 我素來倚靠你.
                      求你不要使我蒙羞受辱,                                                 求你不要叫我羞愧,
                      不要使我的仇敵勝過我.                                             不要叫我的仇敵向我誇勝.
                         仰望你的必不羞愧,                                                   凡等候你的必不羞愧,
                         惟有那無可饒恕的                                                    惟有那無故行奸詐的
                         奸詐之徒才要羞愧.                                                           必要羞愧.
               說明: 1. triumph over me 譯 "勝過我" 較 "向我誇勝" 通俗.
                         2. hope 譯 "仰望" 較 "等候" 切合原意.
                         3. without excuse 譯 "無可饒恕的" 較 "無故行奸詐的" 切合原意.

25:4-7     原譯欠簡潔通順, 應加潤飾修正.
            新譯: 耶和華啊! 求你將你的道指示我,                      原譯: 耶和華啊! 求你將你的道指示我,
                             將你的路教訓我,                                                 將你的路教訓我!
                      求你將你的真理指引教導我;                               求你以你的真理引導我, 教訓我,
                          因為你是我的救主神,                                              因為你是救我的神,
                          而我終日都在仰望你.                                                 我終日等候你.
                 耶和華啊! 求你記住你的憐憫慈愛,                           耶和華啊, 求你記念你的憐憫和慈愛,
                          因為這是自古就有的.                                         因為這是亙古以來所常有的.
                   求你不要記我幼年的罪過和叛逆;                          求你不要記念我幼年的罪愆和我的過犯.
                         求你以你的慈愛記念我,                                        耶和華啊, 求你因你的恩惠,
                           耶和華啊! 因你美善.                                               按你的慈愛記念我.
            說明: 1. hope 譯 "仰望" 較 "等候" 切合原意.
                      2. sins 譯 "罪過" 較 "罪愆" 通俗.
                      3. rebellious ways 譯 "叛逆" 較 "過犯" 切合原意.
                      4. for you are good 譯 "因你美善" 較 "因你的恩惠" 切合原意.

25:8-10   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                      新譯: 耶和華既善良又正直,                                 原譯: 耶和華是善良正直的,
                             祂必指引罪人走正路.                                       所以他必指示罪人走正路.
                             祂引導謙卑人行直路,                                         他必按公平引領謙卑人,
                             並用祂的道教導他們.                                            將他的道教訓他們.
                         對於遵守祂立的約要求的人,                                  凡遵守他的約和他法度的人,
                         耶和華所有的道都慈愛信實.                                    耶和華都以慈愛誠實待他.
                      說明: 1. He guides the humble in what is right
                                    譯 "祂引導謙卑人行直路" 較 "他必按公平引領謙卑人" 切合原意.
                                2. for those who keep the demands of his covenant
                                       譯 "對於遵守祂立的約要求的人" 較 "凡遵守他的約和他法度的人" 切合原意.
                                3. All the ways of the Lord are loving and faithful
                                       譯 "耶和華所有的道都慈愛信實" 較 "耶和華都以慈愛誠實待他" 切合原意.

25:11-13     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                         新譯: 耶和華啊! 為了你的名,                       原譯: 耶和華啊, 求你因你的名赦免
                                 求你赦免我深重的罪.                                    我的罪, 因為我的罪重大.
                                  誰是敬畏耶和華的人?                                          誰敬畏耶和華,
                              主就指示他走為他選擇的路.                            耶和華必指示他當選擇的道路.
                                   他定必終生安享福樂,                                          他必安然居住,
                                    他的後裔必繼承地土.                                      他的後裔必承受地土.
                          說明: 1. the way chosen for him 譯 "為他選擇的路" 較 "當選擇的道路" 恰切.
                                    2. days in prosperity 應譯 "安享福樂" 較 "安然居住" 切合原意.

25:14-15     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                         新譯: 耶和華信任敬畏祂的人,                 原譯: 耶和華與敬畏祂他的人親密,
                                讓他們都認識祂立的約.                           他必將自己的約指示他們.
                               我的眼目時常仰望耶和華,                         我的眼目時常仰望耶和華,
                               唯有祂能使我腳脫離網羅.                      因為他必將我的腳從網裏拉出來.
                         說明: 1. confides in 譯 "信任" 較 "親密" 切合原意.
                                  2. for only he will release my feet from the snare
                                         譯 "唯有祂能使我腳脫離網羅" 較 "因為他必將我的腳從網裏拉出來" 簡明雅達.
                                      for only(唯有) 未譯出, 應補上.

25:16-18     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                           新譯: 求你轉向我恩待我,                           原譯: 求你轉向我, 憐恤我,
                                   因我非常孤獨困苦.                                    因為我是孤獨困苦.
                                我心中的愁苦憂煩倍增,                                 我心裏的愁苦甚多,
                                求讓我從痛苦中得釋放.                               求你救我脫離我的禍患.
                                求你垂察我的艱難困苦,                            求你看顧我的困苦, 我的艱難,
                                施宏恩赦免我所有的罪.                                     赦免我一切的罪.
                           說明: 1. multiplied 譯 "倍增" 較 "甚多" 恰切.
                                    2. anguish 應譯 "痛苦" 非 "禍患"
                                    3. affliction and distress 譯 "艱難困苦" 較 "我的困苦, 我的艱難" 簡潔恰切.

25:19-21     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                         新譯: 看看我的敵人不斷增加,                          原譯: 求你察看我的仇敵,
                                他們全都對我深惡痛絕!                         因為他們人多, 並且痛痛地恨我.
                               求你保護我的性命拯救我;                          求你保護我的性命, 拯救我,
                               不要叫我羞愧因我投靠你.                         使我不至羞愧, 因為我投靠你.
                                   願純全正直保守我,                                     願純全正直保守我,
                                   因為我衷心仰望你.                                         因為我等候你.
                          說明: 1. fiercely…hate 譯 "深惡痛絕" 較 "痛痛地恨" 雅達.
                                    2. hope 譯 "仰望" 較 "等候" 切合原意.

25:22     原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
            新譯: 神啊, 求你救贖以色列                                   原譯: 神啊, 求你救贖以色列
                         脫離一切苦難!                                                  脫離他一切的愁苦.
            說明: trouble 譯 "苦難" 較 "愁苦" 切合原意.

                                                                         26. 祈求伸冤
26:1-2     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                   新譯: 耶和華啊! 求你為我伸冤,                            原譯: 耶和華啊! 求你為我伸冤,
                            因我一向行事正直無瑕;                                         因我向來行事純全;
                            且信靠耶和華從不動榣.                                     我又倚靠耶和華並不動榣.
                        耶和華啊! 求你考驗我試鍊我,                              耶和華啊, 求你察看我, 試驗我,
                            試驗察看我的心思意念.                                          熬鍊我的肺腑心腸.
                    說明: 1. blameless 譯 "正直無瑕" 較 "純全" 切合原意.
                              2. trusted 譯 "信靠" 較 "倚靠" 切合原意.
                              3. Test me "考驗我" 較 "察看我" / try me "試鍊" 較 "熬鍊" 切合原意.
                              4. my heart and my mind 譯 "心思意念" 較 "肺腑心腸" 雅達恰切.

26:3-5     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                 新譯: 因你的慈愛常在我面前,                              原譯: 因為你的慈愛常在我面前,
                         我一直按你的真理行事.                                         我也按你的真理而行.
                           我不與奸詐的人同坐,                                          我沒有和虛謊人同坐,
                           也不與偽善的人往來.                                          也不與瞞哄人的同群;
                              我恨惡惡人聚會,                                                我恨惡惡人的會,
                              也不與惡人共席.                                                必不與惡人同坐.
                 說明: 1. deceitful men 譯 "奸詐的人" 較 "虛謊人" 雅達.
                           2. hypocrites 譯 "偽善的人" 較 "瞞哄人" 雅達.
                                 consort with 譯 "往來" 較 "同群" 切合原意.
                           3. assembly 譯 "聚會" 較 "會" 達意.

26:6-8     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                 新譯: 耶和華啊! 我洗手表明清白後,                          原譯: 耶和華啊! 我要洗手表明無辜,
                                才繞你的祭壇行走,                                                才環繞你的祭壇;
                             好大聲發出對你的讚美,                                             我好發稱謝的聲音,
                             述說你一切奇妙的作為.                                       也要述說你一切奇妙的作為.
                          耶和華啊! 我喜愛你居住的殿,                                  耶和華啊! 我喜愛你所住的殿,
                                 就是你榮耀的居所.                                                和你顯榮耀的居所.
                  說明: 1. praise 譯 "讚美" 較 "稱謝" 切合原意.
                            2. 第8節未譯出英文同位格,"神的殿"就是"榮耀的居所" / "和" 應改譯 "就是"

26:9-12    原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
               新譯: 不要把我的靈魂和罪人一同剷除,                   原譯:不要把我的靈魂和罪人一同除掉;
                       也勿把我性命和嗜血者一起消滅.                        不要把我性命和流人血的一同除掉.
                               他們兩手全是惡計,                                           他們的手中有奸惡,
                               右手抓的都是賄賂.                                               右手滿有賄賂.
                               我過正直無瑕生活,                                          至於我, 卻要行事純全,
                               求你救贖我恩待我.                                           求你救贖我, 憐恤我!

                              我的腳站在平坦之地,                                          我的腳站在平坦地方,
                              在大會中讚美耶和華.                                        在眾會中我要稱頌耶和華!
                      說明: 1. take away 分譯 "一同剷除" "一起消滅" 較 重複 "一同除掉" 優美可讀.
                                2 wicked schemes 譯 "惡計" 較 "奸惡" 切合原意.
                                3. full of bribes 譯 "都是賄賂" 較 "滿有賄賂" 恰切
                                4. blameless 譯 "正直無瑕" 呼應第1節經文 較 "卻要行事純全" 切合原意.

                                                                           27. 堅心倚靠
27:1-3   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
              新譯: 耶和華是我的亮光, 我的拯救,                         原譯: 耶和華是我的亮光, 是我的拯救,
                               我還怕誰呢?                                                        我還怕誰呢?
                        耶和華是我生命的保障,                                           耶和華是我性命的保障,
                               我還懼誰呢?                                                        我還懼誰呢?
                        當惡人進攻我要吃我肉,                                           那作惡的, 就是我的仇敵,
                        敵人和仇家要攻擊我時;                                               前來吃我肉的時候,
                        他們個個都會絆跌仆倒.                                                     就絆跌仆倒.
                   雖有軍兵圍困我, 我也心安不怕;                            雖有軍兵安營攻擊我, 我的心也不害怕;
                    雖有戰爭攻擊我, 我也信心十足.                              雖然興起刀兵攻擊我, 我必仍舊安穩.
             說明: 1. 第2節欠通順工整, 應改譯如新譯.
                           evil men 譯 "惡人" 較 "作惡的" 雅達.
                           enemies and foes 應譯 "敵人和仇家" 前後一貫.
                       2. besiege 應譯 "圍困" 非 "安營"
                             be confident 應譯 "信心十足" 非 "仍舊安穩"

27:4-6     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                                        新譯                                                                     原譯
                 4 我要求問耶和華一件我要追求事:                   有一件事, 我曾求耶和華, 我仍要尋求;
                    我一生一世要住在耶和華的殿中,                       就是一生一世住在耶和華的殿中,
                    瞻仰衪的榮美並在衪殿中尋求祂.                        瞻仰衪的榮美, 在他的殿裏求問.
                       5 因為在我遭逢災難的日子,                                     因為我遭遇患難,
                          祂會在祂的居所保我安全;                                   他必暗暗地保守我;
                          把我隱藏在祂帳幕避難所,                       在他亭子裏, 把我藏在他帳幕的隱密處,
                          並把我高高安置在磬石上.                                    將我高舉在磬石上.
                    6 那時, 我可以在圍困我敵人上面,                                 現在我得以昂首,
                                    昂首挺胸;                                               高過四面的仇敵;
                               在祂的神聖帳幕裏,                                        我要在他的帳幕裏,
                                    歡呼獻祭,                                                     歡然獻祭,
                              並唱詩頌讚耶和華!                  英文                 我要唱詩歌頌耶和華!
                                       4 One thing I ask of the Lord, this is what I seek;
                           That I may dwell in the the house of the Lord all the days of my life,
                            to gaze upon the beauty of the Lord and to seek him in his temple.
                                                       5 For in the day of trouble
                                                he will keep me safe in his dwelling;
                                        he will hide me in the shelter of his tabernacle
                                                      and set me high upon a rock.
                                                    6 Then my head will be exalted
                                                above the enemies who surround me;
                                                               at his tabernacle
                                                    will I sacrifice with shouts of joy;
                                                I will sing and make music to the Lord.
                       說明: 1. 第4節
                                    seek him 應譯 "尋求祂" 非 "求問" 應改正.
                               2. 第5節
                                    (1) For in the day of trouble
                                            譯 "因為在我遭逢災難的日子" 較 "因為我遭遇患難" 切合原意.
                                    (2) he will keep me safe in his dwelling
                                            應譯 "祂會在祂的居所保我安全" 非 "他必暗暗地保守我"
                                     (3) he will hide me in the shelter of his tabernacle
                                            應譯 "把我隱藏在祂帳幕避難所" 非 "在他亭子裏, 把我藏在他帳幕的隱密處"
                                     (4) and set me high upon a rock
                                             譯 "並把我高高安置在磬石上" 較 "將我高舉在磬石上" 切合原意.
                                 3. 第6節
                                      (1) Then my head will be exalted above the enemies who surround me
                                              應譯 "我可以在圍困我敵人上面, 昂首挺胸"
                                                 非 "現在我得以昂首, 高過四面的仇敵"
                                       (2) shouts of joy 譯 "歡呼" 較 "歡然" 切合原意.

27:7-8     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                             新譯 耶和華啊! 我呼求時,                       原譯 耶和華啊! 我用聲音呼籲的時候,
                                    求你垂聽我的聲音;                                            求你垂聽;
                                    求你憐憫我回應我.                                     並求你憐憫我, 應允我.
                               我的心說: "要尋求祂的面."                             你說: "你們當尋求我的面."
                               耶和華啊! 我要尋求你的面.       英文     那時我心向你說: "耶和華啊, 你的面我正要尋求."
                                                         Hear my voice when I call,
                                                                      O Lord;
                                                    be merciful to me and answer me.
                                                  My heart says of you, "Seek his face!"
                                                           Your face, Lord, I will seek.
                        說明: 1. Hear my voice when I call, O Lord;
                                     應譯 "耶和華啊! 我呼求時, 求你垂聽我的聲音"
                                        非 "耶和華啊! 我用聲音呼籲的時候, 求你垂聽"
                                  2. My heart says of you, "Seek his face!"
                                        應譯 "我的心說: '要尋求祂的面.'" 非 "你說: '你們當尋求我的面.'"
                                  3. Your face, Lord, I will seek
                                        應譯 "耶和華啊! 我要尋求你的面"
                                           非 "那時我心向你說: '耶和華啊, 你的面我正要尋求.'"

27:9-12     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                       新譯: 求你不要掩面不眷顧我,                                原譯: 不要向我掩面,
                               不要發怒趕走你的僕人,                                     不要發怒趕逐僕人,
                               因為你一直都在幫助我;                                     你向來是幫助我的.
                                     我的救主神啊!                                               救我的神啊!
                                 不要撇下我又離棄我.                                  不要丟掉我, 也不要離棄我.
                                 雖然我的父母離棄我,                                          我父母離棄我,
                                 耶和華卻恩慈收留我.                                         耶和華必收留我.
                          耶和華啊! 求你把你的道教導我,                         耶和華啊, 求你將你的道指教我,
                          因我仇敵, 引導我行走平坦的路.                                   因我仇敵的緣故,
                               求你不要遂我敵人所願,                                       引導我走平坦的路.
                               狠心無情把我交給他們;                             求你不要把我交給敵人, 遂其所願;
                                 因為有作假見證之徒                                  因為妄作見證的和口吐兇言的,
                                 口吐兇言起來攻擊我.                                               起來攻擊我.
                  說明: false witnesses 譯 "作假見證" 較 "妄作見證" 切合原意.

27:13-14     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                           新譯 我對此仍充滿信心:                                原譯 我若不信在活人之地,
                                    在這活人之地,                                            得見耶和華的恩惠,
                               我可看見耶和華的美善.                                         就早已喪膽了.
                                    要等候耶和華!                                               要等候耶和華!
                                      要剛強堅定,                                             當壯膽, 堅固你的心.
                                      等候耶和華!                  英文                    我再說: 要等候耶和華!
                                                         I am still confident of this:
                                                  I will see the goodness of the Lord
                                                              in the land of living.
                                                                Wait for the Lord;
                                           be strong and take heart and wait for the Lord.
                            說明: 1. 第13節英文本係肯定語氣, 非假設語氣, 且無 "就早已喪膽了" 之意, 應改正.
                                         the goodness 譯 "美善" 較 "恩惠" 切合原意.
                                     2. be strong and take heart
                                           譯 "要剛強堅定" 較 "當壯膽, 堅固你的心" 簡明恰切.
                                     3. and wait for the Lord
                                           譯 "等候耶和華!" 較 "我再說: 要等候耶和華" 簡明恰切.
                                           英文本無 "我再說" 應刪除..

                                                                           28. 求神施恩
28:1-2     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                             新譯 耶和華我的磬石啊!                      原譯 我向你呼求, 耶和華啊, 我要求告你;
                                   求你不要掩耳不聽.                                   我的磬石啊, 不要向我緘默;
                                   因你若仍緘默不語,                                          徜若你向我閉口,
                                   我就像陰間的死人.                                       我就如將死的人一樣.
                                   當我向你的至聖所,                                               我呼求你,
                                   舉手呼求賜助之時;                                      向你至聖所舉手的時候,
                                   求垂聽我憐憫呼求.                英文                 求你垂聽我懇求的聲音!
                                                        To you I call, O Lord my Rock;
                                                         do not turn a deaf ear to me.
                                                              For if you remain silent,
                                         I will be like those who have gone down to the pit.
                                                               Hear my cry for mercy
                                                               as I call to you for help,
                                          as I lift up my hamds toward your Most Holy Place.
                          說明: 1. turn a deaf ear 譯 "掩耳不聽" 較 "緘默" 切合原意.
                                       remain silent 譯 "緘默不語" 較 "向我閉口" 雅達.
                                   2. I will be like those who have gone down to the pit
                                         譯 "我就像陰間的死人" 較 "我就如將死的人一樣" 切合原意.
                                   3. Hear my cry for mercy
                                         應譯 "求垂聽我憐憫呼求" 非 "求你垂聽我懇求的聲音"
                                   4. as I call to you for help, as I lift up my hamds toward your Most Holy Place
                                         應譯 "當我向你的至聖所, 舉手呼求賜助之時"
                                            非 "我呼求你, 向你至聖所舉手的時候"

28:3-5     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                新譯: 不要把我和壞人惡棍一同除滅,                    原譯: 不要把我和惡人並作孽的一同除掉,
                        他們表面與鄰居說話溫文有禮,                                    他們與鄰居說和平話,
                        可是心裏面卻是充滿奸詐邪惡.                                         心裏卻是奸惡.
                        求你按他們胡作非為報應他們;                                    願你按著他們所做的,
                        並且按他們的雙手所作的惡事,                                  並他們所行的惡事待他們.
                        將他們應該得到報應加給他們.                               願你照著他們手所做的待他們.
                           他們既然悖逆頑梗不在乎                                   將他們所應得的報應加給他們.
                           耶和華的話和祂手所作的,                                  他們既然不留心耶和華所行的
                           祂必把他們拆毀永不重建.                                             和他手所做的,
                                 他就必毀壞他們,                                                    不建立他們.
                說明: 1. those who do evil 譯 "惡棍" 較 "作孽的" 雅達.
                         2. speak cordially 譯 "說話溫文有禮" 較 "說和平話" 雅達.
                         3. Repay them for their deeds and for their evil work
                               譯 "求你按他們胡作非為報應他們"
                               較 "願你按著他們所做的, 並他們所行的惡事待他們" 簡潔雅達.
                         4. show no regard 譯 "不在乎" 較 "不留心" 恰切.
                         5. he will tear them down and never build them up again.
                               譯 "祂必把他們拆毀永不重建" 較 "他就必毀壞他們, 不建立他們" 簡潔雅達.

28:6-7     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                   新譯: 你們都應衷心讚美耶和華,                               原譯: 耶和華是應當稱頌的,
                           因衪垂聽我懇求憐憫呼聲.                                   因為他聽了我懇求的聲音.
                           耶和華是我的力量和盾牌,                               耶和華是我的力量, 是我的盾牌,
                           我的心信靠衪就得祂幫助;                                   我心裏依靠他, 就得幫助;
                              所以我的心歡欣雀躍,                                            所以我心中歡樂,
                              我要盡情歌唱感謝衪!                                            我必用詩歌頌他!
                    說明: 1. Praise 譯 "讚美" 較 "稱頌" 恰切.
                             2. cry for mercy 譯 "懇求憐憫呼聲" 較 "懇求的聲音" 恰切.
                             3. leaps for joy 譯 "歡欣雀躍" 較 "歡樂" 雅達.
                             4. give thanks to him in song 譯 "歌唱感謝" 較 "用詩歌頌" 切合原意.

28:8-9   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                  新譯: 耶和華是衪子民的力量,                             原譯: 耶和華是他百姓的力量,
                          是衪受膏者的救恩城堡.                                   又是他受膏者的得救保障.
                             求你拯救你的子民,                                           求你拯救你的百姓,
                             並賜福給你的產業,                                             賜福給你的產業,
                             牧養他們扶持他們,                                           牧養他們, 扶持他們,
                                   直到永遠!                                                        直到永遠!
                  說明: fortress of salvation 譯 "救恩城堡" 較 "得救的保障" 雅達.

                                                                            29. 神的威嚴
29:1-2   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
             新譯: 神的眾子啊, 你們要歸給耶和華!                      原譯: 神的眾子啊, 你們要將榮耀能力
                    你們要將榮耀和能力歸給耶和華!                                  歸給耶和華, 歸給耶和華.
                    要將祂的名當得榮耀歸給耶和華!                           要將耶和華的名所當得的榮耀歸給他.
                    並在祂的聖潔光輝中敬拜耶和華!                                   以聖潔的妝飾敬拜耶和華.
             說明: 1. 應依英文本順序, 把 "歸給耶和華" 依序列出.
                       2. worship the Lord in the splendor of his holiness
                              應譯 "並在祂的聖潔光輝中敬拜耶和華" 非 "以聖潔的妝飾敬拜耶和華"

29:3-5     原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
             新譯: 耶和華的聲音響徹眾水,                                原譯: 耶和華的聲音發在水上,
                    榮耀的真神在天上打雷,                                              榮耀的神打雷,
                    耶和華在眾水之上打雷.                                         耶和華打雷在大水之上.
                    耶和華的聲音大有能力,                                         耶和華的聲音大有能力;
                    耶和華的聲音滿有威嚴.                                         耶和華的聲音滿有威嚴.
                  耶和華的聲音震裂香柏樹,                                       耶和華的聲音震破香柏樹,
                  耶和華震碎黎巴嫩香柏樹.                                      耶和華震碎黎巴嫩的香柏樹.
             說明: over the waters 譯 "響徹眾水" 較 "發在水上" 雅達.

29:6-9     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                          新譯 祂使黎巴嫩跳躍如牛犢,                             原譯 他也使之跳躍如牛犢,
                                使西連跳躍如野公牛犢.                              使黎巴嫩和西連跳躍如野牛犢.
                                      耶和華的聲音                                               耶和華的聲音
                                      隨著閃電劈下.                                                使火焰分岔.
                                耶和華的聲音震動曠野,                                   耶和華的聲音震動曠野,
                                耶和華震動加低斯曠野.                                  耶和華震動加低斯的曠野.
                                耶和華的聲音猛扭橡樹,                                 耶和華的聲音驚動母鹿落胎,
                                使所有林木的葉落光禿.                                         樹木也脫落淨光.
                              在衪殿中的都驚呼: "榮耀!"           英文            凡在他殿中的, 都稱說他的榮耀.
                                                     He makes Lebanon skip like a calf,
                                                           Sirion like a young wild ox.
                                                         The voice of the Lord strikes
                                                             with flashes of lightning.
                                                  The voice of the Lord shakes the desert;
                                                    the Lord shakes the Desert of Kadesh.
                                                     The voice of the Lord twists the oaks
                                                              and strips the forests bare.
                                                          And in his temple all cry, "Glory!"
                     說明: 1. 原文分述: 黎巴嫩跳躍如牛犢 / 西連跳躍如野公牛犢; 中譯顯未分清.
                              2. strike with fleshes of lightning 應譯 "隨著閃電劈下" 非 "使火焰分岔"
                              3. twists the oaks 譯 "扭動橡樹" 上下文呼應, 較合邏輯.
                                    原譯採另一版本 "Lord makes the deer give birth" 似格格不入.
                              4. strips the forests bare 譯 "使所有林木的葉落光禿" 較 "樹木也脫落淨光" 雅達.
                              5. all cry, "Glory! 譯 "都驚呼 '榮耀!'" 較 "都稱說他的榮耀" 簡潔有力.

78.   58:3-5 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 惡人生下來就走上歧途,
                  一出母胎裏就任性說謊.
                   他們惡毒像蛇毒,
                   且是耳聾的毒蛇.
                   聽不見弄蛇人吹奏的聲調,
                   不管他功力多高都聽不見.
         原譯: 惡人一出母胎, 就與神疏遠;
                   一離母胎, 便走錯路, 說謊話.
                   他們的毒氣好像蛇的毒氣,
                   他們好像塞耳的聾虺,
                   不聽行法術的聲音,
                   雖用極靈的符咒, 也是不聽.
           英文: Even from birth the wicked go astray;
                     from the womb they are wayward and speak lies.
                     Their venom like the venom of a snake,
                      like that of a cobra that has stopped its ears,
                      that will not heed the tune of the charmer,
                      however skillful the enchanter may be.
            說明: 1. go astray 應譯 "走上歧途" 非 "與神疏遠"
                      2. wayward 應譯 "任性" 非 "走錯路"
                      3. Their venom like the venom of a snake
                            譯 "他們惡毒像蛇毒" 較 "他們的毒氣好像蛇的毒氣" 簡明通順.
                      4. like that of a cobra that has stopped its ears
                            應譯 "且是耳聾的毒蛇" 非 "他們好像塞耳的聾虺"
                      5. charmer 應譯 "弄蛇人" 非 "行法術的" / tune 應譯 "吹奏的聲調" 非 一般"聲音"
                      6. however skillful the enchanter may be
                            應譯 "不管他功力多高都聽不見" 非 "雖用極靈的符咒, 也是不聽"

79.   59:6-8 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾如新譯,
        新譯: 這些歹徒傍晚回來,
                  像狗狂吠出沒城中.
                  看看他們口吐何物?
                  吐出的竟然是刀劍,
                  並說: "誰能聽見我們?"
                  然而, 主啊! 你譏笑他們,
                  你嘲笑萬國.
         原譯: 他們晚上轉回,
                   叫號如狗. 圍城繞行.
                   他們口中吐出惡言,
                   嘴裏有刀.
                   他們說: "有誰聽見?"
                   但你耶和華必笑話他們,
                   你要嗤嘲笑萬邦.
         英文: They return at evening,
                   snarling like dog, and prowl about the city.
                   See what they spew from their mouths -
                   they spew out swords from their lips,
                   and they say, "Who can hear us?"
                   But you, O Lord, laugh at them,
                   you scoff at all those nations.
          說明: 1. prowl about the city 應譯 "出沒城中" 非 "圍城繞行"
                    2. See what they spew from their mouths
                          應譯 "看看他們口吐何物" 非 "他們口中吐出惡言"
                    3. they spew out swords from their lips
                          應譯 "吐出的竟然是刀劍" 非 "嘴裏有刀"
                    4. laugh at 譯 "譏笑" 較 "笑話" 切合原意.

29:10-11   原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                         新譯 耶和華坐洪水上為王,                       原譯 洪水泛濫之時, 耶和華坐著為王,
                               耶和華永遠坐著為王!                                 耶和華坐著為王, 直到永遠.
                           願耶和華賜力量給祂的子民,                             耶和華必賜力量給他的百姓,
                           願耶和華賜平安給祂的子民!         英文            耶和華必賜平安的福給他的百姓.
                                               The Lord sits enthroned over the flood;
                                                the Lord is enthroned as King forever.
                                                The Lord gives strength to his people;
                                                the Lord blesses his people with peace.
                    說明: 1. The Lord sits enthroned over the flood
                                  應譯 "耶和華坐洪水上為王" 非 "洪水泛濫之時, 耶和華坐著為王"
                                  over the flood 指現狀非時間, 故非 "洪水泛濫之時"
                              2. the Lord blesses his people with peace.
                                    譯 "願耶和華賜平安給祂的子民" 較 "耶和華必賜平安;的福給他的百姓" 切合原意.

                                                                         30. 救離死亡
30:1-3     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                       新譯: 耶和華啊, 我尊崇你!                              原譯: 耶和華啊, 我要尊崇你!
                              因你把我從深淵救出,                                            因你曾提拔我,
                              且不容仇敵向我炫耀.                                         不叫仇敵向我誇耀.
                                 耶和華我的神啊!                                             耶和華我的神啊!
                             我向你求助你就醫冶我.                                    我曾呼求你, 你醫冶了我.
                         耶和華啊! 你把我從陰間救起,                      耶和華啊! 你曾把我的靈魂從陰間救上來,
                                不讓我掉落在深坑.                                         使我存活, 不至於下坑
                       說明: 1. for you lifted me out of the depths
                                    應譯 "因你把我從深淵救出" 非 "因你曾提拔我"
                                2. called for help 譯 "求助" 較 "呼求" 切合原意.
                                3. you brought me up from the grave
                                      譯 "你把我從陰間救起" 較 "你曾把我的靈魂從陰間救上來" 簡潔雅達.
                                      英文無 "靈魂"之意, 應刪除.
                                4. you spared me from going down into the pit
                                      譯 "不讓我掉落在深坑" 較 "使我存活, 不至於下坑" 恰切雅達.

30:4-5   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
            新譯: 耶和華的聖民哪! 你們要歌頌衪,                     原譯: 耶和華的聖民哪, 你們要歌頌他,
                             要讚美衪的聖名.                                              稱讚他可記念的聖名.
                         因為祂的怒氣不過片刻,                                    因為祂的怒氣不過是轉眼之間;
                         而祂的恩典卻一生長久;                                        祂的恩典乃是一生之久.
                               終夜雖有哭泣,                                                  一宿雖然有哭泣,
                               清晨必有歡呼.                                                    清晨便必歡呼.
            說明: 1. praise his holy name 譯 "讚美衪的聖名" 較 "稱讚他可記念的聖名" 簡潔雅達.
                      2. only a moment 譯 "不過片刻" 較 "轉眼之間" 達意.
                      3. for a night 譯 "終夜" 較 "一宿" 切合原意.

30:6-7   原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾如新譯.
                    新譯: 當我感到安穩時會說:                         原譯: 至於我, 我凡事平順, 便說:
                               "我永不動搖."                                              "我永不動搖."
                                  耶和華啊!                                             耶和華啊, 你曾施恩,
                          你施恩, 我的江山穩固;                                        叫我的江山穩固;
                          你掩面, 我就驚惶失措.                                      你掩了面, 我就驚惶.
                    說明: 1. When I felt secure, I said
                                  應譯 "當我感到安穩時會說:" 非 "至於我, 我凡事平順, 便說:"
                              2. 第7節新譯較原譯工整對稱雅達.

30:8-10     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                       新譯: 耶和華啊! 我向你呼求,                           原譯: 耶和華啊! 我曾求告你.
                                  求我主憐憫施恩:                                        我向耶和華懇求, 說:
                                 "把我毀滅推坑中,                                      "我被害流血, 下到坑中,
                                  又有甚麼好處呢?                                             有甚麼益處呢?
                                  塵土會讚美你嗎?                                            塵土豈能稱讚你,
                                  會宣揚你信實嗎?                                            傳說你的誠實嗎?
                           耶和華啊! 求你垂聽憐憫我,                             耶和華啊, 求你應允我, 憐恤我!
                              耶和華啊! 求你幫助我."                                     耶和華啊, 求你幫助我!"
                    說明: 1. I caled 譯 "我向你呼求" 較 "我曾求告你" 通順.
                              2. I caled for mercy 譯 "求我主憐憫施恩:" 較 "我向耶和華懇求, 說:" 簡潔達意.
                              3. destruction 譯 "毀滅" 較 "被害流血" 切合原意.
                                    faithfulness 譯 "信實" 較 "誠實" 切合原意.
                              4. Hear, O Lord, and be merciful to me
                                     譯 "耶和華啊! 求你垂聽憐憫我" 較 "耶和華啊! 求你應允我, 憐恤我" 恰切.

30:11-10     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                       新譯: 你已把我的哀哭變為歡舞,                   原譯: 你已將我的哀哭變為跳舞,
                              脫去我麻衣讓我披上喜樂.                        將我的麻衣脫去, 給我披上喜樂.
                              使我的靈歌頌你永不休止,                          好叫我的靈歌頌你, 並不住聲,
                                    耶和華我的神啊!                                         耶和華我的神啊!
                                    我要永遠感謝你.                                     我要稱謝你, 直到永遠!
                       說明: 1. dancing 譯 "歡舞" 較 "跳舞" 恰切.
                                2. not be silent 譯 "永不休止" 較 "並不住聲" 雅達.

                                                                         31. 困中求神
31:1-2     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                        新譯 耶和華啊! 我投靠你.                                原譯 耶和華啊, 我投靠你,
                               求你使我永不羞愧,                                         求你使我永不羞愧,
                               以你的公義拯救我.                                          憑你的公義搭救我.
                             求你側耳垂聽快救我;                                     求你側耳而聽, 快快救我!
                              也求你作我避難磬石,                                          作我堅固的磬石,
                              以及救我的堅固堡壘.                                            拯救我的堡障.
                         說明: 1. Turn your ear to me, come quickly to my rescue
                                       譯 "求你側耳垂聽快救我" 較 "求你側耳而聽, 快快救我" 簡明恰切.
                                  2. be my rock of refuge,
                                        譯 "求你作我避難磬石" 較 "作我堅固的磬石" 切合原意.
                                  3. fortress 譯 "堡壘" 較 "保障" 恰切.

31:3-5     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                  新譯 因為你是我的磬石我的堡壘;                      原譯 因為你是我的磬石, 我的山寨,
                        求你為你的名帶領我引導我.                      所以求你為你的名的緣故引導我, 指點我.
                        並救我脫離為我暗設的網羅,                            求你救我脫離人為我暗設的網羅,
                        因為你是我最安全的避難所.                                     因為你是我的堡障.
                        我要將我的靈魂交在你手中,                                 我將我的靈魂交在你手裏.
                      耶和華信實的神啊! 求你救贖我,                         耶和華豫誠實的神啊, 你救贖了我.
                  說明: 1. fortress 譯 "堡壘" 較 "山寨" 雅達.
                           2. refuge 譯 "避難所" 較 "保障" 切合原意.

31:6-8     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                      新譯 我恨惡信奉敗壞偶像者,                       原譯 我恨惡那信奉虛無之神的人,
                            因為我一心信靠耶和華.                                     我卻倚靠耶和華.
                           我為你的慈愛歡喜快樂,                                我要為你的慈愛高興歡喜,
                              因你看到我的艱困,                                      因為你看過我的困苦,
                              知道我的心中痛苦.                                        知道我心中的艱難.
                        你沒有把我交在仇敵的手中,                             你未曾把我交在仇敵的手裏;
                        反而使我的腳站在寬穩之地.                               你使我的腳站在寬闊之地.
                      說明: 1. worthless idols 譯 "敗壞偶像" 較 "虛無之神" 切合原意.
                                2. anguish 譯 "痛苦" 較 "艱難" 恰切.

31:9-10     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                                       新譯                                                原譯
                          耶和華啊! 求你憐憫我,                        耶和華啊! 求你憐恤我,
                           因為我陷身患難之中;                            因為我在急難之中;                                      
                           我的眼睛因愁煩昏花,                           我的眼睛因憂愁乾癟,
                           且我的身心滿是憂傷.                           連我的身心也不安舒.
                           我的生命因愁苦耗盡,                          我的生命為愁苦所消耗,
                           歲月在呻吟之中消逝,                          我的年歲為嘆息所曠廢,
                           我的精力因困苦衰退,                         我的力量因我的罪孽衰敗,
                           我的身體也日益衰弱.           英文              我的骨頭也枯乾.
                                                  Be merciful to me, O Lord,
                                                        for I am in distress;
                                              my eyes grow weak with sorrow,
                                               my soul and my body with grief.
                                                My life is consumed by anguish
                                                    and my years by groaning;
                                        my strength fails because of my affliction,
                                                     and my bones grow weak.
                   說明: 1. distress 譯 "患難" 較 "急難" 恰切.
                             2. go weak 應譯 "昏花" 非 "乾癟"
                             3. with grief 應譯 "憂傷" 非 "不安舒"
                             4. consumed by groaning 應譯 "呻吟之中消逝 "非 "嘆息所曠廢"
                             5. my strength fails because of my affliction,
                                   譯 "我的精力因困苦衰退" 較 "我的力量因我的罪孽衰敗" 恰切.
                             6. bones go weak 應譯 "身體也日益衰弱" 非 "骨頭也乾枯"

31:11-13     原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                         新譯 11 因為我的仇敵中傷,                           原譯 我因一切敵人成了羞辱,
                                    我被左鄰右舍羞辱;                                   在我的鄰舍跟前更甚;
                                    我的朋友都害怕我,                                    那認識我的都懼怕我,
                                    在街上見我就走避.                                  在外頭看見我的都躲避我.
                               12 我如死人被人遺忘,                              我被人忘記, 如同死人, 無人記念.
                                    好像是打碎的陶器.                                         好像破碎的器皿.
                               13 很多毀謗在中傷我,                                     我聽見了許多人的讒謗,
                                   四周都充滿了恐怖;                                            四圍都是驚嚇.
                                   他們同謀想攻擊我,                                    他們一同商議攻擊我的時候,
                                   密謀要來取我的命.                                          就圖謀要害我的性命.
                        說明: 1. 第11節前兩句原譯西式語氣太重, 應改譯如新譯.
                                     my friends 譯 "我的朋友" 較 "那認識我的" 雅達.
                                     on the street 譯 "在街上" 較 "在外頭" 切合原意.
                                     flee 譯 "走避" 較 "躲避" 切合原意.
                                  2. 第12節 pottery 譯 "陶器" 較 "器皿" 切合原意.
                                  3. 第13節前兩句原譯西式語氣太重, 應改譯如新譯.
                                        slander 譯 "毀謗中傷" 較 "讒謗" 切合原意.
                                        terror 譯 "恐怖" 較 "驚嚇" 切合原意.
                                        conspire 譯 "同謀" 較 "一同商議" 恰切.

31:14-16   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                    新譯 耶和華啊! 但我還是信靠你,                      原譯 耶和華啊, 我仍舊依靠你;
                            所以我說: "你是我的神!"                                 我說: "你是我的神!"
                             我的一生都交在你手中,                                  我終身的事在你手中,
                             求你救我脫離我的仇敵                                  求你救我脫離仇敵的手
                             和全力拼命追趕我的人.                                    和那些逼迫我的人.
                             求你的臉光照你的僕人,                                  求你使你的臉光照僕人,
                             以你不變的慈愛拯救我.                                     憑你的慈愛拯救我.
                     說明: 1. my times 譯 "一生" 較 "終身" 恰切.
                              2. my enimies 譯 "仇敵" 即可, 不必譯作 "仇敵之手"
                              3. pursue 譯 "追趕" 較 "逼迫" 恰切.

31:17-18   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                    新譯: 耶和華啊! 求你勿使我羞愧,                原譯: 耶和華啊, 求你叫我不至羞愧,
                                  因我曾向你呼求;                                       因為我曾呼籲你;
                                  求你使惡人羞愧,                                       求你使惡人羞愧,
                                  在陰間閉口無聲.                                   使他們在陰間緘密無聲.
                               讓他們說謊的嘴失聲,                                 那撒謊的人逞驕傲輕慢,
                               因為他們驕傲又輕浮,                                   出狂妄的話攻擊義人,
                               說狂妄的話攻擊義人.                                     願他的嘴啞而無言.
                     說明: 1. cried out 譯 "呼求" 較 "呼籲" 恰切.
                              2. lips be silenced 譯 "嘴失聲" 較 "嘴啞而無言" 恰切.

31:19-20   原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                        新譯 19 你為敬畏你的人積存的美善,                     原譯 敬畏你、投靠你的人,
                                   和為投靠你的人在世人面前,                             你為他們所積存的,
                                   大公無私所施行的憐憫恩典,                         在世人面前所施行的恩惠
                                            何其偉大豐盛!                                          是何等大呢!
                              20 你把他們藏在你面前的避難所,                   你必把他們藏在你面前的隱密處,
                                       免得他們被人暗中算計;                                免得遇見人的計謀;
                                   又在你的居所保護他們的安全,                     你必暗暗地保守他們在亭子裏,
                                        免得他們受人口舌謾罵.                                  免受口舌的爭鬧.
                       說明: 1. 第19節原譯西式語氣太重, 應改譯如新譯.
                                     How great 譯 "何其偉大豐盛!" 較 "是何等大呢!" 雅達有力.
                                2. 第20節 from the intrigues of men
                                      譯 "免得他們被人暗中算計" 較 "免得遇見人的計謀" 恰切達意.
                                      shelter 譯 "避難所" 較 "隱秘處" 恰切.
                                      in your dwelling you keep them safe
                                      譯 "在你的居所保護他們的安全" 較 "你必暗暗地保守他們在亭子裏" 恰切雅達.
                                      your dwelling 應譯 "你的居所" 非 "在亭子裏"
                                      accusing tongues 譯 "口舌謾罵" 較 "口舌的爭鬧" 恰切.

31:21-22    原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                                         新譯                                                           原譯
                            耶和華是應當讚美的!                              耶和華是應當稱頌的!
                            因當我身陷圍困城中,                                因為他在堅固城裏
                            祂向我顯示奇妙慈愛.                               向我施展奇妙的慈愛.
                            我在警覺清醒時曾說:                              至於我, 我曾急促地說:
                          "我在你的眼前被隔絕!"                               "我從你眼前被隔絕."
                            然而當我呼叫求救時,                               然而, 我呼求你的時候,
                            你仍垂聽我憐憫呼求.             英文              你仍聽我懇求的聲音.
                                                       Praise be to the Lord,
                                         for he showed his wonderful love to me
                                                  when I was in a besieged city.
                                                          In my alarm I said,
                                                  "I am cut off from your sight!"
                                                 Yet you heard my cry for mercy
                                                   when I called to you for help.
                            說明: 1. when I was in a besieged city
                                         應譯 "當我身陷圍困城中" 非 "他在堅固城裏"
                                     2. In my alarm I said
                                           應譯 "我在警覺清醒時曾說" 非 "至於我, 我曾急促地說"
                                     3. Yet you heard my cry for mercy
                                           譯 "你仍垂聽我憐憫呼求" 較 "你仍聽我懇求的聲音" 恰切.

31:23-24   原譯欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                           新譯 所有祂的聖民哪,                    原譯 耶和華的聖民哪,
                                 都要敬愛耶和華!                            你們都要愛他!
                              耶和華庇佑信實的人,                       耶和華保護誠實人,
                              卻十足報應驕傲的人.                    足足報應行事驕傲的人.
                              所有仰望耶和華的人,                       凡仰望耶和華的人,                                          
                              你們都要剛強心堅固!                 你們都要壯膽, 堅固你們的心.
                       說明: 1. Love the Lord 譯 "敬愛耶和華" 較 "要愛他" 尊敬.
                                    in full 譯 "十足" 較 "足足" 恰切.
                                2. Be strong and take heart
                                      譯 "你們都要剛強心堅固" 較 "你們都要壯膽, 堅固你們的心" 簡潔達意.

                                                                       32. 蒙赦喜樂
32:1-2     原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
         新譯 過犯蒙赦免, 罪惡得遮蓋的人,                             原譯   得赦免其過、遮蓋其罪的,
                          都是有福的!                                                        這人是有福的!
                      耶和華不算為有罪,                                                    凡心裏沒有詭詐,
                      心中沒有詭詐的人,                                                 耶和華不算為有罪的,
                          也是有福的!                                                          這人是有福的!

32:3-5 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                                新譯                                                        原譯
                    我閉嘴不認罪的時侯,                                  我閉嘴不認罪的時侯,
                    就終日呻吟體力日衰.                                 因終日唉哼而骨頭枯乾.
                    你的手日夜重壓我身,                            黑夜白日, 你的手在我身上沉重,
                    使我的精力日益耗竭,                                       我的精液耗盡,
                    如在盛夏酷熱中枯乾.                                      如同夏天的乾旱.
                    我才向你承認我的罪,                                     我向你陳明我的罪,
                    更進一步坦白我的惡;                                        不隱瞞我的惡.
          並說: "我要向耶和華承認我的過犯."                 並說: "我要向耶和華承認我的過犯."
                    你就赦免了我的罪惡.               英文                  你就赦免我的罪惡.
                                   When I kept silent, my bones wasted away
                                           through my groaning all day long.
                               For day and night your hand was heavy upon me;
                                                  my strength was sapped
                                                  as in the heat of summer.
                                          Then I acknowledged my sin to you
                                             and did not cover up my iniquity.
                               I said, "I will confess my transgressions to the Lord."
                                            and you forgave the guilt of my sin.
                        說明: 1. my bones wasted away, through my groaning all day long
                                     應譯 "就終日呻吟體力日衰" 非 "因終日唉哼而骨頭枯乾"
                                 2. For day and night your hand was heavy upon me;
                                       譯 "你的手日夜重壓我身" 較 "黑夜白日, 你的手在我身上沉重" 簡潔達意.
                                 3. my strength was sapped
                                       應譯 "使我的精力日益耗竭"非 "我的精液耗盡"
                                 4. as in the heat of summer
                                       譯 "如在盛夏酷熱中枯乾" 較 "如同夏天的乾旱" 恰切.
                                 5. acknowledged 譯 "承認" 較 "陳明" 切合原意.

32:6-7   原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                              新譯 因此, 凡敬虔的人,                               原譯 為此, 凡虔誠人都當
                            都應趁你還可尋找時向你禱告;                           趁你可尋找的時候禱告你;
                            洪水泛濫時才不會淹到他那裏.                      大水泛濫的時候, 必不能到他那裏.
                                你是我安全的藏身之處,                                      你是我藏身之處,
                                 你必會保佑我脫離苦難,                                   你必保佑我脫離苦難,
                                 讓得救之歌四面圍繞我.                                 以得救的樂歌四面環繞我.
                     說明: they will not reach you
                              譯 "(洪水)才不會淹到他那裏" 較 "必不能到他那裏" 切合原意.

32:8-10   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                新譯 我要教導指示你當行的路;                        原譯 我要教導你, 指示你當行的路;
                      也要勸導你並密切察看你.                                  我要定睛在你身上勸戒你.
                          不可像無知的驢馬,                                         你不可像那無知的驢馬,
                          定要嚼環轡頭勒住,                                           必用嚼環轡頭勒住他,
                          否則就不會馴服你.                                              不然就不能馴服.
                          惡人定必多災多難;                                              惡人必多受苦楚;
                          但信靠耶和華的人,                                             惟獨倚靠耶和華的,
                          祂的慈愛必環繞他.                                            必有慈愛四面環繞他.
                 說明: 1. counsel 應譯 "勸導" 非 "定睛"
                          2. watch over 應譯 "察看" 非 "勸戒"
                          3. the woes 譯 "多災多難" 較 "苦楚" 切合原意.

32:11    原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
              新譯 義人哪, 你們要靠耶和華歡喜快樂!                   原譯 你們義人應當靠耶和華歡喜快樂;
                   所有心地正直的人哪, 你們都要歡唱!                            你們心裏正直的人都當歡呼.

                                                                       33. 神的權能
33:1-3   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
              新譯 義人哪! 你們要向耶和華歡唱,                         原譯 義人哪! 你們應當靠耶和華歡樂,
                            正直的人當讚美主.                                           正直人的讚美是合宜的.
                            要彈琴讚美耶和華,                                          你們應當彈琴稱謝耶和華,
                            奏十弦琴去歌頌祂.                                                 用十弦琴歌頌祂.
                            你們要向祂唱新歌,                                                 應當向他唱新歌,
                            巧手彈琴大聲歡呼.                                               彈得巧妙, 聲音洪亮.
               說明: 1. Sing joyfully 譯 "歡唱" 較 "歡樂" 切合原意.
                         2. Praise 譯 "讚美" 較 "稱謝" 切合原意.
                         3. shout for joy 應譯 "大聲歡呼" 非 "聲音洪亮"

33:4-5   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
              新譯 因耶和華的言語正直,                               原譯 因為耶和華的言語正直,
                    凡衪所作的盡都信實.                                       凡衪所做的, 盡都誠實.
                    耶和華喜愛仁義公正,                                           他喜愛仁義公平,
                    全地都充滿衪的慈愛.                                       遍地滿了耶和華的慈愛.
              說明: faithful 譯 "信實" 較"誠實" 切合原意.

32:6-7   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
              新譯 諸天藉耶和華的道而造,                                 原譯 諸天藉耶和華的命而造,
                     眾星藉衪口中的氣而成.                                       萬象藉他口中的氣而成.
                        衪把海水聚集缸中,                                               他聚集海水如壘,
                        又把深洋儲入庫裏.                                               收藏深洋在庫房.
              說明: 1. the word 譯 "道" 較 "命" 切合原意.
                        2. starry host 譯 "眾星" 較 "萬象" 切合原意.
                        3. into jars 應譯 "缸中" 非 "如壘" 呼應 warehouse "庫裏"

33:8-9   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可. 
              新譯 願全地敬畏耶和華,                                       原譯 願全地都敬畏耶和華;
                    世上萬民都尊敬衪.                                             願世上的居民都懼怕他.
                      因衪說有, 就有;                                                  因為他說有, 就有;
                         命立, 就立.                                                          命立, 就立.
              說明: revere 譯 "尊敬" 較 "懼怕" 切合原意.

33:10-11   原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                  新譯 耶和華粉碎列國圖謀,                               原譯 耶和華使列國的籌算歸於無有,
                             消滅萬民歪念.                                              使眾民的思念無有功效.
                       但耶和華籌劃永遠堅立,                                        但耶和華的籌算永遠立定,
                       衪心中的意念萬代長存.                                          他心中的思念萬代長存.
                說明: 1. The Lord foils the plans of the peoples;
                              譯 "耶和華粉碎列國圖謀" 較 "耶和華使列國的籌算歸於無有" 簡明達意.
                          2. he thwarts the purposes of the peoples.
                                譯 "消滅萬民歪念" 較 "使眾民的思念無有功效" 簡明達意.
                          3. plans 譯 "籌劃" 較 "籌算" / purposes "意念" 較 "思念" 切合原意.

33:12-15   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正. 
                  新譯 尊奉耶和華為神的國是有福的;                     原譯 以耶和華為神的, 那國是有福的!
                        神揀選作產業的民也是有福的.                        他所揀選為自己產業的, 那民是有福的!
                                耶和華從天上垂看,                                           耶和華從天上觀看,
                                看到世上的全人類.                                           他看見一切的世人.
                                祂從高天上的居所,                                          從他的居所往外察看
                                察看地上所有居民.                                             地上一切的居民.
                                祂造就所有人的心,                                       他是那造成他們眾人心的,
                                關懷他們一切作為.                                          留意他們一切作為的.
                   說明: 1. all mankind 譯 "全人類" 較 "一切的世人" 雅達.
                            2. consider 譯 "關懷" 較 "留意" 恰切.

33:16-17   原譯甚佳.
                  新譯 君王不能因兵多得勝,                                      原譯 君王不能因兵多得勝,
                        勇士不能因力大得救.                                              勇士不能因力大得救.
                         想靠馬得救是枉然,                                                 靠馬得救是枉然的;
                         馬雖力大不能救人.                                                馬也不能因力大救人.

33:18-19   原譯甚佳.
                  新譯 耶和華的眼目看顧敬畏衪的人                    原譯 耶和華的眼目看顧敬畏他的人
                               和仰望衪慈愛的人.                                        和仰望他慈愛的人.
                               並救他們脫離死亡,                                     要救他們的命脫離死亡,
                               使他們饑荒中存活.                                      並使他們在饑荒中存活.

33:20-22   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                  新譯 我們在盼望中等候耶和華,                              原譯 我們的心向來等候耶和華,
                         因衪是我們的幫助和盾牌.                                  他是我們的幫助, 我們的盾牌.
                            我們的心都因衪歡喜,                                           我們的心必靠他歡喜,
                            因我們信靠衪的聖名.                                       因為我們向來倚靠他的聖名.
                           耶和華啊! 我們仰望你,                                耶和華啊, 求你照著我們所仰望你的,
                            求你向我們大施慈愛.                                              向我們施行慈愛.
                  說明: wait in hope 譯 "盼望中等候" 較 "向來等候" 切合原意.

                                                                        34. 敬神無缺
34:1-3   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
              新譯 我要時時稱頌耶和華,                                         原譯 我要時時稱頌耶和華,
                    讚美衪的話常在我口.                                              讚美他的話必常在我口中.
                    我的心要誇耀耶和華,                                                我的心必因耶和華誇耀,
                    讓受苦的人聽見喜樂.                                                謙卑人聽見, 就要喜樂.
                    跟我一起榮耀耶和華,                                               你們和我當稱耶和華為大,
                    一同齊心高舉衪的名.                                                     一同高舉他的名.
            說明: 1. the afflicted 應譯 "受苦的人" 非 "謙卑人"
                      2. with me 譯 "跟我一起" 較 "你們和我" 切合原意.
                      3. Glorify the Lord 應譯 "榮耀耶和華" 較 "當稱耶和華為大" 恰切.

34:4-7   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
              新譯 我尋求耶和華, 衪都回應我;                         原譯 我曾尋求耶和華, 他就應允我;
                        並救我脫離一切恐懼.                                        救我脫離了一切的恐懼.
                        凡仰望衪的就有光彩,                                         凡仰望他的, 便有光榮,
                        他們的臉必永不蒙羞.                                           他們的臉, 必不蒙羞.
                        困苦人呼求祂都垂聽,                                    我這困苦人呼求, 耶和華便垂聽,
                        並救他脫離一切苦難.                                             救我脫離一切患難.
                             耶和華的使者,                                                    耶和華的使者,
                       在敬畏衪的人四圍紮營,                                            在敬畏衪的人四圍
                             並且拯救他們.                                                    安營搭救他們.
               說明: 1. radiant 應譯 "光彩" 較 "光榮" 切合原意.
                         2. he saved him out of all his troubles.
                               應譯 "救他脫離一切苦難" 非 "救我脫離一切患難"
                               由 "him" 可知, 應譯 "他" 非 "我"

34:8-10   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                新譯 你們親嚐主恩便知衪美善,                                  原譯 你們要嘗嘗主恩的滋味,
                      凡投靠衪的人都是有福的,                                               便知道他美善,
                     聖民哪! 你們要敬畏耶和華,                                           投靠衪的人有福了!
                         因敬畏衪的一無所缺.                                      耶和華的聖民哪, 你們當敬畏他,
                         少壯獅子尚缺食挨餓;                                              因敬畏他的一無所缺.
                         但是尋求耶和華的人,                                              少壯獅子還缺食忍餓;
                         甚麼好處都一點不缺.                                                 但尋求耶和華的,
                                                                                                     甚麼好處都不缺.

34:11-14   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                  新譯 我的孩子啊, 來聽我說!                           原譯 眾弟子啊, 你們當來聽我的話!
                        我要教你們敬畏耶和華.                                我要將敬畏耶和華的道教訓你們.
                             誰喜愛生命長壽,                                              有何人喜愛存活,
                             又想盡情享美福;                                           愛慕長壽, 得享美福;
                         就要控制舌頭不出惡言,                                     就要禁止舌頭不出惡言,
                         還要管住嘴唇不說謊話;                                        嘴唇不說詭詐的話;
                               更要離惡行善,                                                   要離惡行善,
                         尋找追求和睦. 尋求和睦,                                             一心追趕.
                 說明: 1. my children 譯 "我的孩子啊" 較 "眾弟子啊" 切合原意.
                           2. loves life 譯 "喜愛生命長壽" 較 "喜好存活" 恰切.
                           3. keep…from 譯 "控制" 較 "禁止" 切合原意.
                           4. speaking lies 譯 "謊話" 較 "詭詐的話" 切合原意.
                           5. seek peace and pursue it 譯 "尋找追求和睦" 較 "尋求和睦, 一心追趕" 簡明達意.

34:15-16    原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                   新譯 耶和華的眼目看顧義人,                                    原譯 耶和華的眼目看顧義人,
                          衪的耳朵垂聽他們呼求.                                          衪的耳朵聽他們的呼求.
                          耶和華的臉面敵對惡人,                                          耶和華向行惡的人變臉,
                          使他們從世人記憶消失.                                         要從世上除滅他們的名號.
                   說明: 1. face agaist 譯"臉面敵對惡人" 較 "向行惡的人變臉" 雅達.
                            2. to cut off the memory of them from the earth
                                  譯 "使他們從世人記憶消失" 較 "要從世上除滅他們的名號" 通順達意.

34:17-18   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                  新譯 義人呼求耶和華就垂聽,                                    原譯 義人呼求, 耶和華聽見了,
                        並救他們脫離一切苦難.                                            便救他們脫離一切患難.
                          耶和華親近傷心的人,                                               耶和華靠近傷心的人,
                          並拯救心靈破碎的人.                                                 拯救靈性痛悔的人.
                  說明: crushed in spirit 譯 "心靈破碎" 較 "靈性痛悔" 切合原意.

34:19-20   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                  新譯 義人多苦難,                                                  原譯 義人多有苦難,
              但耶和華救他脫離所有苦難.                                        耶和華救他脫離這一切.
                     保全他一身骨頭,                                                 又保全他一身的骨頭,
                     一根也不容折斷.                                                     連一根也不折斷.
              說明: all 指上節 troubles 譯 "苦難" 較 "這一切" 明確.

34:21-22    原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                   新譯 惡人必被罪惡誅殺,                                        原譯 惡必害死惡人,
                          義人仇敵必被定罪.                                        恨惡義人的, 必被定罪!
                         耶和華救贖祂的僕人,                                     耶和華救贖他僕人的靈魂,
                         凡投靠祂的必不定罪.                                      凡投靠他的, 必不至定罪!
                  說明: 1. Evil will slay the wicked;
                                譯 "惡人必被罪惡誅殺" 較 "惡必害死惡人" 恰切達意.
                           2. The Lord redeems his servants
                                 譯 "耶和華救贖祂的僕人" 較 "耶和華救贖他僕人的靈魂" 恰切達意.
                                 英文本無 "靈魂" 之意, 僅 "redeems his servants"

                                                                     35. 對付仇敵
35:1-3   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                              新譯 耶和華啊!                                                 原譯 耶和華啊,
                 與我相爭的, 求你與他們相爭;                          與我相爭的, 求你與他們相爭;
                 與我爭戰的, 求你與他們爭戰.                           與我相戰的, 求你與他們相戰.
                        求你拿起大盾小牌,                                          拿著大小的盾牌,
                        起來全力幫助我吧!                                             起來幫助我!
                    揮矛舞槍擋住追我的仇敵;                               抽出槍來, 擋住那追趕我的.
                            求你對我靈說:                                           求你對我的靈魂說:
                           "我是你的救主."                                            "我是拯救你的."
          說明: 1. fight against 譯 "爭戰" 較 "相戰" 切合原意.
                    2. Brandish spear 譯 "揮矛" 較 "抽出" 生動雅達.
                    3. Brandish spear and javelin
                          譯 "揮矛舞槍" 較 "抽出槍來" 通順雅達.

35:4-7   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                    新譯 願那追索我命的, 蒙羞受辱;                      原譯 願那尋索我命的, 蒙羞受辱;
                          願陰謀毀滅我的, 挫敗失望.                               願那謀害我的, 退後羞愧.
                                願他們像風前糠秕,                                        願他們像風前的糠,
                                被耶和華使者吹散.                                   有耶和華的使者趕逐他們.
                             願他們的道路又暗又滑,                                   願他們的道路又暗又滑,
                             且被耶和華的使者追趕.                                  有耶和華的使者追趕他們.
                             因他們無故為我設暗網,                                 因他們無故地為我暗設網羅,
                             又無故挖掘深坑陷害我.                                  無故地挖坑, 要害我的性命.
               說明: 1. in dismay 譯 "挫敗失望" 較 "退後羞愧" 切合原意.
                         2. plot my ruin 譯 "陰謀毀滅" 較 "謀害" 切合原意.
                         3. driving away 譯 "吹散" 較 "趕逐" 生動雅達.

35:8-10   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                  新譯 願災難突降在他們身上,                               原譯 願災禍突然臨到他身上;
                        暗佈羅網纏住他們自己,                                     願他暗設的網纏住自己;
                        並且掉入自掘坑中毀滅.                                       願他落在其中遭災禍!
                    那時, 我的靈必因耶和華歡喜,                                  我的心必靠耶和華快樂,
                            為衪的救恩快樂.                                                靠他的救恩高興.
                            我全身都要高呼:                                                我的骨頭都要說:
                        "耶和華啊! 誰能像你?                                          "耶和華啊! 誰能像你,
                     你從強權手中搶救困苦的人,                               救護困苦的人脫離那比他強壯的,
                     從掠奪者手中拯救貧乏的人."                              救護困苦貧乏人脫離那搶奪他的?"
              說明: 1. may they fall into the pit, to their ruin
                            譯 "並且掉入自掘坑中毀滅" 較 "願他落在其中遭災禍" 切合原意.
                        2. 第9節原譯未將 Then(那時)譯出, 應補上.
                        3. whole being 應譯 "全身" 非 "骨頭"
                        4. those who rob them 譯 "掠奪者" 較 "搶奪他的" 恰切.
                        5. those too strong for them 譯"強權" 較 "比他強壯的" 雅達.

35:11-12   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                   新譯 無情的見證人起來,                                     原譯 兇惡的見證人起來,
                         盤問我不知道的事.                                          盤問我所不知道的事.
                         他們以惡報善對我,                                            他們向我以惡報善,
                         使我心靈孤獨絕望.                                              使我的靈魂孤苦.
                  說明: 1. Ruthless 譯 "無情的" 較 "兇惡的" 切合原意.
                           2. my soul forlorn 譯 "心靈弧獨絕望" 較 "靈魂孤苦" 雅達.

35:13-15   原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                                  新譯                                                                原譯
                      當他們生病的時候,                                 至於我, 當他們有病的時候,
                      我卻穿上麻衣禁食;                                我便穿麻衣, 禁食, 刻苦己心,
                      當我禱告沒回應時,                                 我所求的都歸到自己的懷中.
              我奔走哀號, 待他們如友好兄弟;                 我這樣行, 好像他是我的朋友, 我的弟兄;
              我低頭悲痛, 如為自己母親哀哭.                       我屈身悲哀, 如同人為母親哀痛.
                但我跌倒時, 他們竟聚首稱慶,                      我在患難中, 他們卻歡喜, 大家聚集;
                我沒防備時, 他們集結攻擊我.                     我所不認識的那些下流人聚集攻擊我,
                    他們不斷地公然毀謗我.            英文                 他們不住地把我撕裂.
                                 Yet when they were ill, I put on sackcloth
                                        and humbled myself with fasting.
                              When my prayers returned to me unanswered,
                     I went about mourning as though for my friend or brother.
                    I bowed my head in grief as though weeping for my mother.
                                   But when I stumble, they gather in glee;
                          attackers gathered against me when I was unaware.
                                       They slandered me without ceasing.
             說明: 1. I put on sackcloth and humbled myself with fasting
                           譯 "我卻穿上麻衣禁食" 較 "我便穿麻衣, 禁食, 刻苦己心" 切合原意.
                       2. When my prayers returned to me unanswered
                             應譯 "當我禱告沒回應時" 非 "我所求的都歸到自己的懷中"
                       3. I went about mourning as though for my friend or brother.
                             應譯 "我奔走哀號, 待他們如友好兄弟" 非 "我這樣行, 好像他是我的朋友, 我的弟兄"
                       4. I bowed my head in grief as though weeping for my mother.
                             譯 "我低頭悲痛, 如為自己母親哀哭" 較 "我屈身悲哀, 如同人為母親哀痛" 恰切.
                       5. when I stumble 應譯 "但我跌倒時," 非 "我在患難中"
                       6. they gather in glee 譯 "他們竟聚首稱慶" 較 "他們卻歡喜, 大家聚集" 通順恰切.
                       7. attackers 指上節 "他們" 非 "我所不認識的那些下流人"
                       8. slandered 應譯 "毀謗" 非 "撕裂"

35:16-18   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                    新譯 如邪惡之徒惡意嘲笑我,                          原譯 他們如同席上好嬉笑的狂妄人,
                          還要對我恨得咬牙切齒.                                              向我咬牙.
                      主啊! 你袖手旁觀要到幾時呢?                             主啊! 你看著不理要到幾時呢?
                        求你救我性命不容他們殘害;                             求你救我的靈魂脫離他們的殘害;
                        保住我寶貴的生命脫離獅口.                                   救我的生命脫離少壯獅子.
                            我要在大會中感謝你,                                           我在大會中要稱謝你,
                            同時在眾民中讚美你.                                             在眾民中要讚美你.
                說明: 1. Like the ungodly they maliciously mocked
                              應譯 "如邪惡之徒惡意嘲笑我" 非 "他們如同席上好嬉笑的狂妄人"
                         2. they gnashed their teeth at me
                               譯 "還要對我恨得咬牙切齒" 較 "向我咬牙" 工整達意.
                         3. look on 譯 "袖手旁觀" 較 "看著不理" 雅達..
                         4. Rescue my life 應譯 "救我性命" 非 "救我的靈魂"
                         5. my precious life 譯 "我寶貴的生命" 較 "我的生命" 切合原意.

35:19-21   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                      新譯 勿讓無故與我為敵的,                           原譯 求你不容那無理與我為敵的,
                                   幸災樂禍;                                                     向我誇耀;
                             勿讓那些無理恨我的,                                       不容那無故恨我的,
                                   眨眼冷笑.                                                      向我擠眼.
                              因他們不說和平的話,                                      因為他們不說和平話,
                              反而捏造不實的罪狀,                                        倒想出詭詐的言語
                              指控地上沉默寡言人.                                          害地上的安靜人.
                              他們張開大口向我說:                                     他們大大張口攻擊我, 說:
                        "阿哈! 阿哈! 我們親眼看見了!"                        "阿哈! 阿哈! 我們的眼己經看見了!"
                  說明: 1. gloat over me 譯 "幸災樂禍" 較 "向我誇耀" 恰切.
                            2. wink the eye 譯 "眨眼冷笑" 較 "擠眼" 雅達.
                            3. but devise false accusations
                                  應譯 "反而捏造不實的罪狀" 非 "倒想出詭詐的言語"
                            4. against those who live quietly in the land
                                  應譯 "指控地上沉默寡言人" 非 "害地上的安靜人"
                            5. gape at 譯 "張開大口" 較 "大大張口" 恰切, 無攻擊之意.
                            6. with our own eye we have seen it
                                  譯 "我們親眼看見了" 較 "我們的眼己經看見了" 雅達.

35:22-25   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                   新譯 "耶和華啊! 你已看見了,                                  原譯 "耶和華啊! 你已經看見了,
                                求你不要緘默;                                                      求你不要閉口!
                           主啊! 求你不要遠離我.                                           主啊! 求你不要遠離我!
                           醒起為我辯屈, 我的神,                                       我的主啊! 求你為我奮興醒起,
                    我的神, 我的主啊! 求你為我爭辯.                                    判清我的事, 伸明我的冤!
                               耶和華我的神啊!                                                     耶和華我的神啊,
                           求你按你的公義審判我,                                             求你按你的公義判斷我,
                           再也不容他們幸災樂禍;                                                不容他們向我誇耀;
                           也不容許他們心裏妄想:                                                  不容他們心裏說:
                      "阿哈! 這正如我們所願! 阿哈!                                               遂我們所心願了!
                         或說: "我們已把他吞滅了!"                                     不容他們說: "我們已經把他吞了!"
                說明: 1. be not silent 譯 "不要緘默" 較 "不要閉口" 雅達.
                          2. defense 譯 "辯屈" 較 "判清我的事" 雅達.
                          3. contend for me 譯 "為我爭辯" 較 "伸明我的冤" 恰切.
                          4. Vindicate 譯 "審判" 較 "判斷" 恰切.
                          5. gloat over 譯 "幸災樂禍" 較 "誇耀" 雅達..

35:26-28   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                       新譯 願那些幸災樂禍的,                               原譯 願那喜歡我遭難的,
                                   羞愧困惑;                                              一同披慚蒙羞.
                             願那些妄自尊大的,                                     願那向我妄自尊大的,
                                   披慚蒙羞.                                              披慚愧, 蒙羞辱.
                             願那些喜我申冤的,                                    願那喜悅我冤屈得伸的,
                                   歡呼喜樂;                                                  歡呼快樂;
                       願他們常說: "當尊崇耶和華!                          願他們常說: "當尊耶和華為大!
                         耶和華喜悅衪的僕人蒙福."                               耶和華喜悅他的僕人平安."
                         我的舌頭要述說你的公義,                              我的舌頭要終日論說你的公義,
                          並且終日說出對你的讚美.                                        時常讚美你.
               說明: 1. be put to shame and confusion
                             譯 "羞愧困惑" 較 "一同披慚蒙羞" 工整雅達.
                         2. be clothed with shame and disgrace
                               譯 "披慚蒙羞" 較 "披慚愧, 蒙羞辱" 簡明雅達.
                         3. vindication 譯 "申冤" 較 "冤屈得伸" 雅達..
                         4. well being 譯 "蒙福" 較 "平安" 切合原意..

                                                                  36. 神的庇護
36:1-4   原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                                     新譯                                                                    原譯
                   一則有關惡人罪行的聖言,                                    惡人的罪過在他心裏說:
                               深藏我心:                                                 "我眼中不怕神!"
                          "他的眼中不怕神!"                                    他自誇自媚, 以為他的罪孽
                       因在他眼中他自誇自媚,                                      終不顯露, 不被恨惡.
                       以致不察不恨自己罪惡.                                 他口中的言語盡是罪孽詭詐,
                       口出言語盡是邪惡詭詐,                                     他與智慧善行已經斷絕.
                       因此他不再是明智良善.                                        他在床上圖謀罪孽,
                       即使在床他也圖謀作惡,                                 定意行不善的道, 不憎惡惡事.
                       執意行惡不再拒絕惡事.               英文
                                                   An oracle is within my heart
                                          concerning the sinfulness of the wicked.
                                           There is no fear of God before his eyes.
                                            For in his own eyes he flatters himself
                                                too much to detect or hate his sin.
                                     The words of his mouth are wicked and deceitful;
                                           he has ceased to be wise and to do good.
                                                    Even on his bed he plots evil;
                      he commits hiimself to a sinful course and does not reject what is wrong.
              說明: 1. An oracle is within my heart concerning the sinfulness of the wicked
                           應譯 "一則有關惡人罪行的聖言, 深藏我心" 非 "惡人的罪過在他心裏說"
                       2. too much to detect or hate his sin.
                             應譯 "以致不察不恨自己罪惡" 非 "以為他的罪孽終不顯露, 不被恨惡"
                       3. Even 未譯出 / evil 應譯 "作惡" 非 "罪孽"
                       4. he has ceased to be wise and to do good.
                             應譯 "他不再是明智良善" 非 "他與智慧善行已經斷絕"
                       5. he commits hiimself to a sinful course and does not reject what is wrong.
                             譯 "執意行惡不再拒絕惡事" 較 "定意行不善的道, 不憎惡惡事" 恰切.

36:5-6   原譯甚佳.
                 新譯 "耶和華啊! 你的慈愛上及諸天,                  原譯 "耶和華啊! 你的慈愛上及諸天,
                               你的信實達到穹蒼.                                        你的信實達到穹蒼.
                               你的公義好像高山,                                        你的公義好像高山,
                               你的公正如同深淵.                                        你的判斷如同深淵.
                        耶和華啊! 無論人畜你都庇佑.                        耶和華啊! 人民、牲畜, 你都救護.
                 說明: 1. justice 譯 "公正" 較 "判斷" 切合原意.
                           2. both man and beast 譯 "無論人畜" 較 "人民、畜牲" 簡明雅達.

36:7-9   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
              新譯 你的慈愛何其寶貴!                                            原譯 神啊,
                     世上的人無論貴賤                                         你的慈愛何其寶貴!
                     都投靠你翅膀蔭下.                                       世人投靠你翅膀蔭下.
                     他們都在你的殿中,                                他們必因你殿裏的肥甘得以飽足,
                     飽享盛宴喝樂河水.                                    你也必叫他們喝你樂河的水.
                因為生命的泉源在你那裏,                                 因為在你那裏有生命的泉頭,
                在你的光中我們必得見光.                                  在你的光中, 我們必得見光.
         說明: 1. 英文無 "神啊" 應刪除.
                       未將 Both high and low(無論貴賤) 譯出, 應補上
                  2. feast on the abundance 譯 "飽享盛宴" 較 "肥甘得以飽足" 雅達.

36:10-12   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                  新譯 求你續施慈愛給認識你的人,                      原譯 願你常施慈愛給認識你的人,
                         並常施公義給心地正直的人.                              常以公義待心裏正直的人.
                            不容驕傲人的腳踐踏我,                                  不容驕傲人的腳踐踏我;
                            也不讓惡人的手驅逐我,                                  不容兇惡人的手趕逐我,
                          看看惡人怎樣跌倒, 在那裏,                                  作孽的人已經仆倒,
                              一旦倒下永不翻身!                                     他們被推倒, 不能再起來!
                  說明: 1. the wicked 譯 "惡人" 較 "兇惡人" 雅達.
                           2. See 應譯 "看看" 非 "在那裏"
                                 the evildoers 譯 "惡人" 較 "作孽的人" 雅達.
                           3. thrown down, not able to rise!
                                 譯 "一旦倒下永不翻身" 較 "他們被推倒, 不能再起來" 簡明雅達.

                                                                       37. 心平靠神
37:1-2   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
              新譯 不要對作惡的人, 心懷不平,                               原譯   不要為作惡的心懷不平,
                    不要為行錯的人, 心生嫉妒.                                    也不要向那行不義的生出嫉妒.
                       因他們像青草很快枯萎;                                           因為他們如草快被割下,
                       他們又像綠苗很快凋謝.                                               又如青菜快要枯乾.
              說明: 1. those who do wrong 譯 "行錯的人" 呼應 "作惡的人" 較 "那行不義的" 切合原意.
                        2. envious of 譯 "心生嫉妒" 較 "生出嫉妒" 切合原意.
                        3. wither 應譯 "枯萎" 非 "割下"
                        4. like green plants they will soon die away.
                              譯 "他們又像綠苗很快凋謝" 較 "又如青菜快要枯乾" 切合原意.

37:3-4   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                   新譯 要信靠耶和華行善,                                   原譯 你們當依靠耶和華而行善,
                         安居地上安享糧草.                                        住在地上, 以他的信實為糧.
                         還要因耶和華喜樂,                                              又要以耶和華為樂,
                         衪就賜你心中所求.                                        他就將你心裏所求的賜給你.
                  說明: 1. dwell in the land and enjoy safe pasture
                               譯 "安居地上安享糧草" 較 "住在地上, 以他的信實為糧" 通順雅達.
                            2. he will give you the desire of your heart
                                  譯 "衪就賜你心中所求" 較 "他就將你心裏所求的賜給你" 簡明雅達.

37:5-6   原譯欠通順工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                新譯 把你的道路交託耶和華,                               原譯 當將你的事交託耶和華,
                      並且信靠衪好讓衪促成:                                       並依靠他, 他就必成全.
                      你的公義有如破曉曙光,                                    他要使你的公義有如光發出,
                      你的公正有如日正當中.                                          你的公平明如正午.
               說明: 1. your way 譯 "你的道路" 較 "你的事" 切合原意.
                         2. shine like the dawn 譯 "破曉曙光" 較 "有如光發出" 雅達.
                         3. the noonday sun 譯 "日正當中" 較 "明如正午" 雅達.

37:7   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
           新譯: 在耶和華的面前當靜默,                                   原譯: 你當默然倚靠耶和華,
                  同時還要耐心去等候衪;                                                 耐性等候他;
                  不要對凡事成功順利的                                             不要因那道路通達的
                  和惡謀得逞的心懷不平.                                          和那惡謀成就的心懷不平.
          說明: 1. men succeed in their ways
                        譯 "凡事成功順利的" 較 "因那道路通達的" 雅達.
                    2. when they carry out their wicked schemes.
                          譯 "惡謀得逞的" 較 "惡謀成就的" 恰切.

37:8-11   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                新譯: 你要抑制怒氣消除烈怒,                                 原譯: 當止住怒氣, 離棄忿怒;
                        勿心懷不平免導致作惡.                                       不要心懷不平, 以致作惡.
                        因為惡人定必都被剪除,                                          因為作惡的必被剪除,
                 唯有盼望耶和華的, 才能承受地土.                               惟有等候耶和華的必承受地土.
                       再過不久惡人就不存在了,                                      還有片時, 惡人要歸於無有,
                       即使你四處找尋也找不到.                                  你就是細察他的住處, 要歸於無有.
                       溫柔謙卑的人必承受地土,                                           但謙卑人必承受地土,
                       充份享受豐盛的平安喜樂.                                             以豐盛的平安為業.
          說明: 1. evil men 譯 "惡人" 較 "作惡的" 雅達.
                    2. no more 譯 "不存在了" 較 "歸於無有" 通俗.
                    3. the meek 譯 "溫柔謙卑的人" 較 "謙卑人" 恰切.
                    4. enjoy great peace 譯 "充份享受豐盛的平安喜樂" 較 "以豐盛的平安為業" 切合原意.

37:12-13  原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                 新譯: 惡人密謀害義人,                                          原譯: 惡人設謀害義人,
                         對他們咬牙切齒.                                                   又向他們咬牙.
                      但是主卻在譏笑惡人,                                                   主要笑他,
                      因衪知他們末日快到.                                        因見他受罰的日子將要來到.
               說明: 1. gnash teeth 譯 "咬牙切齒" 較 "咬牙" 恰切.
                         2. laughs at the wicked 譯 "譏笑惡人" 較 "要笑他" 恰切.
                         3. for he knows their day is coming
                               譯 "因衪知他們末日快到" 較 "因見他受罰的日子將要來到" 切合原意.

37:14-15   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
           新譯: 惡人的刀已出鞘, 箭也上弦;                            原譯: 惡人已經弓上弦, 刀出鞘,
                      要射殺困苦貧窮的人,                                            要打倒困苦窮乏的人,
                      並殺害行為正直的人,                                            要殺害行動正直的人,
                      但他們的劍必刺己心,                                         他們的刀必刺入自己的心,
                      且他們的弓必被折斷.                                              他們的弓必被折斷.
            說明: upright 譯 "行為正直" 較 "行動正直" 切合原意.

37:16-17   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                     新譯: 義人擁有雖少,                                   原譯: 一個義人所有的雖少,
                            勝過惡人富裕.                                             強過許多惡人的富裕.
                        因為耶和華扶持義人,                                      因為惡人的膀臂必被折斷,
                        惡人的膀臂必被折斷.                                          但耶和華是扶持義人
                 說明: the righteous 譯 "義人" 即可, 不必譯 "一個義人"

37:18-19   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
              新譯: 耶和華眷顧完美人的日子,                           原譯: 耶和華知道完全人的日子,
                          他們的產業必永存.                                        他們的產業要存到永遠.
                          災難來臨時不受害,                                     他們在急難的時候不至羞愧,
                          饑荒的日子得飽足.                                         在饑荒的日子必得飽足.
              說明: 1. the blameless 應譯 "完美人" 因世上無 "完全人"
                        2. wither 原意 "枯萎" 故譯 "受害" 較 "羞愧" 切合原意.

37:20-22   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                              新譯: 惡人卻要滅亡;                          原譯: 惡人卻要滅亡,
                              耶和華的仇敵像田野之美,               耶和華的仇敵要像羊羔的脂油,
                                 很快消失, 如煙消逝.                      他們要消滅, 要如煙消滅.
                                     惡人只借不還,                              惡人借貸而不償還,
                                     義人慷慨施捨.                          義人卻恩待人, 並且施捨.
                              耶和華祝福的, 必承地土;                  蒙耶和華賜福的, 必承受地土;
                              受到衪咒詛的, 必被剪除.                       被他咒詛的, 必被剪除.
                   說明: 1. the beauty of the fields 應譯 "田野之美" 非 "羊羔的脂油"
                             2. the righteous give generously
                                   譯 "義人慷慨施捨" 較 "義人卻恩待人, 並且施捨" 簡明恰切.

37:23-24   原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應予修正如新譯.
                                新譯                                                         原譯
                   耶和華若喜悅人的道路,                         義人的腳步被耶和華立定,
                   祂定必使他的腳步穩定.                          他的道路, 耶和華也喜愛.
                      即使失腳也不仆倒;                           他雖失腳, 也不至全身仆倒,
                      因耶和華手扶持他.            英文             因為耶和華用手攙扶他.
                                    If the Lord delights in a man's way,
                                            he makes his steps firm;
                                    though he stumble, he will not fall,
                                 for the Lord upholds him with his hand.
              說明: 1. If the Lord delights in a man's way
                           應譯 "耶和華若喜悅人的道路" 非 "他的道路, 耶和華也喜愛"
                        2. he makes his steps firm;
                              應譯 "祂定必使他的腳步穩定" 非 "義人的腳步被耶和華立定"

37:25-26   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                  新譯: 從前我年幼現在年老;                            原譯: 從前我年幼, 現在年老;
                         但我從未見義人被棄,                                       卻未見過義人被棄,
                         他們子孫靠乞討度日.                                    也未見過他的後裔討飯.
                           他們常常慷慨施捨,                                      他終日恩待人, 借給人,
                           他們子孫全都蒙福.                                          他的後裔也蒙福.
               說明: 1. begging bread 譯 "乞討" 較 "討飯" 雅達.
                         2. always 譯 "常常" 較 "終日" 切合原意.
                         3. lend freely 譯 "慷慨施捨" 較 "借給人" 雅達.

37:27-29   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                  新譯: 你們要離惡行善,                                      原譯: 你當離惡行善,
                          就可以永遠安居.                                              就可永遠安居.
                         因耶和華喜愛公平,                                        因為耶和華喜愛公平,
                         不會撇棄祂的聖民,                                           不撇棄他的聖民,
                         他們永遠蒙神保佑;                                             他們永蒙保佑;
                         但惡人後裔必剪除.                                         但惡人的後裔必剪除.
                         義人定必承受地土,                                             義人必承受地土,
                   而且永遠安居其上. 永居其上.
            說明: you 譯 "你們" 較 "你" 切合原意.

37:30-31   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                  新譯: 義人的口說出智慧,                                     原譯: 義人的口談論智慧,
                          衪的舌頭講說公平.                                             他的舌頭講說公平.
                          神的律法在衪心裏,                                             神的律法在他心裏,
                          衪的腳步不會滑倒.                                               他的腳總不滑跌.
                  說明: utters 譯 "說出" 較 "談論" 切合原意.

37:32-33   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                  新譯: 惡人埋伏窺伺義人,                                           原譯: 惡人窺探義人,
                         想謀害他們的性命.                                                       想要殺他.
                但耶和華不會把義人交惡人手中,                                    耶和華必不撇他在惡人手中,
                在審判的時候也不會定他們的罪.                                     當審判的時候, 也定他的罪.
        說明: seeking their very lives 譯 "想謀害他們的性命" 較 "想要殺他" 恰切雅達.

37:34   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
             新譯: 你要等候耶和華謹守祂的道,                                原譯: 你當等候耶和華, 遵守他的道,
                     衪定必高舉你使你承受地土;                                         他就抬舉你, 使你承受地土.
                     你必定會看見剪除惡人之日.                                        惡人被剪除的時候, 你必看見.
             說明: exalt 譯 "高舉" 較 "抬舉" 恰切.

37:35-36   原譯尚佳, 稍加修正即可.
                  新譯: 我見過粗暴的惡人亨通興順,                           原譯: 我見過惡人大有勢力,
                      像青翠樹木在本土篷勃生長.                                  好像一棵青翠樹在本土生發.
                         但他們很快就消逝無蹤,                                 有人從那裏經過, 不料, 他沒有了,
                         我到處去找尋也找不到.                                         我也尋找他, 卻尋不著.
                  說明: flourishing 應譯 "享通興順" 非 "大有勢力"

37:37-38   原譯西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應予修正如新譯.
                  新譯: 求你眷顧完美的人, 察看正直的人;         原譯: 你要細察那完全人, 觀看那正直的人;
                                  因為平和的人有前途.                                  因為和平人有好結局.
                                  所有罪人定必被滅絕,                              至於犯法的人, 必一同滅絕,
                                  惡人的後裔終必剪除.                                       惡人終必剪除.
                  說明: 1. the blameless 應譯 "完美的人" 因世上無 "完全人"
                            2. future 譯 "有前途" 較 "有好結局" 切合原意.
                            3. sinners 譯 "罪人" 較 "犯法的人" 切合原意.
                            4. the posterity of the wicked 應譯 "惡人的後裔" 非 "惡人"

37:39-40   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                   新譯: 義人的救恩來自耶和華,                                   原譯: 但義人得救, 是由於耶和華,
                           患難時衪是他們的堡壘.                                            他在患難時作他們的營寨.
                          耶和華幫助他們解救他們;                                         耶和華幫助他們, 解救他們;
                          救他們脫離惡人拯救他們,                                              他解救他們脫離惡人,
                          因為他們一心信賴投靠衪.                                       把他們救出來, 因為他們投靠衪.
                   說明: stronghold 譯 "堡壘" 較 "營寨" 雅達.

                                                             38. 認罪祈求
38:1-4   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
              新譯: 耶和華啊! 求你不要在忿怒中責備我,            原譯: 耶和華啊, 求你不要在怒中責備我,
                             也不要在烈怒中管教我,                                     不要在烈怒中懲罰我,
                                因你的箭射穿我身,                                        因為你的箭射入我身,
                                你的手緊緊壓住我.                                             你的手壓住我.
                            因你的忿怒, 我體無完膚;                                因你的惱怒, 我的肉無一完全;
                            因我的罪過, 我渾身不寧.                               因我的罪過, 我的骨頭也不安寧.
                                我的罪孽充滿全身,                                          我的罪孽高過我的頭,
                                如擔當不起的重擔.                                         如同重擔叫我擔當不起.
              說明: 1. discipline 譯 "管教" 較 "懲罰" 切合原意.
                       2. pierced 譯 "射穿" 較 "射入" 切合原意.
                       3. there is no health in my body
                             譯 "我體無完膚" 較 "我的肉無一完全" 雅達.
                       4. my bones have no soundness
                             譯 "我渾身不寧" 較 "我的骨頭也不安寧" 雅達.
                       5. My guilt has overwhelmed me
                             譯 "我的罪孽充滿全身" 較 "我的罪孽高過我的頭" 雅達.
                       6. like a burden too heavy to bear
                             譯 "如擔當不起的重擔" 較 "如同重擔叫我擔當不起" 雅達.

38:5-8    原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應予修正如新譯.
                               新譯                                                              原譯
                   因為我罪惡的愚眛,                                            因我的愚眛,
                   我的傷口惡臭流膿.                                          我的傷惡臭流膿.
                   我傷痛得彎身拳曲,                                         我疼痛, 大大拳曲,
                   終日四處奔走哀號.                                               終日哀痛.
                   我的背也灼痛難熬,                                              我滿腰是火,
                   我真的是體無完膚;                                           我的肉無一完全.
                   我疲弱被壓得粉碎;                                         我被壓傷, 身體疲倦,
                   心中苦痛不住呻吟.                 英文                  因心裏不安, 我就唉哼.
                                    My wounds fester and are loathsome
                                             because of my sinful folly.
                                  I am bowed down and brought very low;
                                        all day long I go about mourning.
                                        My back is filled with searing pain;
                                            there is no health in my body.
                                          I am feeble and utterly crushed;
                                                                        I groan in anguish of heart.
                  說明: 1. because of my sinful folly
                                譯 "因為我罪惡的愚眛" 較 "因我的愚眛" 完整達意.
                            2. My back is filled with searing pain;
                                  應譯 "我的背也灼痛難熬" 非 "我滿腰是火"
                            3. there is no health in my body
                                  應譯 "我真的是體無完膚" 非 "我的肉無一完全"
                            4. I am feeble and utterly crushed
                                  應譯 "我疲弱被壓得粉碎" 非 "我被壓傷, 身體疲倦"
                            5. I groan in anguish of heart
                                  應譯 "心中苦痛不住呻吟" 非 "因心裏不安, 我就唉哼"

38:9-10   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                新譯: 主啊! 我的熱望明擺你面前,                         原譯: 主啊! 我的心願都在你面前,
                          我的嘆息也不向你隱瞞.                                        我的嘆息不向你隱瞞.
                          我的心猛跳我的力衰退;                                        我心跳動, 我力衰微;
                          連我眼中的光芒也消失.                                       連我眼中的光也沒有了.
                說明: 1. longings 譯 "熱望" 較 "心願" 恰切達意.
                          2. lie open 譯 "明擺" 較 "都在" 恰切達意.
                          3. heart pounds 譯 "猛跳" 較 "跳動" 達意.
                          4. has gone 譯 "消失" 較 "也沒有了" 雅達.

38:11-12   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                  新譯: 我所有的良朋和密友,                                    原譯: 我的良朋密友,
                         都因我的災難遠離我;                                   因我的災病都躲在旁邊站著;
                         我的鄰舍也躲得遠遠.                                    我的親戚本家也遠遠地站立.
                         那索我命的佈下網羅,                                       那尋索我命的設下網羅,
                         那要害我的口出惡言;                                      那想要害我的, 口出惡言;
                         他們終日在密謀害我.                                              終日思想詭計.
                  說明: 1. avoid me 譯 "遠離我" 較 "躲在旁邊站著" 雅達.
                           2. stay far away 譯 "躲得遠遠" 較 "遠遠地站立" 雅達.
                           3. neighbors 譯 "鄰舍" 較 "親戚本家" 切合原意.
                           4. plot deception 譯 "密謀害我" 較 "思想詭計" 恰切.

38:13-14   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                  新譯: 我如聾子不能聽見,                                           原譯: 但我如聾子不聽,
                         像個啞巴不能開口.                                                     像啞巴不開口.
                         我竟成聽不見的人,                                                    我如不聽見的人,
                         一個有口莫辯的人.                                                      口中沒有回話.
                  說明: 1. 新譯 "不能聽見" "不能開口 "較 "不聽" "不開口" 雅達工整.
                           2. offer no reply 譯 "有口莫辯" 較 "沒有回話" 達意.

38:15-16   原譯欠通順簡潔工整, 應加修正如新譯.
                  新譯: 耶和華啊! 我等候你;                                   原譯: 耶和華啊! 我仰望你!
                       主我的神啊! 你定要回應.                                       主我的神啊! 你應允我.
                        因此我說: "當我失足時,                                    我曾說: "恐怕他們向我誇耀.
                          不要讓他們幸災樂禍.                                                我失足的時候,
                           也不讓他們騎我頭上."                                              他們向我誇大.
                  說明: 1. wait 譯 "等候" 較 "仰望" 切合原意.
                            2. will answer 譯 "定要回應" 較 "你應允我" 切合原意.
                            3. Do not let them gloat
                                  應譯 "不要讓他們幸災樂禍" 非 "恐怕他們向我誇耀"
                            4. exalt themselves over me
                                  譯 "不讓他們騎我頭上" 較 "他們向我誇大" 切合原意.

                               詩篇譯文瑕疵剖析(III)
                                            41-60

41.   27:13-14 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
         新譯: 我對此仍充滿信心:
                   在這活人之地,
                   我可看見耶和華的美善.
                   要等候耶和華!
                   要剛強堅定,
                   等候耶和華!
          原譯: 我若不信在活人之地,
                   得見耶和華的恩惠,
                   就早已喪膽了.
                   要等候耶和華!
                   當壯膽, 堅固你的心.
                   我再說: 要等候耶和華!
           英文: I am still confident of this:
                     I will see the goodness of the Lord
                     in the land of living.
                     Wait for the Lord;
                     be strong and take heart and wait for the Lord.
            說明: 1. 第13節英文本係肯定語氣, 非假設語氣, 且無 "就早已喪膽了" 之意, 應改正.
                          the goodness 譯 "美善" 較 "恩惠" 切合原意.
                      2. be strong and take heart
                            譯 "要剛強堅定" 較 "當壯膽, 堅固你的心" 簡明恰切.
                      3. and wait for the Lord
                            譯 "等候耶和華!" 較 "我再說: 要等候耶和華" 簡明恰切.
                            英文本無 "我再說" 應刪除.

42.   28:1-2 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
         新譯: 耶和華我的磬石啊! 我向你呼求,
                   求你不要掩耳不聽.
                    因你若仍緘默不語,
                    我就像陰間的死人.
                    當我向你的至聖所,
                    舉手呼求賜助之時;
                    求垂聽我憐憫呼求.
          原譯: 耶和華啊, 我要求告你;
                     我的磬石啊, 不要向我緘默;
                     徜若你向我閉口,
                     我就如將死的人一樣.
                     我呼求你,
                     向你至聖所舉手的時候,
                     求你垂聽我懇求的聲音!
           英文: To you I call, O Lord my Rock;
                      do not turn a deaf ear to me.
                      For if you remain silent,
                      I will be like those who have gone down to the pit.
                      Hear my cry for mercy
                      as I call to you for help,
                      as I lift up my hamds toward your Most Holy Place.
            說明: 1. turn a deaf ear 譯 "掩耳不聽" 較 "緘默" 切合原意.
                          remain silent 譯 "緘默不語" 較 "向我閉口" 雅達.
                       2. I will be like those who have gone down to the pit
                              譯 "我就像陰間的死人" 較 "我就如將死的人一樣" 切合原意.
                       3. Hear my cry for mercy
                              應譯 "求垂聽我憐憫呼求" 非 "求你垂聽我懇求的聲音"
                        4. as I call to you for help, as I lift up my hamds toward your Most Holy Place
                              應譯 "當我向你的至聖所, 舉手呼求賜助之時"
                              非 "我呼求你, 向你至聖所舉手的時候"

43.   29:6-9 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
        新譯: 祂使黎巴嫩跳躍如牛犢,
                 使西連跳躍如野公牛犢.
                 耶和華的聲音
                 隨著閃電劈下.
                 耶和華的聲音震動曠野,
                 耶和華震動加低斯曠野.
                 耶和華的聲音猛扭橡樹,
                 使所有林木的葉落光禿.
                 在衪殿中的都驚呼: "榮耀!"
                 原譯: 他也使之跳躍如牛犢,
                 使黎巴嫩和西連跳躍如野牛犢.
                 耶和華的聲音
                 使火焰分岔.
                 耶和華的聲音震動曠野,
                 耶和華震動加低斯的曠野.
                 耶和華的聲音驚動母鹿落胎,
                 樹木也脫落淨光.
                 凡在他殿中的, 都稱說他的榮耀.
         英文: He makes Lebanon skip like a calf,
                   Sirion like a young wild ox.
                   The voice of the Lord strikes
                   with flashes of lightning.
                   The voice of the Lord shakes the desert;
                   the Lord shakes the Desert of Kadesh.
                   The voice of the Lord twists the oaks
                   and strips the forests bare.
                   And in his temple all cry, "Glory!"
          說明: 1. 原文分述: 黎巴嫩跳躍如牛犢 / 西連跳躍如野公牛犢; 中譯顯未分清.
                     2. strike with fleshes of lightning 應譯 "隨著閃電劈下" 非 "使火焰分岔"
                     3. twists the oaks 譯 "扭動橡樹" 上下文呼應, 較合邏輯.
                            原譯採另一版本 "Lord makes the deer give birth" 似格格不入.
                     4. strips the forests bare 譯 "使所有林木的葉落光禿" 較 "樹木也脫落淨光" 雅達.
                     5. all cry, "Glory! 譯 "都驚呼 '榮耀!'" 較 "都稱說他的榮耀" 簡潔有力.

44.     29:10-11 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
           新譯: 耶和華坐洪水上為王,
                     耶和華永遠坐著為王!
                     願耶和華賜力量給祂的子民,
                     願耶和華賜平安給祂的子民!
           原譯: 洪水泛濫之時, 耶和華坐著為王,
                     耶和華坐著為王, 直到永遠.
                     耶和華必賜力量給他的百姓,
                     耶和華必賜平安;的福給他的百姓!
            英文: The Lord sits enthroned over the flood;
                       the Lord is enthroned as King forever.
                       The Lord gives strength to his people;
                       the Lord blesses his people with peace.
            說明: 1. The Lord sits enthroned over the flood
                          應譯 "耶和華坐洪水上為王" 非 "洪水泛濫之時, 耶和華坐著為王"
                          over the flood 指現狀非時間, 故非 "洪水泛濫之時"
                       2. the Lord blesses his people with peace.
                             譯 "願耶和華賜平安給祂的子民" 較 "耶和華必賜平安;的福給他的百姓" 切合原意.

45.     31:9-10 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
           新譯: 耶和華啊! 求你憐憫我,
                     因為我陷身患難之中;
                     我的眼睛因愁煩昏花,
                     且我的身心滿是憂傷.
                     我的生命因愁苦耗盡,
                     歲月在呻吟之中消逝,
                     我的精力因困苦衰退,
                     我的身體也日益衰弱.
           原譯: 耶和華啊! 求你憐恤我,
                     因為我在急難之中;
                     我的眼睛因憂愁乾癟,
                     連我的身心也不安舒.
                     我的生命為愁苦所消耗,
                     我的年歲為嘆息所曠廢,
                     我的力量因我的罪孽衰敗,
                     我的骨頭也枯乾.
            英文: Be merciful to me, O Lord,
                      for I am in distress;
                      my eyes grow weak with sorrow,
                      my soul and my body with grief.
                      My life is consumed by anguish
                      and my years by groaning;
                      my strength fails because of my affliction,
                      and my bones grow weak.
             說明: 1. distress 譯 "患難" 較 "急難" 恰切.
                       2. go weak 應譯 "昏花" 非 "乾癟"
                       3. with grief 應譯 "憂傷" 非 "不安舒"
                       4. consumed by groaning 應譯 "呻吟之中消逝 "非 "嘆息所曠廢"
                       5. my strength fails because of my affliction,
                              譯 "我的精力因困苦衰退" 較 "我的力量因我的罪孽衰敗" 恰切.
                        6. bones go weak 應譯 "身體也日益衰弱" 非 "骨頭也乾枯"

46.     31:21-22 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
           新譯: 耶和華是應當讚美的!
                     因當我身陷圍困城中,
                     祂向我顯示奇妙慈愛.
                     我在警覺清醒時曾說:
                   "我在你的眼前被隔絕!"
                     然而當我呼叫求救時,
                     你仍垂聽我憐憫呼求.
            原譯: 耶和華是應當稱頌的!
                      因為他在堅固城裏
                      向我施展奇妙的慈愛.
                      至於我, 我曾急促地說:
                     "我從你眼前被隔絕."
                       然而, 我呼求你的時候,
                       你仍聽我懇求的聲音.
              英文: Praise be to the Lord,
                        for he showed his wonderful love to me
                        when I was in a besieged city.
                        In my alarm I said,
                       "I am cut off from your sight!"
                        Yet you heard my cry for mercy
                        when I called to you for help.
               說明: 1. when I was in a besieged city
                             應譯 "當我身陷圍困城中" 非 "他在堅固城裏"
                         2. In my alarm I said
                                應譯 "我在警覺清醒時曾說" 非 "至於我, 我曾急促地說"
                         3. Yet you heard my cry for mercy
                                譯 "你仍垂聽我憐憫呼求" 較 "你仍聽我懇求的聲音" 恰切.

47.     32:3-5 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
           新譯: 我閉嘴不認罪的時侯,
                     就終日呻吟體力日衰.
                     你的手日夜重壓我身,
                     使我的精力日益耗竭,
                     如在盛夏酷熱中枯乾.
                     我才向你承認我的罪,
                     更進一步坦白我的惡;
                     並說: "我要向耶和華承認我的過犯."
                     你就赦免了我的罪惡.
            原譯: 我閉嘴不認罪的時侯,
                      因終日唉哼而骨頭枯乾.
                      黑夜白日, 你的手在我身上沉重,
                      我的精液耗盡,
                      如同夏天的乾旱.
                      我向你陳明我的罪,
                      不隱瞞我的惡.
                      並說: "我要向耶和華承認我的過犯."
                      你就赦免我的罪惡.
             英文: When I kept silent, my bones wasted away
                       through my groaning all day long.
                       For day and night your hand was heavy upon me;
                       my strength was sapped
                       as in the heat of summer.
                       Then I acknowledged my sin to you
                       and did not cover up my iniquity.
                       I said, "I will confess my transgressions to the Lord."
                       and you forgave the guilt of my sin.
              說明: 1. my bones wasted away, through my groaning all day long
                            應譯 "就終日呻吟體力日衰" 非 "因終日唉哼而骨頭枯乾"
                        2. For day and night your hand was heavy upon me;
                               譯 "你的手日夜重壓我身" 較 "黑夜白日, 你的手在我身上沉重" 簡潔達意.
                        3. my strength was sapped
                               應譯 "使我的精力日益耗竭"非 "我的精液耗盡"
                        4. as in the heat of summer
                               譯 "如在盛夏酷熱中枯乾" 較 "如同夏天的乾旱" 恰切.
                        5. acknowledged 譯 "承認" 較 "陳明" 切合原意.

48.     35:13-15 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
           新譯: 當他們生病的時候,
                     我卻穿上麻衣禁食;
                     當我禱告沒回應時,
                     我奔走哀號, 待他們如友好兄弟;
                     我低頭悲痛, 如為自己母親哀哭.
                     但我跌倒時, 他們竟聚首稱慶,
                     我沒防備時, 他們集結攻擊我.
                     他們不斷地公然毀謗我.
            原譯: 至於我, 當他們有病的時候,
                      我便穿麻衣, 禁食, 刻苦己心,
                      我所求的都歸到自己的懷中.
                      我這樣行, 好像他是我的朋友, 我的弟兄;
                      我屈身悲哀, 如同人為母親哀痛.
                      我在患難中, 他們卻歡喜, 大家聚集;
                      我所不認識的那些下流人聚集攻擊我,
                      他們不住地把我撕裂.
              英文: Yet when they were ill, I put on sackcloth
                        and humbled myself with fasting.
                        When my prayers returned to me unanswered,
                         I went about mourning as though for my friend or brother.
                         I bowed my head in grief as though weeping for my mother.
                         But when I stumble, they gather in glee;
                         attackers gathered against me when I was unaware.
                         They slandered me without ceasing.
                說明: 1. I put on sackcloth and humbled myself with fasting
                              譯 "我卻穿上麻衣禁食" 較 "我便穿麻衣, 禁食, 刻苦己心" 切合原意.
                          2. When my prayers returned to me unanswered
                                 應譯 "當我禱告沒回應時" 非 "我所求的都歸到自己的懷中"
                          3. I went about mourning as though for my friend or brother.
                                 應譯 "我奔走哀號, 待他們如友好兄弟" 非 "我這樣行, 好像他是我的朋友, 我的弟兄"
                          4. I bowed my head in grief as though weeping for my mother.
                                 譯 "我低頭悲痛, 如為自己母親哀哭" 較 "我屈身悲哀, 如同人為母親哀痛" 恰切.
                          5. when I stumble 應譯 "但我跌倒時," 非 "我在患難中"
                          6. they gather in glee 譯 "他們竟聚首稱慶" 較 "他們卻歡喜, 大家聚集" 通順恰切.
                          7. attackers 指上節 "他們" 非 "我所不認識的那些下流人"
                          8. slandered 應譯 "毀謗" 非 "撕裂"

49. 36:1-4     原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
                      新譯: 一則有關惡人罪行的聖言,
                                深藏我心:
                               "他的眼中不怕神!"
                                因在他眼中他自誇自媚,
                                以致不察不恨自己罪惡.
                                口出言語盡是邪惡詭詐,
                                因此他不再是明智良善.
                                即使在床他也圖謀作惡,
                                執意行惡不再拒絕惡事.
                        原譯: 惡人的罪過在他心裏說:
                              "我眼中不怕神!"
                                他自誇自媚, 以為他的罪孽
                                終不顯露, 不被恨惡.
                                他口中的言語盡是罪孽詭詐,
                                他與智慧善行已經斷絕.
                                他在床上圖謀罪孽,
                                定意行不善的道, 不憎惡惡事.
                         英文: An oracle is within my heart
                                   concerning the sinfulness of the wicked.
                                   There is no fear of God before his eyes.
                                   For in his own eyes he flatters himself
                                   too much to detect or hate his sin.
                                   The words of his mouth are wicked and deceitful;
                                   he has ceased to be wise and to do good.
                                   Even on his bed he plots evil;
                                   he commits hiimself to a sinful course and does not reject what is wrong.
                           說明: 1. An oracle is within my heart concerning the sinfulness of the wicked
                                         應譯 "一則有關惡人罪行的聖言, 深藏我心" 非 "惡人的罪過在他心裏說"
                                     2. too much to detect or hate his sin.
                                            應譯 "以致不察不恨自己罪惡" 非 "以為他的罪孽終不顯露, 不被恨惡"
                                     3. wicked 應譯 "邪惡" 非 "罪孽"
                                     4. he has ceased to be wise and to do good.
                                            應譯 "他不再是明智良善" 非 "他與智慧善行已經斷絕"

50. 37:23-24     原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應予修正如新譯.
                           新譯: 耶和華若喜悅人的道路,
                                     祂定必使他的腳步穩定.
                                     即使失腳也不仆倒;
                                     因耶和華手扶持他.
                           原譯: 義人的腳步被耶和華立定,
                                     他的道路, 耶和華也喜愛.
                                     他雖失腳, 也不至全身仆倒,
                                     因為耶和華用手攙扶他.
                            英文: If the Lord delights in a man's way,
                                      he makes his steps firm;
                                      though he stumble, he will not fall,
                                      for the Lord upholds him with his hand.
                             說明: 1. If the Lord delights in a man's way
                                           應譯 "耶和華若喜悅人的道路" 非 "他的道路, 耶和華也喜愛"
                                        2. he makes his steps firm;
                                               應譯 "祂定必使他的腳步穩定" 非 "義人的腳步被耶和華立定"

51. 38:5-8     原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順, 應予修正如新譯.
                       新譯: 因為我罪惡的愚眛,
                                 我的傷口惡臭流膿.
                                 我傷痛得彎身拳曲,
                                 終日四處奔走哀號.
                                 我的背也灼痛難熬,
                                 我真的是體無完膚;
                                 我疲弱被壓得粉碎;
                                 心中苦痛不住呻吟.
                        原譯: 因我的愚眛,
                                  我的傷惡臭流膿.
                                  我疼痛, 大大拳曲,
                                  終日哀痛.
                                  我滿腰是火,
                                  我的肉無一完全.
                                  我被壓傷, 身體疲倦,
                                  因心裏不安, 我就唉哼.
                          英文: My wounds fester and are loathsome
                                    because of my sinful folly.
                                    I am bowed down and brought very low;
                                    all day long I go about mourning.
                                    My back is filled with searing pain;
                                    there is no health in my body.
                                    I am feeble and utterly crushed;
                                    I groan in anguish of heart.
                            說明: 1. because of my sinful folly
                                       譯 "因為我罪惡的愚眛" 較 "因我的愚眛" 完整達意.
                                       2. My back is filled with searing pain;
                                              應譯 "我的背也灼痛難熬" 非 "我滿腰是火"
                                       3. there is no health in my body
                                              應譯 "我真的是體無完膚" 非 "我的肉無一完全"
                                       4. I am feeble and utterly crushed
                                              應譯 "我疲弱被壓得粉碎" 非 "我被壓傷, 身體疲倦"
                                       5. I groan in anguish of heart
                                               應譯 "心中苦痛不住呻吟" 非 "因心裏不安, 我就唉哼"

52. 39:4-6     原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順工整, 應予修正如新譯.
                       新譯: "耶和華啊! 求你指示我,
                                  我的人生結局如何,
                                  我的歲數又有多少?
                                  我的生命如何飛逝?
                                  你使我的年日狹窄如手掌;
                                  一生年歲在你面前如無有.
                                  人的生命只不過是一口氣.
                                  人生來去匆促不過是幻影,
                                   孜孜營營只是場空;
                                   積聚財寶不知為誰.
                          原譯: "耶和華啊! 求你叫我曉得
                                    我身之終,
                                    我的壽數幾何,
                                    叫我知道我的生命不長.
                                    你使我的年日狹窄如手掌;
                                    我一生的年數, 在你面前如同無有.
                                    各人最穩妥的時候, 真是全然虛幻.
                                    世人行動實係幻影;
                                    他們忙亂, 真是枉然;
                                    積聚財寶, 不知將來有誰收取.
                            英文: "Show me, O Lord,
                                        my life's end
                                        and the number of my days;
                                         let me know how fleeting is my life.
                                         You have made my days a mere handbreatdh;
                                         the span of my years is as nothing before you.
                                         Each man's life is but a breath.
                                         Man is a mere phantom as he goes to and fro:
                                         He bustles about, but only in vain;
                                         he heaps up wealth, not knowing who will get it.
                                  說明: 1. Show me 譯 "求你指示我" 較 "求你叫我曉得" 恰切.
                                           2. my life's end 應譯 "我的人生結局如何" 非 "我身之終"
                                           3. how fleeting is my life 應譯 "我的生命如何飛逝" 非 "我的生命不長"
                                           4. Each man's life is but a breath
                                                 應譯 "人的生命只不過是一口氣" 非 "各人最穩妥的時候, 真是全然虛幻"
                                           5. goes to and fro 應譯 "來去匆匆" 非 "行動"
                                           6. He bustles about, but only in vain
                                                 譯 "孜孜營營只是場空" 較 "他們忙亂, 真是枉然" 雅達.
                                           7. not knowing who will get it
                                                 應譯 "不知為誰" 非 "不知將來有誰收取"

 53. 39:10-11     原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順工整, 應予修正如新譯.
                            新譯: 求你除去降我身上災禍,
                                      我承受不了你手的擊打.
                                      你因人罪責罰管教他們,
                                      你像蛀蟲蛀盡他們財富;
                                      人的生命只不過是口氣.
                             原譯: 求你把你的責罰從我身上免去,
                                       因你手的責打, 我便消滅.
                                       你因人的罪惡懲罰他的時候,
                                       叫他的笑容消滅, 如衣服被蟲所咬.
                                       世人真是虛幻.
                              英文: Remove your scourge from me;
                                        I am overcome by the blow of your hand.
                                        You rebuke and discipline men for their sin;
                                        you consume their wealth like a moth -
                                        each man is but a breath.
                               說明: 1. scourge 應譯 "災禍" 非 "責罰"
                                        2. I am overcome by the blow of your hand
                                              應譯 "我承受不了你手的擊打" 非 "因你手的責打, 我便消滅"
                                        3. you consume their wealth like a moth
                                              應譯 "你像蛀蟲蛀盡他們財富" 非 "叫他的笑容消滅, 如衣服被蟲所咬"
                                        4. each man is but a breath 應與第5節譯法一致
                                              應譯 "人的生命只不過是口氣" 非 "世人真是虛幻"

54. 39:10-11 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順工整, 應予修正如新譯.
       新譯: 耶和華啊! 求你垂聽我的禱告,
                 求你傾聽我的呼求;
                 求你勿充耳不聞我的哀哭,
                 因我在你面前像列祖一樣,
                 都是過路客旅全是寄居者.
                 在我去而不返之前,
                 求你不要怒目視我,
                 讓我仍可再度喜樂."
        原譯: 耶和華啊! 求你聽我的禱告,
                  留心聽我的呼求!
                  我流淚, 求你不要靜默無聲,
                  因為我在你面前是客旅,
                  是寄居的, 像我列祖一樣.
                  求你寬容我,
                  使我在去而不返之先,
                  可以力量復原."
          英文: Hear my prayer, O Lord,
                    listen to my cry for help;
                    be not deaf to my weeping.
                    For I dwell with you as an alien,
                    a stranger, as all my fathers were.
                    look away from me,
                    that I may rejoice again
                    before I depart and am no more."
             說明: 1. be not deaf to my weeping
                           應譯 "求你勿充耳不聞我的哀哭" 非 "我流淚, 求你不要靜默無聲"
                      2. look away from me
                              應譯 "不要怒目視我" 非 "求你寬容我"
                      3. I may rejoice again
                              應譯 "讓我仍可再度喜樂" 非 "可以力量復原"

55. 40:4-5 原譯有誤, 西式語氣太重, 且欠通順工整, 應予修正如新譯.
       新譯: 凡信靠耶和華,
                 不崇尚高傲, 遠離假神的人,
                 都是有福的.
                 耶和華我的神啊,
                 你行奇事何其多!
                 為我們籌劃的事真數算不清,
                 若要一一說出真是多不勝數.
        原譯: 那倚靠耶和華,
                  不理會狂傲和偏向虛假之輩的,
                  這人便為有福.
                  耶和華我的神啊,
                  你所行的奇事
                  並你向我們所懷的意念甚多, 不能向你陳明;
                  若要陳明其事不可勝數.
         英文: Blessed is the man who makes the Lord his trust,
                   who does not look to the pround,
                    to those who turn aside to false gods,
                    Many, O Lord my God,
                    are the wonders you have done.
                    The things you planned for us no one can recount to you,
                    were I to speak and tell of them, they would be too many to declare.
          說明: 1. does not look to the proud 應譯 "不崇尚高傲" 非 "不理會狂傲"
                    2. turn aside to false gods 應譯 "遠離假神" 非 "偏向虛假"
                    3. The things you planned for us no one can recount to you,
                           應譯 "為我們籌劃的事真數算不清" 非 "並你向我們所懷的意念甚多, 不能向你陳明"
                    4. were I to speak and tell of them, they would be too many to declare
                           譯 "若要一一說出真是多不勝數" 較 "若要陳明其事不可勝數" 恰切雅達.

56.  31:9-10 原譯有誤, 且欠簡潔通順工整, 應加潤飾修正.
       新譯: 所有我仇敵都耳語攻擊我;
                 他們心想我己陷絕境, 都說:
                "他怪病纏身, 臥病在床,
                 再也起不來了!"
                 連與我共席進膳信賴摯友,
                 也舉起腳踢我!
        原譯: 一切恨我的, 都交頭接耳語議論我;
                  他們設計要害我.
                  他們說: "有怪病貼在他身上;
                  他已躺臥, 必不能再起來."
                  連我知己的朋友,
                  我所倚靠吃過我飯的, 也用腳踢我!
        英文: All my enemies whisper together against me;
                  they imagine the worst for me, saying,
                "A vile desease has beset him;
                  he will never get up from the place where he lies."
                  Even my close friend, whom I trusted,
                  he who shared my bread, has lifted up his heel against me.
         說明: 1. All my enemies whisper together against me
                      應譯 "所有我仇敵都耳語攻擊我" 非 "一切恨我的, 都交頭接耳語議論我"
                  2. they imagine the worst for me, saying,
                        應譯 "他們心想我己陷絕境, 都說:" 非 "他們設計要害我. 他們說:"
                  3. A vile desease has beset him
                        譯 "他怪病纏身" 較 "有怪病貼在他身上" 雅達.
                  4. he will never get up from the place where he lies
                        譯 "臥病在床, 再也起不來了" 較 "他已躺臥, 必不能再起來." 切合原意.
                  5. he who shared my bread,
                        應譯 "與我共席進膳" 非 "吃過我飯的" 雅達.

57. 42:5     原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
                   新譯: 我的心哪! 你為何憂煩?
                            為何在我裏面不安?
                            當仰望神, 我要讚美衪,
                            衪是我的救主我的神.
                   原譯: 我的心哪! 你為何憂悶?
                            為何在我裏面煩躁?
                            應當仰望神, 因他笑臉幫助我,
                            我還要稱讚他.
                   英文: Why are you downcast, O my soul?
                             Why so disturbed within me?
                             put your hope in God,
                             for I will yet praise him, my Savior and my God.
                    說明: 1. disturbed 譯 "不安" 較 "煩躁" 切合原意.
                             2. my Savior and my God
                                   應譯 "衪是我的救主我的神" 非 "因他笑臉幫助我"

 58. 42:9-10 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
       新譯: 我向神我的磬石說:
               "你為甚麼忘記我呢?
                為何讓仇敵欺壓我,
                使我四處奔走哀號?"
                敵人整天辱罵並問我:
               "你的神在那裏呢?"
                使我身心受痛苦煎熬.
       原譯: 我要對神我的磬石說:
               "你為何忘記我呢?
                 我為何因仇敵的欺壓,
                 時常哀痛呢?"
                 我的敵人辱罵我, 好像打碎我的骨頭,
                 不住地對我說:
                "你的神在哪裏呢?"
          英文: I say to God my Rock,
                  "Why have you forgotten me?
                   Why must I go about mourning,
                    oppressed by the enemy?"
                    My bones suffer mortal agony as my foes taunt me,
                    saying to me all day long,
                   "Where is your God?"
           說明: 1. Why must I go about mourning, oppressed by the enemy?
                         應譯 "為何讓仇敵欺壓我, 使我四處奔走哀號?"
                         非 "我為何因仇敵的欺壓, 時常哀痛呢?"
                     2. My bones suffer mortal agony
                           應譯 "使我身心受痛苦煎熬" 非 "好像打碎我的骨頭"

59.  45:1 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
       新譯: 我的心裏美辭泉湧;
                 當我為王朗頌我的詩章之時,
                 我的舌頭就像老練作家的筆.
       原譯: 我心裏湧出美辭;
                 我論到我為王做的事,
                 我的舌頭是快手筆.
       英文: My heart is stirred by a noble theme
                  as I recite my verses for the king;
                  my tongue is the pen of a skillful writer.
       說明: 1. My heart is stirred by a noble theme
                     譯 "我的心裏美辭泉湧" 較 "我心裏湧出美辭" 雅達.
                2. as I recite my verses for the king
                      應譯 "當我為王朗頌我的詩章之時" 非 "我論到我為王做的事"
                3. my tongue is the pen of a skillful writer
                      應譯 "我的舌頭就像老練作家的筆" 非 "我的舌頭是快手筆"

60.   45:2-3 原譯有誤, 且欠通順簡潔工整, 應加潤飾改正.
        新譯: 地雖移動, 山沉海心,
                   狂濤怒吼, 白浪滔天,
                   山嶽震撼, 驚濤擊岸,
                   我們一點都不害怕.
        原譯: 所以地雖改變, 山雖搖動到海心,
                   其中的水雖匉匐翻騰,
                   山雖因海漲而戰抖,
                   我們也不害怕.
         英文: Therefore we will not fear, though the earth give way
                    and the mountains fall into the heart of the sea.
                     though its waters roar and foam
                     and the mountains quake with their surging.
          說明: 1. the earth give way 譯 "地雖移動" 較 "地雖改變" 切合原意.
                    2. the mountains fall into the heart of the sea.
                          應譯 "山沉海心" 非 "山雖搖動到海心"
                    3. its waters roar and foam
                          應譯 "狂濤怒吼, 白浪滔天" 非 "其中的水雖匉匐翻騰"
                    4. the mountains quake with their surging
                          應譯 "山嶽震撼, 驚濤擊岸" 非 "山雖因海漲而戰抖"

                                    荒漠甘泉經文新譯(4)
                                  (Streams in the Desert)

 Apr 1   經文: 伯13:15直譯
             新譯: 衪雖殺我, 我還要信靠衪, 並在他面前辯明我所行的.
             原譯: 他必殺我, 我雖無指望, 然而我在他面前還要辯明我所行的.
             英文: Though he slay me, yet will I hope in him; I will surely defend my ways to his face.

             經文: 提後1:12直譯
             新譯: 這就是為何我身受苦難, 也不以為恥. 因為我知道我所信的是誰,
                       也深信祂能確保我信靠祂的, 直到那日.
             原譯: 為這緣故, 我也受這些苦難, 然而我不以為恥. 因為知道我所信的是誰,
                       也深信他能保全我所交付他的, 直到那日.
             英文: That is why I am suffering as I am. Yet I am not ashamed, because I know whom
                  I have believed, and am convinced that he is able to guard what I have entrusted to him
                  for that day.
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    2      經文: 賽45:15
            新譯: 原譯甚佳
            原譯: 救主以色列的神啊, 你實在是自隱的神.
            英文: Truly you are a God who hides himsel, O God and Savior of Israel.
            附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

     3     經文: 賽24:15直譯
            新譯: 因此, 你們要在東方榮耀耶和華, 在眾海島高舉以色列神耶和華的名.
            原譯: 因此, 你們要在東方榮耀耶和華, 在眾海島榮耀耶和華以色列神的名.
            直譯: 你們要在火中榮耀耶和華…
            英文: Therefore in the east give glory to the Lord;
                      exalt the name of the Lord, the God of Israel, in the islands of the sea.
            附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

    4      新譯: 王下6:17
            原譯: 以利沙禱告: "耶和華啊, 求你打開他的眼目, 使能看見."
                     於是, 耶和華打開這僕人的眼目, 他就看見山上滿是火車火馬圍繞以利沙.
            直譯: 以利沙禱告說: "耶和華啊, 求你開這少年的眼目, 使他能看見."
                     耶和華開他的眼目, 他就看見滿山有火車火馬圍繞以利沙.
            英文: And Elisa prayed, "O Lord, open his eyes so he may see."
                      Then the Lord opened the servant's eyes,
                      and he look and saw the hills full of horses and chariots of fire all around Elisa.
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   5       經文: 王下4:4
            新譯: 然後, 進入家中, 把你和你兒子後面的門關上, 將油倒入所有油缸, 每缸滿了, 放在一邊.
            原譯: 回到家裏, 關上門, 你和你兒子在裏面, 將油倒在所有的器皿裏, 倒滿了的放在一邊.
            英文: Then go inside and shut the door behind you and your sons.
                      Pour oil into all the jars, and as each is filled, put it to one side.
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  6        經文: 哈2:1
                             新譯                                                          原譯
                      我站在瞭望臺,                                       我要站在守望所,
                      駐守在城樓上,                                       立在望樓上觀看,
                看耶和華會對我說甚麼,                        看耶和華對我說甚麼話,
                怎樣回答我向他的申訴.                        我可用甚麼話向他訴冤.
                                                           英文
                                            I will stand at my watch
                                   and station myself on the ramparts;
                                I will look to see what he will say to me,
                           and what answer I am to give to this complaint.
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    7        經文: 詩46:10直譯
                          新譯                                                                 原譯
         你們要安靜, 要知道我是神!                              你們要休息, 要知道我是神!
             我必在萬國中被高舉,                         直譯: (你們要安靜, 要知道我是神!)
                在全地上被尊崇.                                          我必在外邦中被尊崇,
                                                                                 在遍地上也被尊崇.
                                                         英文
                                    Be still, and know that I am God;
                                  I will be exalted among the nations,
                                        I will be exalted in the earth.
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   8     經文: 林後12:10
          新譯: 為基督的緣故, 我就以軟弱、凌辱、急難、逼迫、困苦為喜樂,
                    因我甚麼時候軟弱, 就甚麼時候剛強!
          原譯: 我為基督的緣故, 就以軟弱、凌辱、急難、逼迫、困苦為可喜樂的,
                  因我甚麼時候軟弱, 甚麼時候就剛強了!
          英文: That is why, for christ's sake, I delight in weaknesses, in insults, in hardships,
                    in persecutions, in difficuties. For when I am weak, then I am strong.
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   9     經文: 加6:14
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 但我斷不以別的誇口, 只誇我們主耶穌基督的十字架.
                    因這十字架, 就我而論, 世界已經釘在十字架上; 就世界而論, 我已經釘在十字架上.
          英文: May I never boast except in the cross of our Lord Jesus Christ,
                    through which the world has been crucified to me, and I to the world.
          附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 10     經文: 雅4:8
          新譯: 你們親近神, 神必親近你們.
                    罪人哪, 洗淨你們的手; 心懷二意的人哪, 潔淨你們的心.
          原譯: 你們親近神, 神就必親近你們.
                    有罪的人哪, 要潔淨你們的手; 心懷二意的人哪, 要清潔你們的心.
          英文: Come near to God and he will come near to you.
                    Wash your hands, you sinners, and purify your hearts, you double-minded.

          經文: 撒上1:15
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 哈拿回答說: "主啊, 不是這樣. 我是心裏愁苦的婦人, 清酒濃酒都沒有喝,
                    只是在耶和華面前傾心吐意.
          英文: "Not so, my Lord," Hanah replied, "I am a woman who is deeply troubled,
                     I have not been drinking wine or beer; I was pouring out my soul to the Lord.
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 11     經文: 太10:27
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 我在暗中告訴你們的, 你們要在明處說出來;
                    你們耳中所聽的, 要在屋頂宣揚出來.
          英文: What I tell you in the dark, speak in the daylight;
                    what is whispered in your ear, proclaim from the roofs.
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 12     經文: 路4:1-2
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 耶穌被聖靈充滿, 從約旦河回來, 聖靈將他引到曠野, 四十天受魔鬼的試探.
                    那些日子沒有吃甚麼, 日子滿了, 他就餓了.
          英文: Jesus full of the Holy Spirit, returned from the Jordan and was led by the Sprit
                    in the desert, where for forty days he was tempted by the devil. He ate nothing
                    during those days, and at the end of them he was hungry.
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 13     經文: 林前10:13
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 你們所遇見的試探, 無非是人所能受的. 神是信實的, 必不叫你們受試探過於
                    所能受的. 在受試探的時候, 總要給你們開一條出路, 叫你們能忍受得住.
          英文: No temptation has zeized you except what is common to man. And God is faithful;
                    he will not let you be tempted beyond what you can bear. But when you are tempted,
                    he will also provide a way out so that you can stand up under it.
          附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 14     經文: 約13:1
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 逾越節以前, 耶穌知道自己離世歸父的時候到了,
                    他既然愛世間屬自己的人, 就愛他們到底.
          英文: It was just before the Passover Feast. Jesus knew that the time had come for him
                    to leave the world and go to the Father. Having loved his own who were in the world,
                    he now showed them the full extent of his love.
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 15      經文: 詩119:42
           新譯: 因我一心信靠你的話,
                     就可回應羞辱我的人.
           原譯: 我就有話回答那羞辱我的,
                     因我依賴你的話.
           英文: then I will answer the one who taunts me,
                     for I trust in your word.
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 16      經文: 來11:8
           新譯: 亞伯拉罕因著信, 蒙召時遵命往將來得為業之地去, 即使他不知往哪裏去.
           原譯: 亞伯拉罕因著信, 蒙召的時候, 就遵命出去, 往將來得為業的地方去;
                     出去的時候, 還不知往哪裏去.
           英文: By faith Abraham, when called to go to a place he would later receive as his inheritance,
                     obeyed and went, even though he did not know where he was going.
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 17      經文: 伯12:9
           新譯: 原譯甚佳
           原譯: 看這一切, 誰不知道是耶和華的手做成的呢?
           英文: Which of all these does not know that the hand of the Lord has done this?
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 18      經文: 詩37:5
           新譯: 把你的道路交託耶和華,
                     並且信靠衪衪定必成全.
           原譯: 當將你的事交託耶和華,
                     並依靠他, 他就必成全.
           英文: Commit your way to the Lord;
                     trust in him and he will do this.
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 19      經文: 代上29:14
           新譯: 我算甚麼, 我的民算甚麼, 竟能如此慷慨奉獻?
                     因為萬物都從你而來, 我們只是把從你手賜的獻給你.
           原譯: 我算甚麼, 我的民算甚麼, 竟能如此樂意奉獻?
                     因為萬物都從你而來, 我們把從你而得的獻給你.
           英文: But who am I, and who are my people, that we should be able to give
                     as generously as this? Everything comes from you, and we have given you only
                     what comes from your hand.
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 20      經文: 羅8:6原文
           新譯: 罪人的心思是死; 聖靈的心思是生命平安.
           原譯: 體貼肉體的就是死; 體貼聖靈的乃是生命平安.
           原文: 思念肉體的就是死; 思念聖靈的乃是生命平安.
           英文: The mind of sinful man is death,
                     but the mind controlled by the Spirit is life and and peace;
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 21      經文: 羅4:21
           新譯: 原譯甚佳
           原譯: 且滿心相信神所應許的必能作成.
           英文: being fully persuaded that God had power to do what he had promised.
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 22      經文: 伯23:10
           新譯: 原譯甚佳
           原譯: 然而他知道我所行的路, 他試煉我之後, 我必如精金.
           英文: But he knows the way that I take; when he has tested me, I will come forth as gold.
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 23     經文: 何6:3
                          新譯                                                                原譯
               我們要認識耶和華,                                    我們務要認識耶和華,
               並且竭力去認識衪.                                        竭力追求認識他.
               衪的出現確如日出;                                        他出現確如晨光;
               衪的蒞臨就像冬雨,                                      他必臨到我們像甘雨,
               又像滋潤田地春雨.                                        像滋潤田地的春雨.
                                                              英文
                                        Let us acknowledge the Lord;
                                   let us press on to acknowledge him.
                               As surely as the sun rises, he will appear,
                                 he will come to us like the winter rains,
                                like the spring rains that water the earth.
                 附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 24   經文: 來11:1
        新譯: 原譯極佳
        原譯: 信就是所望之事的實底, 是未見之事的確據.
        英文: Now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see.
        附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 25   經文: 腓2:7-8
                             新譯                                            原譯
                         原譯極佳                                     反倒虛己,
                                                                       取了奴僕的形像,
                                                                         成為人的樣式.
                                                                         既有人的樣子,
                                                                          就自己卑微,
                                                                     存心順服, 以至於死,
                                                                         且死在十字架上.
                                                      英文
                                      but make himself nothing,
                               taking the very nature of a servant,
                                   being made in human likeness.
                           And being found in appearance as a man,
                                           he humbled himself
                                   and became obedient to death -
                                          even death on a cross!
                附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 26   經文: 林後1:5
        新譯: 原譯甚佳
        原譯: 我們既多受基督的苦楚, 就靠基督多得安慰.
        英文: For just as the sufferings of Christ flow over into our lives,
                  so also through Christ our comfort overflows.
        附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 27   經文: 帖前5:17
        新譯: 原譯甚佳
        原譯: 不住地禱告,
        英文: pray continually;
        附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 28   經文: 林後12:7
        新譯: 由於這極大啓示, 就讓撒但的差役, 在我肉體上插入一根刺折磨我, 免得我自高.
        原譯: 又恐怕我因所得的啓示甚大, 就過於自高, 所以有一根刺加在我肉體上,
                   就是撒但的差役要攻擊我, 免得我過於自高.
        英文: To keep me from becoming conceited because of these surpassingly great revelations,
                  there was given me a thorn in my flesh , a messenger of Satan, to torment me.
        附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 29   經文: 亞4:6
        新譯: 原譯甚佳
        原譯: 他對我說: "這是耶和華指示所羅巴伯的. 萬軍之耶和華說:
                 不是依靠勢力, 不是依靠才能, 是依靠我的靈方能成事.'
        英文: So he said to me, "This is the word of the Lord to Zerubbabel:
                  Not by might nor by power, but by my Spirit,' says the Lord Almighty.
        附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

 30   經文: 創41:4-7
        新譯: 原譯尚佳
        原譯: 這又醜陋又乾瘦的七隻母牛吃盡了那又美好又肥壯的七隻母牛. 法老就醒了.
                  他又腄著, 第二回做夢, 夢見一棵麥子長了七個穗子, 又肥大又佳美, 隨後又長了
                  七個穗子, 又細弱又被東風吹焦了. 這細弱的穗子吞了那七個又肥大又飽滿的穗子,
                  法老醒了, 不料是個夢.
         英文: And the cow that were ugly and guant are up the seven sleek. Then Pharaoh woke up.
                   He fell asleep again and had a second dream: Seven heads of grain , healthy and good,
                   were growing on a single stalk. After then, seven other heads of grain speouted -
                   thin and scorched by the east wind. The thin heads of grain swallowed up the seven
                   healthy, full heads. Then Pharoah woke up. It had been a dream.
          附記: 請同時閱讀本書釋經靈意, 獲益更大.

                                                                               (本月完)

                                                                         感謝主, 讚美主,
                                                                        一切榮耀歸我主,
                                                                         哈利路亞, 阿們!

                                                                       2020年4月30日

                         荒漠甘泉經文新譯(3)
                    (Streams in the Desert)

Mar 1     經文: 賽52:12
                        新譯                                                                 原譯
           但你們不會匆忙離開,                                     你們出來必不至急忙,
              也不會慌忙奔逃.                                               也不致奔逃.
         因耶和華會走在你們前頭;                              因為耶和華必在你們前頭行;
         以色列的神會作你們後盾.                               以色列的神必作你們的後盾.
                                                             英文
                                        But you will not leave in haste
                                                     or go in flight;
                                        for the Lord will go before you,
                                the God of Isreal will be your rear guard.

Note: 因心疾復發,入院近週,現漸康復,感謝主! 現續本佈樂格.

 2      經文: 出34:2-3
         新譯: 明日早晨要準備好了, 上西奈山, 在山頂上站在我面前. 不可有人與你同來,
                   山上也不得見人影, 甚至山前更不可有羊群牛群吃草.
         原譯: 明日早晨, 你要預備好了, 上西奈山, 在山頂上站在我面前. 誰也不可和你一同上去,
                   遍山都不可有人, 在山根也不可叫羊群牛群吃草.
         英文: Be ready in the morning, and and then come up on Mount Sinai. Present yourself
                   to me there on top of the mountain. No one is to come with you or be seen anywhere
                   on the mountain; not even the flocks and herds may graze in front of the mountain.

 3      經文: 詩66:6
                      新譯                                                         原譯
            祂把大海變為乾地,                                      他將海變成乾地,
            讓人安然徒步走過,                                        眾民步行過河,
          來吧! 讓我們因衪歡樂.                                 我們在那裏因他歡喜.
                                                      英文
                                 He turned the sea into dry land,
                           they passed through the waters on foot -
                                     come, let us rejoice in him.

 4      經文: 來6:12
         新譯: 我們並不要你們怠惰, 但要效法那些憑信心和忍耐承受應許的人.
         原譯: 並且不懈怠, 總要效法那些憑信心和忍耐承受應許的人.
         英文: We do not want you to become lazy, but to inmitate those who through faith
                   and patience inherit what has been promised.

 5      經文: 來12:3
         新譯: 你們要思想, 那忍受罪人壓制的人, 才不會變得疲憊灰心.
         原譯: 那忍受罪人這樣頂撞的, 你們要思想, 免得疲倦灰心.
         英文: Consider him who endured such opposition from sinful men,
                   so that you will not grow weary and lose heart.

  6     經文: 徒13:22
         新譯: 廢了掃羅後, 祂就選立大衛作他們的王, 並為他作見證:
                   我尋得耶西的兒子大衛, 他是合我心意的人, 凡事都遵行我的旨意.'
         原譯: 既廢了掃羅, 就選立大衛作他們的王, 又為他作見證說"
                   我尋得耶西的兒子大衛, 他是合我心意的人, 凡事要遵行我的旨意.'
         英文: After removing Saul, he made David their king. He testified concerning him:
                  'I have found David son of Jesses a man after my own heart;
                   he will do everything I want him to do.'

 7      經文: 林後7:5
         新譯: 當我們到了馬其頓時, 身體不寧, 每次都受侵擾 - 外有爭戰, 內心恐懼.
         原譯: 我們從前到了馬其頓的時候, 身體也不得安寧, 周圍遭患難, 外有爭戰, 內有懼怕.
         英文: For when we came into Macedonia, this body of ours had no rest, but we were harassed
                   at every turn - conflict on the out side, fears within.

 8      經文: 代上17:23-24
         新譯: 現在, 耶和華啊, 求你堅定你應許僕人和僕人家的話, 直到永遠. 並照你的應許行,
                   堅定你的應許, 使你的名永遠偉大, 這樣, 世人才會說: '萬軍之耶和華, 統治以色列
                   的神, 是以色列的神!' 你僕人大衛的家才能在你面前堅立.
          原譯: 耶和華啊, 你所應許僕人和僕人家的話, 求你堅定, 直到永遠, 照你所說的而行.
                   願你的名永遠堅立, 被尊為大, 說: '萬軍之耶和華是以色列的神, 是治理以色列的神!'
                   這樣, 你僕人大衛的家必在你面前堅立.
          英文: And now, Lord, let the promise you have made concerning your servant and his house
                    be established forever. Do as you promised, so that it will be established and that
                    your name will be great forever. Then men will say, 'The Lord Almighty, the God
                    over Isreal, is Isreal's God!' And the house of your servant David will be established
                    before you.

 9       經文: 太5:3
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 虛心(靈裏貧窮)的人有福了, 因為天國是他們的.
          英文: Blessed are the poor in spirit, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven.

10      經文: 來10:38直譯
          新譯: 但我的義人必因信得生, 他若退縮, 我就不喜歡他.
          原譯: 只是義人必因信得生(義人必因信而活), 他若退後, 我心裏就不喜歡他.
          英文: But my righteous one will live by faith.
                    And if he shrinks back, I will not be pleased with him.

11      經文: 書1:1-2
          新譯: 耶和華的僕人摩西死後, 耶和華曉諭摩西的副手嫩的兒子約書亞說: "我的僕人摩西
                    死了. 現在, 你和眾百姓要準備好過這約旦河, 往我要賜給以色列人的地去.
          原譯: 耶和華的僕人摩西死了以後, 耶和華曉諭摩西的幫手, 嫩的兒子約書亞說: "我的
                    僕人摩西死了. 現在你要起來, 和眾百姓過這約旦河, 往我所要給以色列人的地去.
          英文: After the death of Moses the servant of the Lord, the Lord said to Joshua son of Nun,
                    Moses' aide: "Moses my servant is dead. Now then, you and all these people, get ready
                    to cross the Jordan River into the land I am about to give to them - to the Israeites.

12      經文: 出10:13,16,19
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 摩西向埃及地伸杖, 那一晝一夜, 耶和華使東風颳在埃及地上. 到了早晨,
                   東風把蝗蟲颳了來.
                   於是法老急忙召了摩西和亞倫來, 說: "我得罪耶和華你們的神, 又得罪了你們."
                   耶和華轉了極大的西風, 把蝗蟲颳起, 吹入紅海, 在埃及的四境連一也沒有留下.
          英文: So Moses stretched out his staff over Egypt, and the Lord made an east wind blow across
                    the     land all that day and all that night. By morning the wind had brought the locusts;
                    Pharaoh quickly summoned Moses and Aaron and said, "I have sinned against the Lord
                    your God and against you.
                    And the Lord changed the wind to a very strong west wind, which caught up the locusts
                    and carried them into the Red Sea. Not a locust was left anywhere in Egypt.

13        經文: 啓15:3直譯
                    and sang the song of the servant of God and the song of the Lamb:
                      唱神僕人摩西的歌和羔羊的歌如下,
                       新譯                                       原譯                                     特譯
                   原譯甚佳                             主神全能者啊,                      主神全能者啊,
                                                        你的作為大哉, 奇哉!              你的作為大哉, 奇哉!
                                                               萬世之王啊!                         眾聖之王阿,
            你的道路義哉, 誠哉!          你的道途義哉, 誠哉!               你的方法義哉, 誠哉!
                                                           英文
                                 "Great and marvelous are your deeds,
                                              Lord God Almighty.
                                      Just and true are your ways,
                                               King of the ages.

14      經文: 太7:7
          新譯: 原譯甚佳
          原譯: 因為凡祈求的, 就得著; 尋找的, 就尋見; 叩門的, 就給他開門.
          英文: For everyone who asks receives; he who seeks finds;
                   and to him who knocks , the door will be opened.

15      經文: 賽41:14-15
                            新譯                                                               原譯
                       "不要害怕,                                   14 你這蟲雅各和你們以色列人,
                雅各小蟲, 小以色列啊!                                          不要害怕!
                    因我必會幫助你,"                                     耶和華說: 我必幫助你."
       耶和華你的救贖主, 以色列的聖者說.          你的救贖主就是以色列的聖者.
                  看哪, 我會使你成為                                    15 看哪, 我已使你成為
                   嶄新齒利的打穀機,                                      有快齒打糧的新器具;
                     把大山打得粉碎,                                       你要把山嶺打得粉碎,
                     把小山碎如糠秕.                                           使崗陵如同糠秕.
                                                            英文
                                     "Do not be afraid, O worm Jacob,
                                                    O little Israel,
                             for I myself will help you," declares the Lord
                                  your redeemer, the Holy one of Israel.
                                "See, I will make you a threshing sledge,
                                       new and sharp, with many teeth.
                             You will thresh the mountains and crush them,
                                           and reduce the hills to chaff.

16      經文: 路5:27-28
          新譯: 這事以後, 耶穌出去, 見一稅吏, 名叫利未, 坐在稅關,
                    就對他說: "跟我來!" 他立即起來, 撇下一切, 跟從他去了.
          原譯: 這事以後, 耶穌出去, 看見一個稅吏, 名叫利未, 坐在稅關上,
                    就對他說: "你跟我來!" 他就撇下所有的, 起來跟從了耶穌.
          英文: After this, Jesus went out and saw a tax collectorby the name of Levi sitting at his booth.
"Follow me," Jesus said to him, and Levi got up, left everything and followed him.

17      經文: 雅1:3-4(1-3與1.12同)
          新譯: 我的弟兄們, 你們面對各種試煉時, 都要視為真正喜樂; 因為你們知道, 信心一經試驗,
                    就生忍耐. 但忍耐必需有成, 使你們成熟完備, 毫無欠缺.
          原譯: 我的弟兄們, 你們落在百般試煉中, 都要以為大喜樂; 因為知道你們的信心,
                    經過試驗, 就生忍耐. 但忍耐也當成功, 使你們成全完備, 毫無欠缺.
          英文: Consider it pure joy, my brothers, whenever you face trials of many kinds,
                    because you know that the testing of your faith develops perseverance.
                    Perseverance must finish its work so that you may be mature and complete,
                    not lacking anything.

18 經文: 賽51:12
                             新譯                                                   原譯
                  惟有我, 安慰你們.                         惟有我, 是安慰你們的.
               你是誰, 竟怕必死世人,                   你是誰, 竟怕那必死之人,
                他們只不過是堆荒草.                       怕那要變如草的世人.
                                                       英文
                               I, even I, am he who comforts you.
                             who are you that you fear mortal men;
                               the sons of men , who are but grass,

19 經文: 賽59:15-16
                             新譯                                                    原譯
                         真理不見,                                           誠實少見,
                   離惡之人反成獵物.                                離惡的人反成掠物.
                         公正無存,                                那時, 耶和華看見沒有公平,
                     耶和華看見不悅.                                       甚不喜悅.
                  祂又見無人撥亂反正,                                  他見無人拯救,
                         詫異萬分.                                      無人代求, 甚為詫異,
                 乃以自己的膀臂拯救他,                        就用自己的膀臂施行拯救,
                  以自己的公義去扶持他.                               以公義扶持自己.
                                                             英文
                                        Truth is nowhere to be found,
                                and whoever shuns evil becomes a prey.
                                       The Lord looked and displeased
                                             that there was no justice.
                                         He saw that there was no one,
                        he was appalled that there was no one to intervene;
                                 so his own arm worked salvation for him,
                                 and his own righteousness sustained him.

20     經文: 詩118:14
         新譯: 耶和華是我的力量, 是我的詩歌, 也成与我的拯救.
         原譯: 耶和華是我的力量, 是我的詩歌, 他也成了我的拯救.
         英文: The Lord is my strength and my song;
                  he has become my salvation.

21     經文: 太9:29
         新譯: 然後, 耶穌摸他們的眼睛, 說: "就依你們的信, 成全你們."
         原譯: 耶穌就摸他們的眼睛, 說: "照著你們的信給你們成全了吧!"
         英文: Then he touched their eyes and said, "According to your faith will it be done to you;"

22     經文: 徒7:30-31, 34
         新譯: 原譯甚佳
         原譯: 過了四十年, 在西奈山的曠野, 有一位天使從荊棘火焰中向摩西顯現. 摩西見了
                  那異象, 便覺希奇, 正進前觀看的時候, 有主的聲音說: … 我的百姓在埃及所受的
                  困苦, 我實在看見了; 他們悲嘆的聲音, 我也聽見了. 我下來要救他們. 你來!
                  我要差你往埃及去.'
         英文: After forty years had passed, an angel appearedto Moses in the flames of a burning bush
              in the desert near Mount Sinai. When he saw this, he was amazed at the sight, As he went
              over to look more closely, he heard the Lord's voice:
              I have indeedseen the oppression of my people in Egypt. I have heard their groaning
              and have come down to set them free. Now come, I will send you back to Egypt.

23     經文: 代上26:27
         新譯: 他們將爭戰時奪得的戰利品分別為聖, 以位修理耶和華殿之用.
         原譯: 他們將爭戰時所奪的財物分別為聖, 以備修造耶和華的殿.
         英文: Some of the plunder taken in battle they dedicated for the repair of temple of the Lord.

24     經文: 創32:9, 11
         新譯: 原譯甚佳
         原譯: 雅各說: "耶和華我祖亞伯拉罕的神, 我父以撒的神啊, 你曾對我說: '回你本地
                  本族去, 我要厚待你.'… 求你救我脫離我哥哥以掃的手, 因為我怕他來殺我, 連妻子
                  帶兒女一同殺了.
         英文: Then Jacob prayed, "O God of my father Abraham, God of my father Isaac, O Lord,
               who said to me, 'Go back to your country and your relatives, and I will make you prosper,'
               Save me, I pray, from the hand of my brother Esau, for I am afraid he will come and
               attack me, and also the mothers with their children.

25   經文: 可12:42-44
       新譯: 有一個窮寡婦前來, 投入兩個很小的銅板, 只值一個辨士的零頭. 此時, 耶穌叫門徒來,
                說: "我實在告訴你們: 這窮寡婦投入庫裏的, 比所有的人更多. 因為, 他們只自財富中
                拿出一點投入, 而這寡婦卻是從窮困中捐出一切 - 靠以維生的都投入了.
       原譯: 有一個窮寡婦來, 往裏投了兩個小錢, 就是一個大錢. 耶穌叫門徒來, 說: "我實在
                告訴你們: 這窮寡婦投入庫裏的, 比眾人所投的更多. 因為, 他們都是自己有餘,
                拿出來投在裏頭, 但這寡婦是自己不足, 把她一切養生的投上了.
       英文: But a poor widow came and put in two very small copper coins, worth only a fraction
                of a penny. Calling his disciples to him, Jesus said, "I tell you the truth, this poor widow
                has put more into the treasury than all the others. They all gave out of their wealth;
                but she, out of her poverty, put in everything - all she had to live on.

26   經文: 可15:21
       新譯: 有一個古利奈人西門, 他是亞力山大和魯孚之父, 正好從鄉下來, 經過那地.
                他們就強迫他背耶穌的十字架.
       原譯: 有一個古利奈人西門, 就是亞力山大和魯孚的父親, 從鄉下來, 經過那地方.
                他們就勉強他同去, 好背著耶穌的十字架.
       英文: A certain man from Cyrene, Simon, the father of Alexander and Rufus, was passing by
                on his way in from the country, and they forced him to carry the cross.

27   經文: 來12:1-2
       新譯: 因此, 由於多如雲彩的見證人圍繞我們, 就當放下各種重擔, 除去極易纏累我們的罪,
                堅忍不拔, 奔跑擺在我們前頭的路程, 仰望為我們信心創始成終的耶穌. 祂因擺在前面
                的喜樂, 輕視羞辱, 忍受十字架的苦難, 坐在神寶座的右邊.
       原譯: 你們既有這許多的見證人, 如同雲彩圍繞著我們, 就當放下各種重擔, 脫去容易纏累
                我們的罪, 存心忍耐, 奔那擺在我們前頭的路程, 仰望為我們信心創始成終的耶穌.
                他因那擺在前面的喜樂, 就輕看羞辱, 忍受十字架的苦難, 便坐在神寶座的右邊.
       英文: Therefore, since we are surrounded by such a great cloud of witnesses, let us throw off
          everything that hinders and the sin that so easily entangles, and let us run with perseverance
          the race marked out for us. Let us fix our eyes on Jesus, the author and perfecter of our
          faith, who for the joy set before him endured the cross, scorning its shame, and sat down
          at the right hand of the throne of God.

28   經文: 書3:13(與2.11同)
       新譯: 當抬普天下主耶和華約櫃祭司的腳, 一踏入約旦河水裏, 往下流的水, 立被切斷成壘.
       原譯: 等到抬普天下主耶和華約櫃的祭司把腳站在約旦河水裏, 約旦河的水,
                就是從上往下流的水, 必然斷絕, 立起成壘.
       英文: And as soon as the priests who carry the ark of the Lord - the Lord of all the earth -
                set foot in the Jordan, its watersflowing dowbstream will be off and stand in a heap.

29   經文: 太6:28
       新譯: 你們何必為衣裳憂慮呢? 看哪! 野地的百合花是怎樣生長的, 花兒不勞也不紡.
       原譯: 何必為衣裳憂慮呢? 你想, 野地的百合花怎麼長起來, 它也不勞苦, 也不紡織.
       英文: And why do you worry about clothes? See how the lilies of the field grow.
                They do not labor or spin.

30   經文: 賽50:11
                           新譯                                                                     原譯
                    現在你們點火,                                                      凡你們點火,
                    點起熊熊火炬,                                              用火把圍繞自己的,
                   在點燃的火炬下,                                          可以行在你們的火焰裏,
                   走在自己火光中.                                            並你們所點的火把中.
                  你們從我手中必得:                                              這是我乎所定的.
                  躺下身子飽受折磨.                                           你們必躺在悲慘之中.
                                                             英文
                                        But now, all you who light fires
                            and provide yourselves with flaming torches,
                                        go walk in the light of your fires
                                   and of the torches you have set ablaze.
                               This is what you shall receive from my hand:
                                           You will lie down in torment.

31   經文: 來10:38
       新譯: 原譯甚佳
       原譯: 只是義人必因信得生;
               他若退後, 我心裏就不喜歡他.
       英文: But my righteous one will by faith.
                And if he shrinks back, I will not be pleased with him.

(本月完)

感謝主, 讚美主,
一切榮耀歸我主,
哈利路亞, 阿們!

2020年三月31日